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A Fire Shall Burn

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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lillyb
Review:
This is a very, very good story. Smart, well written, and very well executed.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [14 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from desertcoyote
Review:
Ugh Willow... you better pull through for your "brother".
Review By [desertcoyote] • Date [14 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Looks like is is going to be inter sting. I'll have to keep an eye on it.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [14 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Loving the build and dramatic tension in this one Bear. Intriguing material. Strong, imaginative visuals mixed with vivid prose making for a very strong story. Nice callback with the mayor to some of the little events in Angel... You've got a real knack for blending what we know is coming with what you're crafting in your works of fiction. I'm interested to see what you've got planned with the council and Sam Zabuto. More intriguing, I don't think I've seen much done with druidic traditions in many fics before. It'll be fun to see what you've got planned.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [14 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Amberdrake
Review:
Fascinating. I'm liking the slow build up, though I could wish your Buffy was more willing to stake Angelus. Given the circumstances I don't feel she'd be quite so forgiving. Not that she shouldn't want to bring him back, just that she'd be seriously considering killing him as well. But that's a minor quibble. The story's great.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [14 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AkashaDrake
Review:
One minor flaw that I saw to fix. It should be "SEO AN TINE CHOISRICHTE" not "SED AN TINE CHOISRICTHE" this is the is Sierra echo Oscar, not Sierra echo delta.

Otherwise, a very good chapter, and an excellent teaser for the next.

A male, celtic derived, god derived Slayer, from the sounds of things, and it's Xander. Appropriate enough
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [14 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written portrait of a teenage girl and her priorities. I hoping Willow will surprise me and disagree with Buffy.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
interesting
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Wow. This is awesome. I love very much. It flows wonderfully and you really got dru down. I'm a manic dru fan so when shes done right I gotta give kudos. Poor Xander but also yay! Go him taking out spike while hurt. Woot!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Loatroll
Review:
Very interesting stuff! Looking forward to more.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Hanzo
Review:
great
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well done build-up with Angel and a determined Xander.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from JonnyNapalm
Review:
Loving the slow build on this on this story Bear. I started following your material with Threshkreen Harris and have been thoroughly impressed. Every time I see a fic title with your name as the author, I know that I'll be going into a interesting character study with some really good plotting. Thanks for sharing all your hard work with us.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from djhardim
Review:
Pretty good. I doubt that Travers is the first person to edit a Watcher's report. It makes you wonder how accurate their records really are.

One note - The senior paramedic answered in a crisp, professional tone. “White male, mid to late teens. Someone worked him over pretty good. Possible concussion, suspected broken ribs and multiple lacerations and burns. We’ve put two bags into him and his blood pressure is still low and his pulse weak.”

The paramedic didn't mention Xander's broken foot.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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