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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work. Sorry for the later review.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [23 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bill
Review:
Good one!
Review By [Bill] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Short but good.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Narf
Review:
Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from djhardim
Review:
Very good, as usual.

I was reading about the Infinity Formula in the Marvel Comics Database and came across an entry for Nicholas Fury, Jr..

It was rather interesting to see what effect the formula had on him; almost like the Super Soldier Serum.

http://marvel.wikia.com/Infinity_Formula
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nick_Fury_Jr

Does Nicholas Fury, Jr. exist in your version of Earth-616?

Hopefully, Xander will make it through the remaining time with both eyes intact.

I can see where this may make Xander a target of the Initiative if they learn about him when Xander gets back to his own reality.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the update, hoping for more soon.

-Will Xander be encountering anymore Marvel characters?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Studyofchaos
Review:
More please!
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [10 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from EasterCat
Review:
Just started reading this. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Greywizard
Review:
I"m always quite happy to gt a notice of a new chapter of this story showing up, and my enjoyment of thsi story continues to grow. ;-)

Odin's news really isn't that much of a surprise, since the Joss-verse is quite definitely at the shit end of the karma-meter.

It's a nice change that Fury would like to put Xander into Witness Protection, but given Xander's mindset and the sheer orneriness of Fate, it would be a vain attempt, with the only real variables being how long it would take for some sort of mess to end up on his doorstep, and just how bad said mes would rank on the 'Oh Shit!'-a-meter. ;-)

As I've already said, I'm enjoying this story very much and am looking forward to seeing what happens next.

Are we going to see how Buffy's and Willow's college lives are developing? And just what is the ratio for time passing in the Marvel-verse and the Joss-verse?
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from msdarque
Review:
Interesting, bit surprising chapter.
Not by Xander doing so well in the Academy, but by Odin's visit....
Eager to read how things develop and when Xander figures out what is kept from him.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yup, enjoying the plot developments a lot!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Nightscream
Review:
Good update! Keep up the good work.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from banditdoz
Review:
Great story thanks for writing ;D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting idea on "powering up" Xander by making him do the hard work, but giving him an assist on physical recovery and strength. Time running slower in his dimension he might even arrive in time for the fall semester at college. I like that Xander was able to "give" intel to the Shield people as well. Not all of it may be as useful, as there are different versions of the MU but enough of it is similar to be helpful.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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