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Review of chapter "Dossier: Assassin (1)" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Review:
Awesome. Great set up chapter for the Illium missions and we finally get to know how the whole Morinth/Samara thing works out. Yay!
Comments from author:
Thank God I have a brilliant bata reader or two who can help me pull this phantasmagoria of a fanfic off --- I love that word. I think I live for moments in my life when I can actually get away with using THAT world. :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Assassin (1)" from Omegaprime
Review:
Finaly on Illium.

Gee, I wonder why Morrie doesn't want to go outside, is it because she doesn't wnt to meet killer mommy too early? LOL.

Nice comparison with earthly places then Star Wars places for the planet.

Can't wait to see your version of the takedown of that evil lady and the meeting with Thane.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Not to worry about Morrie, I didn't drag her all the way from Omega just to have her sit out what I personally think are the best missions from the second games.

Next Chapter ....Shepard and Liara's reuniion goes about how you'd expect.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from Narf
Review:
Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [12 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Redemption (3)" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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1.

that poor guy....

2.

ahh you stick to canon....poor Shepard...and ouch that really must have hurt what Xander did, but at least he saved 20 ppl
with it.

CH3

ok so this time she wasn't found directly by Cerberus and it seems like her marbles are a bit scrambled.

ch4

hmm how did X end up in Aria's bed?

Ch 5

ahh so Shepard isn't only a slayer, but like Xander immortal know....I hope they get to her soon and gut that
bastard Salarian
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
uh-oh.

for some reason the song "Trouble" by Shampoo played in my head for this latest chapter.

keep up the good work as always.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah TIM has no idea of what he is unleashing
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from Omegaprime
Review:
TIM is not playing with fire anymore... He is now juggling suns that will supernova without warning, live nukes and running chainsaws while walking on a nearly invisible wire coated with super slippery oil.

And below him is a pool filled with hot boiling acid/lava that somehow has sharks, piranhas, lions, varren and other assorted vicious creatures in it.

Just my thoughts on where TIM is right now.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from trongod
Review:
Considering who the Illusive Man is and was, his final comment made me flimch a bit.

We've already got Immortal Xander and Buffy running _semi)amok through the galaxies, and Shepherd is on par with them, and now I the the distinct feeling he's about to clone/reanimate Faith...

The only thing I truly can't see him doing is making the mistake of doing this to dawn - that'd bring about his and his entire organization's total annihilation...

With the aforementioned people taking turns killing him before using his own devices to bring him back for more...
Comments from author:
TIM, like all the best villains really believes that what he is doing is for the good of all

Team Scooby will be very, very invested in the final battle by the time I'm done , of that you can have no doubt. ;-)
Review By [trongod] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Review:
I love the interlude. I got creepy evil music playing in the backgrounds right now. You know, low church organs playing at a frenetic pace while a crow caws, lightning flashes and a maniacal laugh resounds in the background.
Comments from author:
Dude this is yet another chapter that is waaaay better because of your notes. thanks
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from Cdog
Review:
Xander is going to butt**** TIM when he finds out. Oh god is he going to hurt him.
Comments from author:
I promise you by the time I am done every member of Team Scooby will be heavily invested in the battle to take down Cerberus and TIM
Review By [Cdog] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from Omegaprime
Review:
Oh god, what is TIMMY SMOKING!!!!!

Not only is he going to find a potential slayer on Horizon and have that jerk assassin guy but is he going to resurrect Faith!!?

Is he trying to piss off Xander, Buffy and Shepard?

He is a dead duck, an even deader duck when he gets to the afterlife (not the bar).

Keep up the good work.

I really hope he doesn't create a freaking Slayer army if he decides to clone.
Comments from author:
I just thought it was time to up the ante for Team Normandy ... I really want the good guys invested in the outcome of of the coming war.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for sticking with me ....working on it has been fun
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from kyro
Review:
not a good idea for Timmy there, one initiative all ready failed but to add faith back to mix is a thermonuclear explosion waiting to happen Xander and
Buffy plus Shepard are probably destroy Cerberus for this just huge powered-keg waiting to explode.
Comments from author:
TIM honestly believes that everything he does will benefit humanity in the long run even if what he does seems horrific to everybody else.

That's what makes him so very dangerous
Review By [kyro] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from DanielJ
Review:
I have some Faith that a certain Bostonian is coming back.
I love the story so far and hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Things are going to get very complicated before this is all over and done with :)
Review By [DanielJ] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Interlude: An Illusive Scheme" from Valandar
Review:
Aaaaand the Illusive Man has just guaranteed he won't survive the total storyline.
Comments from author:
There is no way I would deprive Xander of his moment to finally and completely put the hammer down on TIM
Review By [Valandar] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dossier: Warlord (2)" from Cdog
Review:
Are you jumping right into the Shadow Broker DLC are you going to "finish the game" first.

Looking forward to seeing more of Morinth as well. I've also decided to keep her alive in my story using a prison made from sex.
Comments from author:
I want to get to Horizon some really cool stuff happens there but Shadow Broker is equally filled with win

Morinth is such a treat to work with

I've begun to see ZE as a way to give her the chance to shine she never got ingame
Review By [Cdog] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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