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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Well that is an interesting and pretty cool paradox. Because of their wish they will always come through for each other; at least that is part of what I got out of it. She is his hero and he is hers. together there isn't anything they can't get through. It would so totally suck to have to pretend you didn't know some of what was going to happen and hold the memory of your future death but not be able to do anything about it. The only one she can safely talk to about this is the Dr. at least I think that would be the case. She would be so pissed off right now Karky is in BIG TROUBLE! But I am guessing something will go wrong and the Dr will have to help her in order to get him out of his post traumatic stress or something. hmm if not I wonder how you will get him out of it.
Comments from author:
Yep! You got it. They are each, subconsciously, what the other one really needs. I'm glad you liked the paradox. I thought it was pretty cool myself.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Review:
Absolutely phenomenal chapter. My mind is soundly blown.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I pride myself on my mind-blowing abilities.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Six" from JasonBarnett
Review:
the idea that morals are still morals kind of puts her against the Doctor though, doesn't it?
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
excellent chapter, thank you. great way to end the update.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
well the Dr hasn't cornered the market on mistakes. Why didn't she have the Dr open it, why does it have to be Buffy to open it? Does it have something to do with love? (The sweet love between friends not necessarily the stronger love between two people in LOVE love you know what I am asking? hmmm) anyway looking forward to the next chappie.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
sorry for not commenting on the previous chapters. excellent read, thank you. i do love the the last line, again, thank you.
Comments from author:
Hehehe... I came up with that line before I came up with the rest of the scene.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from CageFire
Review:
Another great new chapter. I wonder how they'll get the doctor's soul out.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Ahh you can't leave it there! (blows raspberries) darn cliffies! more soon please. (puppy eyes)
Comments from author:
Well, yes, but on the other hand, it's not like I don't update super fast! :-) (Thanks for the comment!)
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [16 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from aeraveil
Review:
The very first thing Buffy always forgets is A: The doctor lies. B: NEVER TRUST DEMONS!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Yeah, but considering how morally weird this whole situation is, you can understand why Buffy would slip up.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [15 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from Eureka
Review:
So is Buffy going to find a way to get HIS soul back to him? There HAS to be a way!
Good story keep up the great work.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from Mayrose
Review:
It's a fake out on Buffy's part...right? Oh well, we'll find out next chapter.

I like the fact that she helped Faith when all she really wanted was to help the Doctor. Maybe he's rubbing off on her.
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I really like that this story is being more unexpected than most others I have read on this site. Predictable gets old, though it can be comforting. LOL I am really looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I know you're using the Tenth Doctor, but the convoluted plans and predicting how each player will react remind me more of Seven.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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