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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters (4-5). Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lordamnesia
Review:
Not bad at all, keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Greywizard
Review:
Love this story, and I'm delighted to see more detailed information about exactly what sort of training Xander is receiving.

The two ravens mention is a nice nod to show that Odin is keeping an eye on his potential protege (?), and it seems to be reinforced by Anya's waking up after dreaming of Xander as a Viking.

Will Xander be considered as one of Odin's representatives, or possibly a Viking-style paladin, once he returns to the Hellmouth?

And I apologize for not realizing until now that I hadn't recommended this story. That oversight has now been corrected. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you, not only for the review but the recommendation. It give's me a warm feeling when a writer whose work I enjoy thinks enough of my story to recommend it to others. Olbear
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Good work! Keep it coming! This is setting up to be great background work for an epic story arc! Cannot wait for the next installment!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story...
hope to read more soon ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from djhardim
Review:
It's possible that the moles didn't remember they were moles. Their true personality didn't show unless they were given a certain code word or they were discovered.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Omegaprime
Review:
Well, it looks like Xander is getting some training so he can really help his friends.

So Norman was found out to be the Green Goblin and had to go, I wonder how freaked out Spiderman is right now? LOL.

Hmmm, I wonder why Anya dreamed that Xander was a viking and not a military person? Very interesting or an I just making something out of nothing?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing chapter.
But I think the training is really good for Xander. :)
Kinda exciting ending with Anya. Liked it.
Eager to read more. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Ghostrider
Review:
This story is already a great piece but the inclusion of Special Agent Coulson heightens the magnificence of it. Especially the mention of him defeating a team of assassins with nothing more then a rolled up magazine. Seriously, a team-up between Xander and The Son of Coul would be .... devastating... to whomever they face.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh my, Xander with SHIELD training. That's wonderful and dangerous!
Great chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
Nice chapter. Keep it up.
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written look into Xander's current circumstances and some of the changes from his previous life.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Yelling "Hail, Hydra!" really is a dead giveaway. I'm not sure they could have screwed their mission up more.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice work on the new chapter, I look forward to reading more

-Are you taking suggestions for people Xander will meet soon?
Comments from author:
Yes I am, especially any female superheroes who you feel might benifit from some 'Xander Luvin!'. Just send me a private review with your suggestions. Thank you for reviewing, Olbear.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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