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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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I'm enjoying this a lot but I must say that the one thing that I find hard to accept is that Buffy has not yet lost her temper. The way that both Angel and the Doctor are avoiding saying what is going on must be driving her mad (it certainly is me!) and considering what's at stake I would have expected her to have one or both up against the wall, choking them until they stopped being idiots and talked to her! I'm finding the way that she's passively accepting what's going on to be increasingly out of character.
Comments from author:
Oh, that's a good point. I didn't think of that. I'll have her do more of that from now on.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from ClumsyElf
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What?!!! Make sure it happens?! Has the Doctor lost it? Sorry, just a little...confused...I guess?

SARAH
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Mayrose
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Of course, the cube ˆˆ'. And, wow, Elizabeth wrote it one there? How the hell does she know the Doctor's real name?

The way Angel and the Doctor keep going on about what the Doctor did with Elizabeth and what he is doing with Buffy. It's like they haven't considered the fact that Elizabeth/Buffy is a sentient human being who can make her own decisions. I see a slap coming on in both their futures.

Well, the ascension does have to happen or they won't be able to get rid of the mayor. But the way the Doctor phrased that might be taken slightly wrong by all those who don't know what happens at graduation. Which is basically everyone except the Doctor. And with all the 'no, you're not allowed to kill the vampire' commands he's given (which he then ignored when he practically invited them to come bite him in that alley and proceeded to kill them with artificial sunlight. Which basically boils down the message that only he is allowed to do so), Buffy might snap.
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from CageFire
Review:
Wow, yet more twists. I have no idea how this will turn out. Good job.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Mayrose
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Is it the silver necklace in the form of a cross that he gave her when she first met him?

So Angel is responsible for the whole paradox, somehow. Maybe that has to do with the other necklace that Angel gave Buffy at the end of season 7 and that she gave to Spike, which ended up destroying all the Turok Han in the near vicinity?

Other than that, I am seriously confused about what those two are talking about. But I imagine that Buffy is too. Nice chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from AbscondingCascade
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So the cube is a Dalek weapon? anyway in thanks 40 minutes & 29 seconds of doctor who music wrapped up in one little youtube vid - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l7sN2ijzhdk
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
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The further this goes, the more I want to hear Elizabeth's side of things.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Mayrose
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Oooh, from beneath you it devours. If Angel had been in that other version of 2003 and it had a First as well, he would know what it means. We're getting close to what happened there. What was so terrible that Elizabeth never wanted to see the Doctor again. (yet I also feel we're probably gonna have to wait a while)

I think it might have to do with the fact that in the regular Buffy verse, Buffy caused the imbalance that let the First gain a foothold by being alive when she wasn't supposed to be. Maybe something similer happened. (like when Rose saved her father when she was with Nine)

Angel said that the Doctor destroyed her, but she was alive when she said that she never wanted to see him again, so how would he have destroyed her.. Blown up Sunnydale while there were still people there? Made Elizabeth do it somehow? When in 'The Girl Who Waited' the Doctor made Rory choose between his young wife and the old, Rory hated him for 'making him be like him'. So the Doctor forced Elizabeth to make an impossible choice of some sort?

Hope this spare soul of the Doctor hangs out for a while.
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
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Gah, tip of the iceberg indeed. I'm... lost. But that's not a bad thing, not at all. That just means I'm looking forward to the next installment.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Now what did the young/old fool do? Did he break her heart like with so many of his companions? I await the develeopments eagerly...
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from CageFire
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Another, well...brilliant :)...chapter. Keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from ShalaDakiri
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You know, a lot of the things that the Not-Doctor, Angel, and the Council have said about the Doctor could easily apply to Slayers. People die around them, they aren't [fully] human, and mostly show up for disasterous events.

As for the accusations about the Doctor not being there for all of Buffy's near-misses, he's got all of Time and Space to patrol in a TARDIS that doesn't always go when and where the Doctor tells it.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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Brilliant! Just found the series and enjoying it immensely.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from CageFire
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Wow, this is suspenseful. Lots of twists and turns and such.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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