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Review of chapter "Omega (2)" from Semet
Review:
Fun little excursion, here's to hoping we see more soon! ~Semet
Review By [Semet] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (2)" from destructionsmistress
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Another awesome chapter! I can't wait to see where it all goes next!
Review By [destructionsmistress] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (2)" from JonnyNapalm
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Love the personal touch that we get shifting into Kasumi's POV as she's checking out the camp for the ambush. Though I'm still on the edge of my seat waiting for the ambush to be turned around against the gangs. You've got such a fantastic style with this story it's infectious. Seriously, the more of it I read the more I enjoy looking forward to the upcoming events in the storyline. Great work.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (2)" from Yeffaros
Review:
Another great chapter, makes me wonder who all she'll find in the base.
Review By [Yeffaros] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter (11-14 I've been busy so I couldn't read & review). Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from deusexsububi
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I've been singing "a superstitious and cowardly lot" thanks to this.

You're doing awesome. I'm pleased to see more Dr. Who references. Keep doing what you're doing. But faster :)

Thanks!
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from Omegaprime
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Ok, now you are freaking me out.

Not only is Garrus with Xander but Kasumi AND Jack are with him.

Why do I think that Shepard is going to see a lot more mercinaries than there shoud be in a certain rescue op?

I loved how Xander confused everyone with old Earth one-liners.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from destructionsmistress
Review:
Awesome as usual! I love that Xander is in on the Archangel stuff. Knowing is half the battle!... Classic!
Review By [destructionsmistress] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from murdock
Review:
I love this fic. But are you really tossing doctor who into the mix here?
Comments from author:
The Doctor is best used carefully if at all in a fic like this ... Im being careful about the cameos. tiny little things here or there ...like mentioning River is the only one who could actually capture Xander

My betas can testify that exercising restraint is something of a challenge for me.

The rewards for it however speak for themselves, You're still with me. :-)
Review By [murdock] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from Yeffaros
Review:
Great update, looking forward to more. Shepard really is getting a gimmie for once.
Review By [Yeffaros] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Review:
Awesome, like usual. Sorry for the brief review, but we've already went through this piece. Good work.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (1)" from Semet
Review:
Well this was fun. Glad to see the story progressing. Congratz to another good chapter and here's to hoping we see more soon! ~Semet
Review By [Semet] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Intimacy Brings Understanding" from destructionsmistress
Review:
Continuing to love this story! I was a little behind because I was off playing ME3. ^.^
Comments from author:
Same here

First time I saw Vega's ... unique shuttle piloting technique ... I just knew he'd get along with Xander .
Review By [destructionsmistress] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intimacy Brings Understanding" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Review:
Good, good. I like it. I like the back story between Shepard and M-. Adds more flavor and life to the Butcher of Torfan title.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Intimacy Brings Understanding" from Omegaprime
Review:
Nice updates.

We see what goes on behind the scenes with Ash and some politicians and see Shepard get to know her crew better.

We also find out a little more about her past

But now two questions are running in my mind:

Where is Garus if Xander has taken his place as Archangel?

Where is Jack now that her meeting place is blown up?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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