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Review of chapter "Cards on the Table" from AllenPitt
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That went well. Ok, Exorcist. What possible harm could an immaterial demon do, though? Heh. So, Ethan is working for Sebastian as an independent contractor? .....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Graveyard" from AllenPitt
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at least they're well armed and prepared for the weird stuff. More than the earlier team had.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Graveyard" from (Current Donor)vladt
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fine tale, thank you for the enjoyable read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Clean" from ScorpioP
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I enjoyed the shoutout to the Lost Boys. Great little movie in its day, although it was no Buffy. Keep up the amusing work!
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Clean" from slmncpm
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i do so love the nod to one of my favorite movies! *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Clean" from AllenPitt
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"Slayer, comma, the" as she put it to Riley... Ethan will be surprised. I wonder how he got out of Area 51? ("to a facility in Nevada..." ( I don't recall the name of the state, might have been another one) when last seen. Nice to see some villain crossover-age.
Comments from author:
He didn't get captured until season 4 in the series. No Initiative, so no stuck in a box in Nevada.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Clean" from Eureka
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COOL! I LOVE that movie! Thank you for the shout-out to them. So Ethan is in on this..should have known.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Convoy" from Rich
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Eris, Goddess of discord (I think); a genuine mythological God, as opposed to a refugee from a hell dimension that nobody has actually ever heard of. Or possibly a Goauld ? Are we heading into an SG-1 crossover here?
Review By [Rich] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Convoy" from Eureka
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Good job. So zombies with upgrades huh?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Convoy" from Mcspender
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Glory was a hard costumer indeed, but Eris?.
As a proud Pope of the Discordians, let me tell ya, she's quite the Mega nasty original A grade, accept-no-substitutes B I T C H =S =P.
They're in for a biiig bunch of trouble =0!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Convoy" from AllenPitt
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Everyone knows Eris is so much nicer than the goddess of bad home perms.
Comments from author:
Hell comes in all sorts of hair styles I'll have you know!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Convoy" from HananeELmokkadem
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Loved it, update soon. Will the A-team make an appearance soon? I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
The A-Team already showed up in Only HUMInt. It's too soon for a reappearance.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from grd
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Buffy and military speak just sounds so right. Her after action reports must be a joy to read.
Review By [grd] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from ianquest
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An excellent start, & I'm delighted to see more in this brilliant series!

One thing I was a little bemused by was the interaction between the lieutenant & 'Chief Warrant Officer' Buffy in Chapter 7. He introduces himself to her like they're equivalent ranks, & she addresses him like she's the same or higher rank than him, assuring him she's not going to 'take away' his men. A Warrant Officer, even a CWO, is an officer above the senior-most enlisted ranks, but below even an O-1 (lieutenant). While WOs can & do serve in command capacities, their primary role as technical specialists is 'to provide leadership generally only within their specific specialised field', to paraphrase a US Marine Corps book I've got.

While any lieutenant worth his rank pins would never dream of dismissing or disrespecting a CWO, I was very surprised by the timbre of their interaction, and that the Lt. so calmly accepted Buffy's speech. Is the reason for this going to be revealed later, as well as why Buffy & Joe's ranks have been so dramatically & mysteriously changed for this assignment?

Other than that tiny quibble, great to see more, and great work on the update speed! I look forward to reading more as fast as you can churn it out! :)
Comments from author:
Oh I know the difference between WO and Commisioned officers. However, the Lieutenant had received orders that Buffy was 'In Charge' . Also this is a Military Police investigation and as Buffy currently is acting as an MP Chief Warrant this does qualify as the 'specific specialized field'.
Review By [ianquest] • Date [3 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from JoeDineen
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LOL, I look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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