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Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Part 3" from DavidFraser
I am really enjoying reading this.

Keep up the good work...

Comments from author:
Thanks a lot! I'll do my best and hope to make the rest just as enjoyable.
Review By [DavidFraser] • Date [22 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Part 3" from draconis
Very nice twist on the 'Wish' verse.

Particularly liked the line, "I looked over at Mom and she'd relaxed from her ready to be up and smacking people with her cane position. It looked a lot like her sleeping position."

Would be interested in reading a bit more about the Xavier/Raven backstory in your verse, rather than just leaving it at they had an major argument in the past and have now 'made up'.

(Don't forget to give us the final info on what actually happens to the hyena-possessed students; legal, social, and mystical).
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm surprised that more isn't done with that particular pivot point. Tonnes done with Halloween, but not that one.

I'm thinking about doing a set of side stories, so I'll probably do the Raven/Xavier backstory there. As for the winged monkeys, they'll be dealt with before the end of what would be the first season if this was a mid season replacement tv show.
Review By [draconis] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Part 3" from LordSchmodder
I really like this.
I don't know a lot of the crossover backgrounds, since I hardly read any of those comics, but I can understand the characters and their motivations. This universe is well built, congratulations!
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
I thought I'd give this a chance, but I don't have much of a reference for "Bobbi" or "Bob" at this point... or why I should care about them.
Comments from author:
That's really the issue with any kind of original character. Why should you care about them. I'm not saying you should. I would like it if you did, but if you don't, c'est la vie. The question I have in response to that is why care about any original character? Why did you watch Buffy, or read Harry Potter (if you did) or any other show that was originally full of OCs that no body had a reference for, before their show/book/movie/ what have you started?

Thanks for giving it a try though!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2- Part 3" from Gideon
Great story! You really like cramming stuff in there don't you? Stuff from all the crossovers popping up and becoming problematic. The first chapter had me a bit confused and I didn't know what what going on but I think I get the premise now. How old was Bobbi before she came to help out in Sunnydale? Hopefully she doesn't have to redo a couple of years of high school :) With the Initiative there already anything could happen! Will Anyanka turn up again or is she gone forever?
Comments from author:
Thanks. I don't feel that stuff is getting crammed in, but I do think that with a crossover (or two) comes a more complex universe that is going to have reactions to stuff that may have not been reacted to before.

I'm sorry about the confusion. Do you have any suggestions to make it less confusing (baring an authors note type exposition)?

Bobbi's actual age gets talked about in the next chapter and sometimes an agent has to do what an agent has to do, even if it's redoing high school for a while.

The idea is that yes Anyanka will reappear, but not until the events of the episode "The Wish", presuming that the universe unfolds at all in the same or a similar fashion.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2- Part 3" from SamDragon
New Mutants tie in coming maybe.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2- Part 3" from Markelo
What about Doctor Sidney Green from The Pretender for Bobbi's pyschologist?
Comments from author:
That's also a great idea. I might incorporate both as time goes on. I've got an idea in my head for Niles Crane, but can't see him lasting forever in Sunnydale (or area) once he really understands what the night holds.

Review By [Markelo] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2- Part 3" from grd
Love her exposition to the NID goons. Hope they get the message. You have a great story building here.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I appreciate it.
Review By [grd] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Part 1" from Riniko
Really enjoying the mix of characters you have going here and the way that they are interacting. Raven is one of my favorites by far from the marvel-verse, but I am enjoying the others you have here too. I will be sorry to see this story end if it means a return to the way things were as they seem to be going much better than the original. But, then Buffy was not that focused on doing the slaying part and was not as mature as her replacement.
Comments from author:
I've often loved Raven in her myriad of personalities across the Marvel Universes. Using her and Irene as parents seem to just click for some reason.

As for the story ending, when I get to the point where it 'should' end, if enough people want to read more I'll probably write more.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Part 1" from Wormbait
Wasn't sure at first but I'm really liking this story more and more each chapter.

Nice to see stuff the Bat doesn't know and that even an average vamp has a chance of taking him down, most writers seem to forget that he is actually a normal, if well trained human. Not sure how he would trace the sale of the cauldron to Catherine as the only people who would know of it would be her and Raven and I doubt either would be off telling others about it. But hey, I'm quite happy to go with the flow if it gets me more story to read. :)

Well done and thanks for sharing, I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Raven got the job to steal the cauldron from someone else,(who in turn got the job from someone else). That someone would have had contacts to get it across country and those Batman could trace.

I have more and will share as soon as it's ready.

Thanks again.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1- Part 3" from BigDubWins
Hmm. How much DC is integrated into this world? Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure how to quantify it. Some? Half? A lot? Thanks for your review.
Review By [BigDubWins] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1- Part 3" from CrystalBlaze
Interesting that Xander wound up with the Quantum Bands, unless those are other Nega-Band knockoffs?

As DC's stuff is tossed in too, I have to wonder if Willow will start talking backwards...
Comments from author:
They are indeed other Nega Band Knock offs. Not any where near as versatile as the Quantum or Nega Bands, but they do okay. Willow isn't homo magi, nor related to the Zataras. Thanks for your thoughts
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1- Part 3" from trongod
Really enjoyed this; Irene Adler, a la Sherlock Holmes if I'm not mistaken, Raven, mentions of various D.C. and Marvel personalities... Excellent!

I almost hope Raven keeps her attitude in spite of Bobbi's warning and returns to find The Detective waiting for her on the Adler front porch... Can you see the looks on everyone's faces if that happened?

Like Dru in this; even if I don't want the Old Reality back. Liking this one far too much to see it get erased. I am wondering if the P.T.B. can keep their mitts off the Reality; seems to me that they'd be smugly arrogant enough to try something, since They Know Best and It's For The Greater Good...

And Someone Else appearing to smack them all upside the head would be a rewarding experience...
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. Irene in this case is Marvel's Destiny, long time (and best) love/friend/life partner, kinda sorta, of Raven Darkholme. I didn't remember till now they had the same name.

Raven's attitude does and will get her into trouble. As for the PTB, at the moment they are trying to stop everything from going kerblooey, but as time goes on they will probably become more like they seem to be in the shows cosmology, if only because Bobbi has managed to keep things together 'just that little bit more'.

When I got to the 'end' of this series (where the wish is actually (or not) made) I was going to give the readers a vote about continuing from that point on. I will count you as a 'yes'.
Review By [trongod] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Oakheart
Who is Bobbi? The only Marvel SH I can come up with is Bobbi Morse, a.k.a. Mockingbird, notably devoid of powers of any kind. I'm sure the Psi-Band should be a clue, but I gave up collecting Marvel in the late Nineties...

Comments from author:
Nope not good old Mockingbird. The character is an OC, which may or may not make the difference for some people continuing to read. Hope you do.
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1- Part 3" from deathgeonous
Hehe, this looks very interesting. And it's based on such a brilliant idea that I'm really surprised that no one has come up with it before. Good job on that. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks for you review. I hope it remains interesting.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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