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Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from debio
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I just wanted to let you know that I LOVE this story. I an looking forward to further installments. :) You may have a pass at answering this one.
Review By [debio] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from InsanitySorrow
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I was glad you update this cause this is one of my favorite story where all the Scoobies is a family and know each other since they was young. And I doubted the gang will face similar conflict like the Canon had considering the bond they had is much stronger and they are more stable than their canon counterpart. Interesting to see if they somehow manage to meet their Canon counterpart and their respective reaction like Faith: "I slept with Xander?", or Xander: "I date Cordy!?" or the Canon Reaction: "We are all siblings!??" (which quite funny considering all the drama they had with each other and as family they are less reason you will consider other possible lover, not like they related by blood, just you been together as long and thought each other as sibling the dating part doesn't really hold appeal to you.)

By the way, can you give a list or at least sketch how old each of the siblings as so far cause a little confuse here.
Review By [InsanitySorrow] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from ebony
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I am loving that you updated somay stories because I have been catching up all weekend. Can't wait for more.
Review By [ebony] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from SpacedCadet
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When it’s they’re time, it’s they’re time.”

That should be "their" (belonging to them) not "they're" (they are). Despite the apostrophe, "they're" is not the possessive.

Now that I'm done nattering about grammar, thanks for getting caught up with a bunch of stories I was afraid you had abandoned!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Jaylynn
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So happy to see updates for this!
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from (Current Donor)Katrina
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Lovely fic so far. I'm just totally enjoying it. Thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Lyd
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I don't need you to write back when I review. Heck, I'd much rather you spend the time doing what you like and getting yourself psyched up to write. Especially if its Den Mother. I love love love this fic. I mean, Love, like I want to write bad poetry about its eyes. Total girl crush on your Joyce by the way. She and Jack are adorable. And I hope Tara is okay. In some ways her position is the most tenuous. Living in an abusive situation is dangerous but adding magic just makes it that much more dangerous. I worry about Jon a little. He is one of those characters that is hard to give a happy ending to because he really is a man out of time. Okay, now I'm going to go back to the beginning and read the whole thing again.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Angelskuuipo
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I hope life has calmed down for you.

Yay for the continuation! As always, I'm looking forward to whatever you grace us with next. :)
Review By [Angelskuuipo] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from AndreaMaine
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I loved what you wrote to this chapter and before. I so want to see how this goes and how well you mesh the storylines together. Too bad Charlie didn't get to be, but I think Jake's happy with the family he's got and has yet to have. I wonder how Buffy would handle Anubis, Osiris, Ba'al, and the rest of the Goa'uld rogues gallery. Then there's the Ori and other bad guys that may come out to play from her dad's secret life. That's on top of all the supernatural bad guys out there. It seems to me that the O'Neill family's real family business is saving the Earth and its various people. Since Chris would have been Piper's second child I wonder just how he came to be since he's part White Lighter and perhaps the reason he's with the O'Neills and has become one is that his brothers and sisters are his charges.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from joshlamont
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^^ As always, I thoroughly enjoy these updates! I can't wait for more
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from mikexxxyyy
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Thanks for the update, really interesting crossover. So glad that Spike made an appearance, I hate stories where he is left out. Such an important part of the SG.
Review By [mikexxxyyy] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Bobboky
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Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Morgomir
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Great (massive) update. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Shinkan
Review:
I really like how your writing this story it's great, but I want to know where is Andrew?
anyways great story up date again soon...
Comments from author:
Thanks. If you'll remember, Joyce doesn't know about Andrew. He's younger than Buffy was and he didn't really arrive on the scene until the sixth season, well after Joyce died. That said, I have plans, yes I do...
Review By [Shinkan] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from NeedlessNoodles
Review:
Not sure how Meridith fits. The rest, still pretty fun.
Comments from author:
She's just one more step into the cray-cray that is this 'verse. Glad you liked it, though.
Review By [NeedlessNoodles] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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