Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from kalahari
If you ever rewrite the story, try and leave Chris, Sirius and Harry out. They are currently just filler persons, which do not contribute to the story. You even might want to leave all references to Rowling's wand wielder universe and/or the Charmed universe out.
You also might want to leave Meredith, Ellis and Abbey out, but that would depend on the sub story about Meredith.
I am very interested in how the main story part with Joyce having some knowledge about what might come works out. Especially with the cloud of a brain tumor hanging over her, and the large probability of her dying on it or its complications.
Review By [kalahari
] • Date [16 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from thundever
Great chaps and story, brilliant interactions, hope Jon and Jack can get along ok, What is Jon considered legally by the school, nephew, foster or son?, please update soon, what ages are all the characters?
Review By [thundever
] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from DofEire
Another cookie of fiction-y goodness! Yayy!
Review By [DofEire
] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from RavenWoodbane
Just spent the last three days re-re-reading all your stories, and they were just as awesome as I remembered. You said "I just suck at interacting with people sometimes", Doesn't everyone? I swear the next generation will all work from home and interact over technology only we are a socially awkward society ... Anyway I love this story I love the xover btw the different tv series. Um this is just a question but would it be a possibility if a Btvs/Teen wolf xover??? With Xander as a main character??? If not that's ok but those two series are like made for each other and I haven't found any that are awesome yet and you kind of make every character awesome so ..... Well anyway hoping for more of any update really !!!! Thnx
Review By [RavenWoodbane
] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from garrycooper
Loved the story. Surprized to see the cheaper by the dozen house. Keep up the good work.
Review By [garrycooper
] • Date [20 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from KyrissDraconis
Love this story!!! I hope your life stays sane and you can continue to write. Please keep up the awesomeness!
Review By [KyrissDraconis
] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from tchizek
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from GoddessNyx
This is wonderful. I hope that your hiatus wasn't because of something bad happening to you or your loved ones. I'm glad you're back.
Review By [GoddessNyx
] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Gideon
So now they have the house that they need to have room for everyone and all their secrets have been shared. Now they just need to worry about what might actually happen! There is always the possibility that some problems could come from one of the other dimensions and catch even Joyce by surprise!
Review By [Gideon
] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from slmncpm
i'm thankful that you came back! *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm
] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from debio
I just wanted to let you know that I LOVE this story. I an looking forward to further installments. :) You may have a pass at answering this one.
Review By [debio
] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from InsanitySorrow
I was glad you update this cause this is one of my favorite story where all the Scoobies is a family and know each other since they was young. And I doubted the gang will face similar conflict like the Canon had considering the bond they had is much stronger and they are more stable than their canon counterpart. Interesting to see if they somehow manage to meet their Canon counterpart and their respective reaction like Faith: "I slept with Xander?", or Xander: "I date Cordy!?" or the Canon Reaction: "We are all siblings!??" (which quite funny considering all the drama they had with each other and as family they are less reason you will consider other possible lover, not like they related by blood, just you been together as long and thought each other as sibling the dating part doesn't really hold appeal to you.)
By the way, can you give a list or at least sketch how old each of the siblings as so far cause a little confuse here.
Review By [InsanitySorrow
] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from ebony
I am loving that you updated somay stories because I have been catching up all weekend. Can't wait for more.
Review By [ebony
] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from SpacedCadet
When it’s they’re time, it’s they’re time.”
That should be "their" (belonging to them) not "they're" (they are). Despite the apostrophe, "they're" is not the possessive.
Now that I'm done nattering about grammar, thanks for getting caught up with a bunch of stories I was afraid you had abandoned!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Jaylynn
So happy to see updates for this!
Review By [Jaylynn
] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated