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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Omegaprime
Review:
Ouch, two years? Well I hope time goes slower on the Buffy side of the multiverse.

I hope that Xander puts his time there to good use and gain some skills that will freak out his friends when he gets back home.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ivanjedi
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S.H.I.E.L.D. doesn't know of Magneto's Brotherhood? Oh boy, this is one can of worms you opened, giving the King Spook a few decades worth of information. Yes, I can definitely see Fury trying to keep this one as long as possible...
On the other hand, Xander trained by S.H.I.E.L.D., and maybe gifted with a couple of Tony Stark or Reed Richards gismos... on his return, you may need to do something to add extra complications to what happens in Sunnydale just to keep things interesting, after all, the Gang did pretty good jon in the canon without much of organization or good tech.
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DonWar
Review:
I've been really interested in this story and I am looking forward to seeing where you take this story. SO, keep up the good work.
Review By [DonWar] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from djhardim
Review:
Very good, glad to see more of this.

One thing - this seems to be the main Marvel reality. Wouldn't Jarvis be Tony Stark's butler rather than an A.I.?
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)tchizek
Review:
Go Xander! While you are stuck for 2 years GET SOME TRAINING! um, sorry just had to get that off my chest...
Hmm, I wonder what the time differential is...oh well I guess we will find that out in a couple of years.

Great chapter!
Review By [(Current Donor)tchizek] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)nerfherder
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Well, it's official! I will be watching for anything this author puts out cause it all seems damn good! Cannot wait to see what you come up with next.
Review By [(Current Donor)nerfherder] • Date [14 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh this should be interesting!

Now they just have to get him home in time to help deal with "Dick's" surprise.

Great story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Hanzo
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great
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Hanzo
Review:
great
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Orchamus
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Damn, that's a surprise. Even bigger that he would want him injected with the Infinity Serum. Pretty awesome though.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice work, but you sem to have made a slight mistake, Agent Hill's first name is "Maria" not "Clarissa". I hope to read more soon.

Who will be the first superhero Xander meets?

-Edit: Are you open to suggestions on the first superhero Xander will meet?
Comments from author:
Thanks for correcting me. It's been awhile since I read comics so I'm sure to make more mistakes as the story progresses. As for the first superhero Xander meets, well, I havent decided yet.
Thanks for taking the time to review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from lillyb
Review:
I love that your giving Xander connections in this world. And Odin? And Nick Fury? wow that some connections.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I am glad to see more of this wonderful story!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and unexpected twist.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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