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Review of chapter "Chapter 21." from DesitaniaF
Review:
the only problems I've had with your stories are that your characters keep saying "like" and "totally" way too much. Even characters that are not from modern California.
Comments from author:
To be honest its only done for comic effect and as for Kirstie as she only had a couple of words to say in one episode we can't really claim to know how she talks.

Hope you soldier on with it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21." from PATM
Review:
Let the Mayhem begin! Those Ray H'rs are more combat practice for Dawn (big fan).
Comments from author:
The skeletons will 'die' in an unusual way!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21." from Cordyfan
Review:
Our little Dawn killed a Hydra all by herself - no Slayer required! Pity it didn't have a chance to eat Kirstie and Xander first, but hopefully you have another fate in store for them...

I'd forgotten about the Children of the Hydra's Teeth.

Good chapter again.
Comments from author:
Well it was only a rubber model!

How could you forget about the Children of the Hydra's Teeth? They were the best bit of the film!!!

A fate for Kirstie and Xander? We'll see...

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 21." from MarcusRowland
Review:
[pedantry] How does a skeleton scream? Not exactly supplied with lungs etc... [/pedantry]

I notice you don't say who the skeletons are attacking.
Comments from author:
Skeletons v Dawn and Cordy!

Skeleton Scream!
Yes, I quite agree and I watched that bit several times to make sure I wasn't hearing things. In the film just as the skels launch themselves at Jason and his mates, they scream (the skeletons that is).

Strange but true!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20." from PATM
Review:
Kirstie used our heroines to get her jewelry back to the city I'm thinkin' and things go very badly afterwards. The Fleece would be the wrong direction to go but who could blame them? Their dander is up and it is not the flaky kind, payback is two beotches!
Comments from author:
A large shinny expencive object would be hard for either of them to resist even if they hadn't been 'betrayed' by Xander.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Yup, Xena and Gabrielle in the making. But which is which?
Comments from author:
I'd go with Dawn for Xena, which makes Cordy the side-kick...hmm?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20." from batzulger
Review:
Technically Erishkagal lost custody of hell when she got married to Nergal...Not like I've been studying up on Mesopotamian mythology recently or anything.

Great story as always Dave!
Comments from author:
There's always those pesky technicalities!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20." from Cordyfan
Review:
So the golden fleece? Jason will get a nasty shock when he arrives and finds it's already been nicked by Dawn and Cordy. Of course, there's the little matter of the hydra to get past... Hopefully it'll eat Kirstie (and maybe Xander, too - I was never too fond of the canon version, but this one's worse).

Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Hydra's coming soon to a fleece near you!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [5 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19." from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
So, is this Xander from a Cordyless universe, or did Kirsty's spell make him forget the "wrong" girl.
Comments from author:
This is a Xander from a reality where he never met Cordy for one reason or another, it doesn't really matter for the plot. Perhap's Cordy's mom and dad sent her to a private school. I often wondered what Cordy was doing at Sunnydale High if her people were well-off.

Cheers.
D.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19." from NutsContract
Review:
Okay, so maybe this DawnXander pairing is not as sure as I thought it might be, since he doesn't remember Cordelia. And how can he not remember her? I'm confused. Is there a point in the Buffy series where everyone forgets her and I just can't remember, or is it something else? Anyway, glad you updated and looking forward to the next chapter!!
Comments from author:
Okay, everyone is from a slightly different reality, this Xander never met Cordy until now its all confusing and delin=berately designed that way. I mean you wouldn't want the charcters having an easy ride would you?

As soon as I've typed this I'm updating.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Now that's an odd thing to be missing from Xander's memory - is he from the World Without Shrimp or something?
Comments from author:
Is a world without Cordy so strange or is Cordy a universal constant? Now there's a frightening thought! No in Xander's reality he and Cordy never met.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19." from Cordyfan
Review:
So we either have a Xander who's under a spell, or one from a dimesnion where he didn't know Cordy, but did know Dawn (so we can't even blame the monk's spell).

With her collar removed, is Cordy officially free?

Good chapter
Comments from author:
Xanders from No-Cordy-world or they never met.

Good point about the collar, I think on freeing a slave you had to register them as free and pay a small fee for the documentation. Now that's in Rome and Roman held territory. Else were I think all Dawn needs to do is remove the collar and say, 'Hey Cordy, you're free.'

Its a legal grey area!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18." from NutsContract
Review:
Xander!! Xander!! OH MY GOD!!! Unless this is Xander from season 8, I don't see him falling for Dawnie so easily. It takes him a loooong time to get over the fact that she's just Buffster's baby sister. But whatever, if you make it work, you make it work. :) Please update soon!!
Comments from author:
So not Xander from 'S8' (I never read the comics and I'm unlikely to). This is probably a Xander from late season 6 or early season 7.

Next update tonight, if I remember!!!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18." from Cutiepie
Review:
Did I read that correctly that Xander (or at least A Xander) is back then as well? Kirsty doesn't know it (yet) but she has much more to potentially lose to Cordie than to Dawn. Depending on when Xander came from, he might still love Cordie, or at least consider her a good friend, and now has the status that he lacked in Sunnydale. And then again, Cordie may well attempt to KILL Xander at first sight.
Comments from author:
Well Cordy left Xander after seeing him kiss Willow so I think his life will be counted in seconds!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18." from Cordyfan
Review:
Cordy will have to try to keep a close rein on Dawn's hero complex, before it gets them both into trouble (and probably already has).

Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Trouble hangs around these two like a bad smell!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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