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Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from LordSchmodder
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LOL.
That's why you signed up...^^
I like.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reinforcements" from AllenPitt
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Yes, there's a space on the form where you check the "hopes to work with bioweapons" question. Urk. Sounds like this one will be extra nasty even for the Buffster. Still, as long as she doesn't find a giant stone circle & start tapping coordinates into it, she should be fine!
Comments from author:
Other people do StarGate X-Overs very well and a lot of them are much better writers than I am. To me it's the challenge of merging the out-of the-way stuff with Buffy and crew that's fun. You should know by now that I very rarely go for an obvious crossover.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from HananeELmokkadem
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Loved it! I love reading this series, every time I think you can't possibly come up with something better then what I've just read, you prove me wrong. Good job! Hope you update soon because I can't wait to see what happens next.
-X- Hanane
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from AllenPitt
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I'm sure this recon will go well...not. At least she isn't alone, & has a competent partner. The after action report on all this will make great reading, I'm sure.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Seems like you are on a roll.
I like this.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Not really a roll, just got inspired a couple of months ago and have been churning out text. Keeps me from thinking about my unfinished stuff actually...
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from Eureka
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So been dead for a while huh? Vamp or Zombie....mixed with what?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Autopsy" from Inoeth
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Very fun. Thank you for updating so often. happy new year.

as far as the chapters themselves- they're a bit short and i honestly wouldn't mind a little more suspense to keep the interest as high as possible.

other than that, keep up the good work and keep on updating
Comments from author:
I have an update of a 1000 words or so every day. I could do one 5000 word update a week instead? Nah, I want to finish this.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from Eureka
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Happy New Year!
So Bioweapons being used here? So not of the good.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from AllenPitt
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Havent' seen a combo of science & supernatural since the Initiative. Ouch. Can Buffy call on a magic expert at some point, if needed?
On the other hand they hardly need to investigate, sounds like whatever they're after is also after them. Which indicates a leak somewhere, maybe?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Practical Matters" from McGurrin
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Fun, I like it, I also glad for the high update rate.
Review By [McGurrin] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Practical Matters" from AllenPitt
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After checking out the crime scene, they each need to send info to their respective backups/research people.,,, I wonder if Prof. Walsh had someone she worked with? Based on that scene of the Init heads watching a video of the destruction of the base, I'd guess a lot of their important info/files were preserved offsite.
At least Buffy now has gov. funding backing her up. Better than using a major cosmetics company (joke-Spike's comment on waking up in the Init).
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meetings" from Inoeth
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I've been reading your Buffy in the military with crossovers series and I have to say that i am enjoying them quite a bit. They work well both as freestanding fics and as part of the overall story. I really wish you would expand the story- showing what it was like for the training for Buffy and how she hid that she was super powered during basic and all that, perhaps show the development of friendships between Buffy and other in the military and how Buffy changes from being extremely anti-authority to accepting the orders from the military. Also, I'd like to see you show how she is truly able to change mind-sets from never killing humans no matter what to be able to mentally do so. (at least in the earlier seasons of Buffy- it was only season 5 when she killed the Knights attacking her and dawn that she started killing humans)

I'd also love to see some side-stories of Faith's transformation to sanity and working with Giles with a few chapters here and there on how Willow and Xander move on in their lives without Buffy, without most dangers and all that.
Comments from author:
These are Buffy stories not Faith stories. If it becomes necessary to go over Faith's transformation, I will. Also basic is boring unless it's directed by Ivan Reitman or Stanley Kubrick.

As for the killing mindset. That's one of the things they try to indoctrinate soldiers with in basic training. Most of the time it works. I will be going into it more in this story actually because of the crossover character's personality.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meetings" from tomfo
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Yay another military option story, from the title and the 2nd chapter it looks like they are dealing with some type of possessing spirits, I am kinda imagining something like a cross between eyghon and the red mist from john carpenters ghosts of mars. Buffy keeps getting real lucky finding just the right kinda backup for the missions too. I'm looking forward to more hopefully soon.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meetings" from Walegrin
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I am enjoying this greatly despite not having read the preceeding stories.

Is PFC Milgram in anyway related to this Milgram? - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stanley_Milgram
Review By [Walegrin] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meetings" from AllenPitt
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The driver isn't a secret ninja captain, at least? Boy is he in for a fun ride. Good force mix though. It's weird seeing Buffy deployed in action, with no watcher to do the research. I guess she's all grown up now. So... brain eating zombies? Or, to look on the bright side, maybe a fortune in Spanish doubloons? ("Some Assembly Required")...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [29 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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