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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from leonamasha
Review:
You've definitely got me interested in what happens next. Know it's been awhile since your last update but really am just happy you've written this much. Hope your Muse encourages you to write more some time. Until then, thanks for this so far!
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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lol he dropped on the command deck of the Hellicarrier? what a way to introduce yourself to Fury :)


2.

Xander the mystery John Doe :)

3.

I wonder what Odin told fury that he let Alex be injected with that serum.

4.

ahh Xander spilling secrets....I hope that doesn't backfire.

5.

uihh now X is undergoing Shield training.....nice fic so far and tx for sharing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from juansiete
Review:
keep writing
Review By [juansiete] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from prehensileclaw
Review:
Good stuff... But then so is everything you write. Not sure what that serum is, so I'm off to wikipedia. Thanks for sharing this.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lillyb
Review:
This story is one of a kind. Great work! I always liked Anya.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from betrayal
Review:
Am glad you've updated, great chapter! Am glad that Xander finds himself thinking of Anya, they were a great couple! Keep up the great work!
Review By [betrayal] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters (4-5). Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lordamnesia
Review:
Not bad at all, keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Greywizard
Review:
Love this story, and I'm delighted to see more detailed information about exactly what sort of training Xander is receiving.

The two ravens mention is a nice nod to show that Odin is keeping an eye on his potential protege (?), and it seems to be reinforced by Anya's waking up after dreaming of Xander as a Viking.

Will Xander be considered as one of Odin's representatives, or possibly a Viking-style paladin, once he returns to the Hellmouth?

And I apologize for not realizing until now that I hadn't recommended this story. That oversight has now been corrected. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you, not only for the review but the recommendation. It give's me a warm feeling when a writer whose work I enjoy thinks enough of my story to recommend it to others. Olbear
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Good work! Keep it coming! This is setting up to be great background work for an epic story arc! Cannot wait for the next installment!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story...
hope to read more soon ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from djhardim
Review:
It's possible that the moles didn't remember they were moles. Their true personality didn't show unless they were given a certain code word or they were discovered.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Omegaprime
Review:
Well, it looks like Xander is getting some training so he can really help his friends.

So Norman was found out to be the Green Goblin and had to go, I wonder how freaked out Spiderman is right now? LOL.

Hmmm, I wonder why Anya dreamed that Xander was a viking and not a military person? Very interesting or an I just making something out of nothing?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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