Uh oh, Miranda's curiosity is fully engaged but she is smart enough to solve it unless someone does something very stupid (like die then come back to life).

I also see that she is starting to doubt Timmy, it may be microscopic but soon it will bloom.

Can't wait to see how the Hagalaz situation will turn out and who will rip apart that creepy alien who took over The Shadow Broker position; Liara or Xander?

Keep up the good work.

Good chapter. One thing (which I'm sure others have mentioned). Dr. Chakwas's first name is Karin, not Helen (at least according to the Mass wiki). I'm not sure if that is fanon or not though.

Looking forward to seeing the battle on Hagalaz.

I may retcon Chakwas' name, still not sure though

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Happy to see another update. I've been following this one for a long time and updates are always something to look forward to. Thanks for writing.

The enthusiasm of the community has really helped keep me going. The recent DLC release gave me ideas as well that I'm dying to try out ... think Dopplegangland with the volume cranked to eleven.

wooooowhooooo UPDATE....still amazing. Thank you ;D

One more interlude then it's on to the Broker

Love it, Jack and Tali are back... still, we have to deal with Morinth instead of Samara, but either way another Psychotic Biotic is always fun.

Ok, Morinth is becoming a very naughty girl, hope someone gives her a very good slap to smarten her up.

So Jack is going to train Shepard on how to deal with biotics? I hope she doesn't freak out when the slayer plays.

Which might make TIM very happy if he gets the info on that session.

Hope TIMMY wasn't listening in on Xander's and Tali's conversation because he might... wait a sec, he would probably release the old ones if they gave him more power, he would steal candy from a baby if he heard that the candy had god giving power.

Then that means he would be digging himself a DEEPER grave if he kidnaps Willow.

That is a very worrisome situation, good job.

Keep up the good work.

Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.

Well, I see that everyone is getting along swimmingly, *rolls eyes* hope they get their act together before everything goes to superhell.

I just loved how Tali covered Xander's little flub before he blew his cover to little bits.

Can't wait to see Xander's reaction when they get to Tali's Loyalty Mission, I'm guessing that Shepard's outbursts will be like a small breeze compared to Xander's. But that is much later.

Now it's on to the Shadow Broker and the Fate of Willow.

Keep up the good work.


Edit: Uh oh. *evil grin*

Not quite yet my friend, Xander's epic Xander-ness has had unforseen consequences for a Normandy crewmate and this is scewup that can't be fixed.... stay tuned

Evil evil evil evil.... You just had to go the Buffy route with the first slayer in 200 years...

Say what you want about Poppa Joss, (I know I have) but when push comes to shove the man knew what he was doing ... so yeah from time to time I asked myself -- what would Whedon do?

Not as good as JW mind you, but there's no harm in aiming for his mad genius:)

thanks for reading hope you enjoy the ride

Nice update keep up the good work thanks and bye.

Yes, there is a storm blocking your transmission but if you change a few letters in that word then you get swarm.

Buffy has only smelt the light winds that is the beginning of the crap storm that the Normandy crew is sailing into

Things are going to get very interesting and very weird for Shepard and co. very soon.

Keep up the good work.

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Rock'em, sock'em robots; but Shepard's better. Don't know why, but that got stuck in my head. (Geth vs. Geth, I geth- er guess??)

Great to see a new chapter!!

Gotta admit. Even if you wind up just up and walking away never to add chapters again. Those little summaries at the end are a good way to ensure people know that eventually things come out alright.