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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from norgco
Review:
Good.

If Angelus' reading of the situation is correct - knocking out a vampire is beyond Xanders capacity - then Xander is ALREADY more than human. Of course it might just be the precise circumstances that made it possible.
Comments from author:
It was the circumstances that made it possible for Xander to best Spike, Spike was crippled and taken by surprise while Xander was running on Adrenalin and desperation. Angelus's reaction and his conclusion was due to his own arrogance, the fact that vampires are not the most trustworthy creatures and that he always under-estimates Xander.
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [norgco] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great sense of helplessness and frustration.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very interesting beginning. I like stories with an active Kendra and this seems to be a good one. Nice job with every-ones' characters. I never liked Angel when he was on BtVS and hated the whole "star crossed lovers" BS, but we usually forget Buffy was only 17 and Angel made her feel some safety since he was nearly as strong as the Slayer. But I hope the capture of Xander and the arrival of Kendra gets her head out of her ... duffel bag and the Chosen Two dust some vampire butts. I look forward to reading more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
Review:
Personally, I don't think there's any way that Buffy can get over her obsession for necrophilia, so Xander's on his own until Kendra can get a feel for the town. Cordelia and Janna are about the only ones that would want Xander back and Angel/Angelus dusted at this point; Giles is Buffy's lapdog, Oz has no real interest in getting back a possible threat to his having Willow for his own, and Willow... Willow /might/ wake up out of B.S. this-is-so-romantic-and-tragic-that-Buffy-loves-a-corpse attitude, but it goes against everything she's been pushing for the last couple of years, and I honestly don't think she can change at this point.

Yes, it's her Xander, but she's proven over and over that she'll back Buffy over him, so I just don't know.

The problem is, the longer it takes for them to act - and it will, Buffy's going to argue the Soul thing to everyone again, while Cordelia leads the 'Dust'em All And Get Xander Back' coalition - the worse Xander has it, and even his Primal and Soldier influenced stamina, stubbornness, and resiliency are not going to be enough against three Master Vampires wanting to make him and his friends suffer. This being the Hellmouth and Xander being Chaos' favored, I'm thinking there's going to be dark times ahead for everyone that hurt him as well as those that didn't even realize he was missing for days...
Review By [trongod] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Greywizard
Review:
Nicely done. Everyone is completely in character for this part of season two, but I think/hope that the Fang Gang is going to be very sorry that they stayed in town, in the very near future.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
An interesting beginning, and one that can go many different ways.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I have a few more chapters in the works but at the moment I'm concentrating on my other stories.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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