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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from srb
Review:
Great chapter! How about "Cadell" it means "spirit of battle".
Review By [srb] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Klimmatt
Review:
Interesting so far. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this is headed.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from lillyb
Review:
Good writing, smart plot and over all well planed and paced so far. As for the name I have a few ideas, mist could work but may be a little fem; shadow, vapor or haze would also work. Personally I like the idea of something a little less literal like Omen which ties back to the prophecy breaker thing. Just a thought ;)
Review By [lillyb] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from rubysilkensun
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This is shaping up to be awesome. Cant wait to see who the phone is from.

Nick names are hard but I will suggest the few fairly silly ones that have occurred to me:
Ghost: Because he can probably get in anywhere
Facet: Mainly due to the Primal and Soldier
Aeolus: Greek God of the Winds- again a reference to the smoking thing.
Atomic- the whole seeing atoms and taking things apart.
Fade- well he does just kind of disappear into atoms
Thanatos- is there any way to stop him killing someone?
Kronos - It was mentioned his perception had a different time scale- yeah I am stretching here.

See told you they were all silly but maybe they will inspire something cool.

Thanks for writing.
Review By [rubysilkensun] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
My words exactly xan. Goddess poor you.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from RHatch
Review:
Awesome.......
Review By [RHatch] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Almadynis
Review:
Intriguing idea. Hope to read more.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from SilentAddiction
Review:
Fantastic story! I'm so excited! But is the government hunting down and detaining ALL mutants, just the ones with potentially 'dangerous powers', or just ones that are suspected of being in the Brotherhood? Looking forward to the next chapter!! :)
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from kayron
Review:
Great! So Vengeance demons strike again. The wishes always turn back on the wishee. In this case Xander gets power, but now he's going to have a bunch of crazies after him for being a mutant!
Review By [kayron] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing chapter....
Really liked SEAL Xander. :)
Wonder what our Xander does next..?
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Klimmatt
Review:
Interesting. I hope to see how this plays out.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [20 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Myauzo
Review:
I love stories that involve both the hyena and soldier. I hope you continue and I can't wait for the next update!
:)
Review By [Myauzo] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Interesting start - interested to see what comes next :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from kayron
Review:
Nice one Hallie!! So Xander is Primal Hyena, Soldier and...living bomb? I always hated the 'fray adjacent', and may I say sucky friend Willow, episodes. Cause at the time Willow wasn't all super powered yet, so where did she get off agreeing that Xander was useless. Oz was an out of control werewolf for a couple of days, and normal for the rest of the month. Cordelia had nothing either! And...HELLMOUTH! Not letting him fight wasn't going to keep him safe! Idiots the bunch of them! I'm liking the story!
Review By [kayron] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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