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The Heroine in the Cemetery

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Review of chapter "The Heroine" from Hecatonchires
Review:
I liked this, but thought it felt rushed. You could write a longer, multi-chapter story using this as your plot outline, with more dialogue and description.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I could write more, but I like it the way it is.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
VERY creepy - and Brennan is never going to be able to fit it into her worldview; I suspect that some counselling sessions with Sweets would follow.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And, yeah, there's more than one reason I put this in Booth's PoV. And, yeah, that's why Sweets got read in.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I've never seen an episode of BONES...but the story was great.
Comments from author:
I loved the first season and I like most of the rest...Glad you enjoyed it, anyway. :)
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Heroine" from LordSchmodder
Review:
I don't know too much about Bones, but that was very nice story.
Thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it even if you don't recognize the fandom.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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