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Review of chapter "Dossier: Warlord (2)" from Omegaprime
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Oh sweet god what have you done?

We have the Asari girlfriend/infobroker, an Asari mother looking for her daugter, Thane, Shepard's biggest fan and several dozen mini-missions and now you are adding TOOMBS to that mix? That planet is pobably going to explode!!

Can't wait to see the fireworks.

I loved the name that Illyria gave that Krogan clone. But what did she mean when she said that she will take care of Cordy?

Poor Grunt almost had a freak out when he meet up with Shepard and Xander, that was funny.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Illyria meant exactly what she said

I put a lot of time effort and energy into this cameo and seeing as it happens during my favourite mission I'm hoping you all are going to love it.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Warlord (2)" from eriktheviking
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Another great update with well written action sequences whilst still maintaining a sense of humor.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dossier: Warlord (2)" from Cmiller
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more please... then what happens??????

Who is all on Illsium????

AND my new Favorite character Waffles the Krogan.

Will we see a red-horned Green Demon with a Dark Slayer?
Comments from author:
The implications of Xander's actions will soon become clear
Horizon is on the horizon
Team Normandy is going to get an early preview of one of the toughest fights on ME3
And yes Illium will be ground zero for some big reunions some of which will be kind of harrowing for our heroes
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (2)" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (2)" from Narf
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Wow what a story. I have only recently to the Mass Effect games hell I only finished number 3 a couple of days ago. But rock as much as the game and having Xander and Buffy in it as well is even better. Maybe the folks you make the games should that as a add on. Anyway keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
Thanks , working on this has been a real joy Hope you love what I got up my sleeve for my take on the third game.
Review By [Narf] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (2)" from Blackguard
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OOoh, I eagerly look forward to Xander and Ilirya meeting up again, that should all sorts of fun.

Can't wait for more.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (2)" from Omegaprime
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Cripes, you connected that Quarian mini-mission to the whole Garrus loyalty mission.

I'm really surprised by that.

It was nice to see Buffy and Shepard to get to know each other better and to fight together. I also see you have spared the poor traitor and gave him a tragic reason for him to do what he did.

Keep up the good work and I hope to see what other changes you will do to this story.

Edit: is it just me or does that Quarian's name almost sounds like Xander's middle name?

I wonder what changes you will make to the Pick up the Krogan (Grunt) mission?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (2)" from Cmiller
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SO.... What actually happened to Faith? Did she die in that final battle??? Or will you be using my idea of Faith and Lorne on Illium owning a new 'Caritus'?

more please.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah some old friends await

Glad you're enjoying the story
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (1)" from Stormrider
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I'm been reading this since the beginning and I can't wait to see what happens next. I like Shepard's return to the citadel. I also like Xander's reaction to Buffy's choice of business attire (Considering that Dawn was taller than Buffy. I laugh at Xander's reaction). Seems like Buffy has carved a niche for herself in the citadel.

I also like the chat between the council, Shepard and Xander. Our favorite Scooby just can't help himself when it comes to the jokes and commits. At least it servers a purpose, it's exactly what Shepard wants to say, but without her saying it. I love to see what happens with Shepard and crew with Buffy along. I love to see what hi jinks they get into. Not to mention the reunion that we're waiting for, Xander and Ashley. I love to see what happens next in Xander's love life. and of course Buffy's reaction to Ashley, since she does have to talk to the council sometimes.

Great chapter love to see what happens next
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (1)" from Kaosreign
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Question, do you plan to alter the relathionships of both Shepard and Xander? I say the first because the game allows it and the second becasue Ashely would be pissed at him for joining Cerberus. That and you had this moment between him and Tali that at first i found funny but now i am left wondering if it has potential in this story, my other hope is if you pair him up with Miranda since i feel sorry for her since she strives so hard for perfection yet is so alone because of it.
Comments from author:
Shep is staying true and blue though their relationship will by no means be an easy one

I have to say BW screwed up Xander's chances for Tali-mancing when they went and gave her the obviously crushing Kal'Reeger and then hooked her up with Garrus ...she looks so cute with both those guys I couldn't screw with such an awesome looking potential romance .

I broke up Ash and Xander so he'd be free to screw around a little but then BW wrote the mexican standoff between the VS and Shepard.

needless to say the plot potential was too good to ignore

glad you are enjoying the story .. stay tuned for more fun.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (1)" from eriktheviking
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Even after all this time Xander's mouth still has problems with willful blindness.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (1)" from Omegaprime
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This is a nice re-introduction to the Citadel.

Wow, so Buffy is working with Anderson? Now she can find out whats going on with her new/old friends a lot quicker.

I just loved how Xander told off the three council members, he totally went renegade on them. He said some of the things I wanted to say to them but couldn't.

Shepard doing things quietly this time? I hope they have enough Tylenol with them? Because if you are doing The Arrival DLC they will need it, LOL.

Now I'm wondering how Garrus's little vengeance plot is going to turn out now that Buffy is with the team.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
That line was put in especially because of Arrival
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (1)" from Yeffaros
Review:
Great chapter, can't wait for more. Also "story Council Intelligence? Aah... we have dismissed that claim."story was brilliant.
Comments from author:
It might be wrong for me to admit this but Xander's response to "Ahh yes, Reapers." was one of the first things I conceived of way back when I started this whole crazy endeavor.
Review By [Yeffaros] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (1)" from Semet
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Nice... I have to say, very well done! Congratz on a great new chapter ^^!
Comments from author:
I always listen to good advice ... Especially when it helps me do better work.
Review By [Semet] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eye for an eye (1)" from xon
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I think that another "Shadowy Men" chapter can be thrown in before the whole Horizon mission happens.
Review By [xon] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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