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Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from Semet
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This was fun! Not sure how I feel about the whole Morinth angle I see you starting, but hey, if nothing else it should be interesting. Regardless, good chapter! Here's to hoping we see more soon! ~Semet

Edit: Hmm, I think I've read that one actually. Funny, I would have thought she would have sensed how 'special' Xander was near straight off the bat like almost every Asari he's ever encountered before. Instead she's fixating on Shepard soley which, while perfectly understandable, also kind of baffles me. I mean, don't get me wrong, the way you've written Shepard for this one is pretty fantastic but by his very nature Xander automatically has a bigger 'power token' just in the way he exists (even if he is generally more subtle in many ways compared to Shepard), not to mention all the things he's capable of pulling off pretty much whenever he needs to. And Morinth has always struck me as being able to sense ones inate power first and foremost.

But hey this is all just me speculating, so take it as you will. ~Semet
Comments from author:
Blame this one on BW, various interviews have suggested that originally you had more options with Morinth then just her pretending to be her Mother and killing you if you tried to sleep with her ... plus I wanted to give myself a challenge.

Morinth: Desire is arguably the best I've ever seen her written

www.fanfiction.net/s/5920867/1/

I wanted to see if I can pull something like that off
Review By [Semet] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from Yeffaros
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Always happy to see a new update. You always have an excellent balance between action, plot, and character interaction.
Review By [Yeffaros] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from JaredDrake
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Ah man... Morinth?! Really?! She's like an Unholy combination of Angelus and Spike. Vindictiveness and unhealthy obsession all rolled into one. I'm not sure what to feel about that.

I just hope Shepard has enough sense to just kill her. I can't help but be reminded of the movie "Fatal Attraction" for some reason. O_O
Comments from author:
I've already recommended one really good Morinth story so here is another called In Flames
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6157522/1/

I just found myself wondering what would Joss, the guy who gave us Holtz, Angelus and Spike, do with someone like Morinth and Samara
Review By [JaredDrake] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from deusexsububi
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Suddenly a slayer forces Xander into confronting a very crazy ex.

I don't always pity fictional characters, but when I do, their name is usually Xander Harris.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from Omegaprime
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Holy cow, you are full of surprises.

A random Asari lady in dire need turning out to be Morinth and then becomes a member of the team? Man, if her mother finds out things will really explode.

Hopefully she will find out who Shepard and Xander really are.

I know a certain old man will freak out when he finds out that the crew has a human who is older than him.

Can't wait to see how Shepard will get Xander's bacon out of the fire of Aria.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from EroSlackerMicha
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Morri....its like having a shark in a blood filled pool filled with baby seals.

I have a feeling Gramp Z is going to try something and Xan and Shep are going to laydown the law...or introduce him to Smackdown Hotel.

the meeting with Aria is going to be interesting.
keep up the good work.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from Cmiller
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Your welcome to the idea. hint-hint.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from baneblade
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Morinth



ahhh


And this is our other Asari crewmate

cue the crazy ship tearing fight
Comments from author:
Morinth thinks she is at the top of the galaxy's food chain. She is wrong about that, she is very, very wrong about that.
Review By [baneblade] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (6)" from Cmiller
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hmm.... okay that was interesting Morinth. Wonder what will happen with Samara... also whatever happened to Lorne and Faith? cuz I think that would be an interesting twist to have Lorne have a Caritas on Illiusm with Faith as a possible bodyguard... maybe have something like that or at least an explination on what happened to the rest of the Fang Gang, Giles, and Faith?
Comments from author:
I remain vague on the fate of various characters for two very important reasons

one -- I want each and every cameo and there will be a few more... to have some meaning and weight.

and TWO ... just in case someone makes a particularly good suggestion so i can borrow it , with their permission of course.

Just call me Mister Hinty McHint-Hint
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (5)" from Morgomir
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Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (5)" from Omegaprime
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Now that was a cool way to alter the Patriarch sub-mission by having him participate in it, LOL.

Now Aria will probably have more trouble now that he is more confidant.

Can't wait to see how you alter the mission for the good doc.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (5)" from eriktheviking
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A well written Shepherd in action but the clincher was the intriguing old Patriarch.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (5)" from Tjin
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thanks for the great chapter.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega (4)" from Omegaprime
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Yeowza, now that was some really cool battles for the Archangel portion of the game.

Now Shepard has gained two extra people without going to thier meeting places.

I loved how Xander is freaking out poor Jack.

Next up: The meeting with a cool Slarian doctor and the REAL Archangel.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Not quite first Shepard has to follow one of Joss's rules

The Hero shall engage in inappropriate potentially risk-taking behavior from which she will be saved only by the timely intervention of a valuable ally

Ohh and some canon tweaking thinly disguised as foreshadowing ;-)
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega (4)" from FireFlyFan
Review:
God damn this is good...
Review By [FireFlyFan] • Date [27 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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