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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Cracking good story I was snorting and laughing.
Comments from author:
I heard coke can do that.

Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mini Jack" from trongod
I'd like to see more of Xander's past, especially as to Drusilla... who I have some major hottie issues with, oddly enough... and Jack and Harry's visits to the Hellmouth pre-Buffydom.

Maybe Dru is talking to Xander about teaching him some things when he gets a bit older and one or both kin freak out, since they know what she means, and Xander is thinking, 'Cool, fighting lessons!' while Dru is Mona Lisa smiling at them all.

Being a Seer, she visits without Spike a /lot/, thus compounding Harry and Jack's concerns - mostly to mess with them at first, but the seeds are planted... It goes a long way in explaining Xander's survival despite spending certain holiday nights camped out in his back yard, walking the streets late to Willow's and Jesse's houses, etc...

The turn about of Sam and Daniel knowing/accepting magic and all the ramifications was unique and I never have seen anyone try it before - MORE!!! And just how big a blast did she cause over the Pacific, anyway? Daniel and Teal'c's reactions when first confronting the night life and all would be fun to read.....
Comments from author:
*evil cackle* that's.... that's... okay, brb.
Review By [trongod] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why Maggie Walsh Hates Xander Harris." from kayron
HA! It figures that Mayborne would be related to the Harris side!
Comments from author:
Nah, They'd give him an even worse name. (rep wise of course)
Review By [kayron] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Okay, first off, thanks for the very kind words of praise. It's *very* much appreciated. ;-)

Second, this is one of the most *brilliant* ideas regarding SG-1 and the NID I've ever seen, and I would *LOVE* to see more interactions between Jack and Harry, hopefully with Xander around, too, if you could persuade your muse to follow this up. ;-)

I can easily see Xander being influenced by both Jack and Harry, and incorporating their values and belief systems into his own ethics/morals as he grew up, especially if considering the total lack of any positive father figure he apparently had as a child.

Anyway, this was *terrific*!! ;-)

Thanks for sharing this with us. ;-)
Comments from author:
No probs. I'll probably write a few pre-show ficlets for them. Maybe that incident he saw as a kid when Jack was in town on 'Helljumper' business.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ghostrider
Oh Goodness Gracious!!!

Xander related to BOTH Jack and Maybourne?

I've always hoped somebody somewhere would come up with an idea for the O'Neill and Maybourne show. Those two working together has always been hilariously funny. Please, may we have some more?
Comments from author:
... Hmm. Maybe.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
This is probably the most unique relationship I've ever seen the two Colonels in - actually related through another person. I liked Maybourne the way he was shown in the series - as he said, willing to do what it took... which really isn't that far from Jack, which is more than likely why he reacts the way he does to the NID man.

I hope that you can add to this, be interesting to see a "competition between the two men over influencing Xander - Jack trying to get him to do thing 'to' a line and no further, while Harry encourages him to do whatever it takes to protect His Girls... and Giles and Hammond both looking on in shock/amusement/fear when the two combine forces and join with Xander...

... And Teal'c coming in all disappointed he wasn't invited to the fight...

And Daniel, Sam, and Janet tag along for -respectively - the books and tomes, to prove it's not magic 'cause magic doesn't exist, and to protect and heal the kids while dulling her needles for Jack and Harry...
Comments from author:
*giggle*. Oh the possibilities...
Review By [trongod] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DHX
oh that was Glorious.
Comments from author:
Just wait until I write up the next ficlet.
Review By [DHX] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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