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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from juansiete
Review:
keep writing
Review By [juansiete] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from prehensileclaw
Review:
Good stuff... But then so is everything you write. Not sure what that serum is, so I'm off to wikipedia. Thanks for sharing this.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lillyb
Review:
This story is one of a kind. Great work! I always liked Anya.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from betrayal
Review:
Am glad you've updated, great chapter! Am glad that Xander finds himself thinking of Anya, they were a great couple! Keep up the great work!
Review By [betrayal] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters (4-5). Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lordamnesia
Review:
Not bad at all, keep up the great work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Greywizard
Review:
Love this story, and I'm delighted to see more detailed information about exactly what sort of training Xander is receiving.

The two ravens mention is a nice nod to show that Odin is keeping an eye on his potential protege (?), and it seems to be reinforced by Anya's waking up after dreaming of Xander as a Viking.

Will Xander be considered as one of Odin's representatives, or possibly a Viking-style paladin, once he returns to the Hellmouth?

And I apologize for not realizing until now that I hadn't recommended this story. That oversight has now been corrected. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you, not only for the review but the recommendation. It give's me a warm feeling when a writer whose work I enjoy thinks enough of my story to recommend it to others. Olbear
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Good work! Keep it coming! This is setting up to be great background work for an epic story arc! Cannot wait for the next installment!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story...
hope to read more soon ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from djhardim
Review:
It's possible that the moles didn't remember they were moles. Their true personality didn't show unless they were given a certain code word or they were discovered.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Omegaprime
Review:
Well, it looks like Xander is getting some training so he can really help his friends.

So Norman was found out to be the Green Goblin and had to go, I wonder how freaked out Spiderman is right now? LOL.

Hmmm, I wonder why Anya dreamed that Xander was a viking and not a military person? Very interesting or an I just making something out of nothing?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing chapter.
But I think the training is really good for Xander. :)
Kinda exciting ending with Anya. Liked it.
Eager to read more. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Ghostrider
Review:
This story is already a great piece but the inclusion of Special Agent Coulson heightens the magnificence of it. Especially the mention of him defeating a team of assassins with nothing more then a rolled up magazine. Seriously, a team-up between Xander and The Son of Coul would be .... devastating... to whomever they face.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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