lol love buffy's bribe, send the vampire to check on the former hunter, that oughta be interesting. and dean's response to the shovel speech question and xander's reaction were just too cute. another wonderful chapter, keep u pthe good work :)
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^_^ thank you
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Not Rated
HAHAHA! Cute touch! Buffy really wanted her plastic! I like how Dean got interrogated by the group, that he DIDN'T get intimidated, and I liked his response! I also liked how Xander and Dean didn't do a big deal 'chick-flick-moment', but they made each other talk honestly about how they were doing. I definitely liked it when they basically declared that they were going to try again. Good chapter.
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Thank you. I'm trying for realistic responses from the boys
Review By [kayron] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Good to see more of this. It's quite well-written and enjoyable so far!
I would like to point out one thing, however; you said "Every topic, including what position, when, where, with who and how many times in a night..." Anya was the one who over-shared that massively, embarrassing everybody. The rest of them are very close and tell each other much more than anybody else might, but not to quite that extent!
Otherwise, an excellent effort and I'm looking forward to seeing more. Keep up the good work! :)
Comments from author:
it was supposed to be them trying to embarrass/tease Xander for not telling them about Dean, I kinda should have written that better. i'll go fix it.
thanks for reading.
EDIT: I added a few lines to fix the oocness thanks for pointing it out
Review By [ianquest] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Not Rated
wow, i'm really liking this so far! i like the idea of xan running into dean during his "vacation" trip and them teaching him all kinds of not-so-legal stuff lol. and dean's going to be staying with them for a while huh? this oughta be interesting. keep up the good work, i look forward to seeing where this goes :)
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Thank you
Review By [jujukittychick] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Wonderful surprise- Oz! Love him! Xander is just a construction genius. Wow. Though would have though he and Dean would share a room... LOL Congrats! Great chapter.
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They will just not yet
Review By [msdarque] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I enjoyed Dean's not brash outlook on life. A well written thoughtful Dean and a fun pairing with Xander without going over the top with instant mate for life. Well done and thanks.
Comments from author:
I like the pairing but it always seems so rushed so i decided to write my own. Thanks for reading
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]