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Review of chapter "Meanwhile in hell..." from WolfWriter
Review:
Huh.

Hell froze over? In how many strata? All the way to the bottom?

This was cool (I'm sorry about that, but I couldn't think of another word that fit.)

A girl could almost feel sorry for the poor schmo's in Hell.

Almost.

*g*.
Comments from author:
in one of them. the others felt a dip in temperature, but that hell is the one susceptible to such magic. you know, someone says "Hell would freeze over if we ever agree" and bang, it's a magical promise and that hell dimension, 'closer' than most, is the one that gets the brunt of such magic when they do agree on something. only it was a bit different, in that someone added, "Next you'll be saying that so and so will agree on something" and they get told similar and so on... (hence the 90-100 odd people in the 45-50 groupings that normally never agree agreeing one after another making that hell feel a bigger and bigger chill.)



Makes sense, in a really really Xander-ish way.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Holy Blue Gods of Heaven and Hell!" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Okay, so I'm adoring this story! I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Hey Sue, thanks Sue. I look forward to more of If Wishes Where Thestrals.

I feel like holding the next chapter hostage. Oops, already posted. damn..

edit: Thanks for the Rec!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Holy Blue Gods of Heaven and Hell!" from IcemanII
Review:
This is for Ch.1 & 7

Very, very interesting story, great story so far. Its a lot of fun. It looks really promising and fun. Keep up the good work, hope to see more!
Comments from author:
yyeah, I'll probably drop off from writing it at some point, but 4 chapters so far today :P
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Holy Blue Gods of Heaven and Hell!" from sjyu
Review:
I find it difficult to get into the flow of the one sided phone conversations-but once I'm in the flow it's a great story. You've chosen a very unique way of writing and it's turning out very interesting.
Comments from author:
not so much chosen, as a stream of writing what comes as. there is no 'write draft, rewrite draft, edit, proof, post' here. :P
Review By [sjyu] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Holy Blue Gods of Heaven and Hell!" from Studyofchaos
Review:
I just found your story. Funny stuff. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Oh, good, thanks. I thought I lost it somewhere.

:D
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shopping Trips of Doom. Thanks Trongod." from RafMereC
Review:
Great story.
Raf
Comments from author:
thx.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Maybourne and the Attempts." from trongod
Review:
I'm hoping that you can figure out a way for Xander to help Dru regain herself after The Prague Incident, unbeknownst to the rest of the Scoobies; I likes her in this, I does!

She has a body temp, something a vampire doesn't, so I'm thinking she's a unique individual, the real and true Shanshu (or whatever the thing was called) recipient And Xander uses his contacts in the Sunnydale Underground, Uncle Jack's Helljumpers' contacts, and Cousin Harry's contacts to assemble everything she needs to not only heal from the Prague mob, but to overcome the demon vampire and become a Day Walker type.

I'd really love to see Giles' face the first time she walks into the library to pick up Xander for his training and shopping trip during the afternoon of a typical brilliantly sunny California day, and Xander's face when he realizes that the shopping trip /wasn't/ a joke... and that Cordelia and Willow are tagging along for various reasons...

And Buffy's being left behind because she was a naughty little scamp and must be punished, Miss Edith says so...
Comments from author:
I didn't get to work in the last bit, but there ya go.
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Maybourne and the Attempts." from eriktheviking
Review:
Great fun frustrations.
Comments from author:
yyyep. And an idea on the XZ just gave me some scenes to work with next chappie.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Maybourne and the Attempts." from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Comments from author:
than... woah, deja vu.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Maybourne and the Attempts." from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Comments from author:
thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry Maybourne and the Attempts." from Mcspender
Review:
That thing about trying again and again?. Maybourne should have used an AT4 the last time, at least he could have got a biig boom for all his troubles hehehehe!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Nah, Harry knows that xander would kill him if Cordelia was hurt from the collateral.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Harry Maybourne and the Attempts." from Greywizard
Review:
LMAO!!!

Perfect!! ;-)
Comments from author:
thanks,
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [14 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mini Jack" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
yup.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mini Jack" from Eureka
Review:
Tis a major clusterf&*^! But I really like it!
Comments from author:
Good. Cuz you better like the rest! Muahahahaha!... *cough*

Ah, damnit, no evil voice from now on. *sad frown.*
Review By [Eureka] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mini Jack" from WolfWriter
Review:
Couldn't a hand device give it back?

This is REALLY funny! It explains so much about Xander.
Comments from author:
Huh?

and thanks. But still. Huh?

give what back? I re-read my own chapter and I still dont get that comment.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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