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Review of chapter "Convoy" from Mcspender
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Glory was a hard costumer indeed, but Eris?.
As a proud Pope of the Discordians, let me tell ya, she's quite the Mega nasty original A grade, accept-no-substitutes B I T C H =S =P.
They're in for a biiig bunch of trouble =0!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Convoy" from AllenPitt
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Everyone knows Eris is so much nicer than the goddess of bad home perms.
Comments from author:
Hell comes in all sorts of hair styles I'll have you know!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Convoy" from HananeELmokkadem
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Loved it, update soon. Will the A-team make an appearance soon? I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
The A-Team already showed up in Only HUMInt. It's too soon for a reappearance.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from grd
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Buffy and military speak just sounds so right. Her after action reports must be a joy to read.
Review By [grd] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from ianquest
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An excellent start, & I'm delighted to see more in this brilliant series!

One thing I was a little bemused by was the interaction between the lieutenant & 'Chief Warrant Officer' Buffy in Chapter 7. He introduces himself to her like they're equivalent ranks, & she addresses him like she's the same or higher rank than him, assuring him she's not going to 'take away' his men. A Warrant Officer, even a CWO, is an officer above the senior-most enlisted ranks, but below even an O-1 (lieutenant). While WOs can & do serve in command capacities, their primary role as technical specialists is 'to provide leadership generally only within their specific specialised field', to paraphrase a US Marine Corps book I've got.

While any lieutenant worth his rank pins would never dream of dismissing or disrespecting a CWO, I was very surprised by the timbre of their interaction, and that the Lt. so calmly accepted Buffy's speech. Is the reason for this going to be revealed later, as well as why Buffy & Joe's ranks have been so dramatically & mysteriously changed for this assignment?

Other than that tiny quibble, great to see more, and great work on the update speed! I look forward to reading more as fast as you can churn it out! :)
Comments from author:
Oh I know the difference between WO and Commisioned officers. However, the Lieutenant had received orders that Buffy was 'In Charge' . Also this is a Military Police investigation and as Buffy currently is acting as an MP Chief Warrant this does qualify as the 'specific specialized field'.
Review By [ianquest] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from JoeDineen
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LOL, I look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from Iceflame
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Quote:

"So we're looking for a crimescene in the middle of one of the most empty deserts in Iraq?"

"Yup. And potential bioweapons as well. This is why you signed up right?"

:Quote

Somehow I think the answer to that would be 'nope. I signed up for all the pretty lady nurses'
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from Eureka
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LOL You had me laughing over this chapter. SOME know who and what she is, but most don't!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
Love it! Love the fast updates, please update soon?
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from LordSchmodder
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LOL.
That's why you signed up...^^
I like.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from AllenPitt
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Yes, there's a space on the form where you check the "hopes to work with bioweapons" question. Urk. Sounds like this one will be extra nasty even for the Buffster. Still, as long as she doesn't find a giant stone circle & start tapping coordinates into it, she should be fine!
Comments from author:
Other people do StarGate X-Overs very well and a lot of them are much better writers than I am. To me it's the challenge of merging the out-of the-way stuff with Buffy and crew that's fun. You should know by now that I very rarely go for an obvious crossover.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
Loved it! I love reading this series, every time I think you can't possibly come up with something better then what I've just read, you prove me wrong. Good job! Hope you update soon because I can't wait to see what happens next.
-X- Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from AllenPitt
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I'm sure this recon will go well...not. At least she isn't alone, & has a competent partner. The after action report on all this will make great reading, I'm sure.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Seems like you are on a roll.
I like this.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Not really a roll, just got inspired a couple of months ago and have been churning out text. Keeps me from thinking about my unfinished stuff actually...
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from Eureka
Review:
So been dead for a while huh? Vamp or Zombie....mixed with what?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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