Love this story, and I'm delighted to see more detailed information about exactly what sort of training Xander is receiving.
The two ravens mention is a nice nod to show that Odin is keeping an eye on his potential protege (?), and it seems to be reinforced by Anya's waking up after dreaming of Xander as a Viking.
Will Xander be considered as one of Odin's representatives, or possibly a Viking-style paladin, once he returns to the Hellmouth?
And I apologize for not realizing until now that I hadn't recommended this story. That oversight has now been corrected. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you, not only for the review but the recommendation. It give's me a warm feeling when a writer whose work I enjoy thinks enough of my story to recommend it to others. Olbear
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
It's possible that the moles didn't remember they were moles. Their true personality didn't show unless they were given a certain code word or they were discovered.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
This story is already a great piece but the inclusion of Special Agent Coulson heightens the magnificence of it. Especially the mention of him defeating a team of assassins with nothing more then a rolled up magazine. Seriously, a team-up between Xander and The Son of Coul would be .... devastating... to whomever they face.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Very nice work on the new chapter, I look forward to reading more
-Are you taking suggestions for people Xander will meet soon?
Comments from author:
Yes I am, especially any female superheroes who you feel might benifit from some 'Xander Luvin!'. Just send me a private review with your suggestions. Thank you for reviewing, Olbear.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Michaelsuave
Review:
Awesome! Love the premise and the possibilities. What is going to happen as far as odin's comments go about wander the warrior? Training by Thor? I always wish somebody would have given the goodguys in marvel a hand; it always seemed like every victory in for a marvel hero was a pyrrich (sp?) Victory at best. Hope wander can help turn that around. Keep up the great work. Cheers!
Comments from author:
Odin's discussion with Fury will be revealed in later chapters, though I will say that The Allfather approves of a warrior who saves his world while still a teenager. I appreciate your review. Olbear
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]