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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Mayrose
Review:
I find it very, very bizarre that, one moment 'they're' cheerfully telling Buffy how much they enjoyed making the Doctor scream and die, and the next they're offering to help stop the Mayor from killing lots of people (there's your Paradox, right there). Surely they didn't take over the Doctor's body so they could do good with it. Like they wanted to be the hero for a change or something, or they thought they could do it better. And who exactly are 'they' anyway? And what's their beef with the Doctor?

Very weird.

I just re-read the summery of this story. "Sometimes the Doctor does the wrong thing." Does this have to do with the fact that his name somehow appeared on a very dangerous object? Did he give it to Elizabeth as a sign of trust or something, who then (very foolishly in my opinion), gave it to Angel, who then gave it back to Buffy? The Doctor would have had to put it on the box himself, he wouldn't trust someone else to do that. Time Lord names are practically sacred.

Or does this mistake have to do with why these people are so pissed with him?

So many questions...
Comments from author:
I like the way you think. It's very well logicked out. Good for you for catching all the clues. The summary is from a chapter a bit later, but I feel like it summarizes the story quite well. The whole story is a moral quagmire.
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from ClumsyElf
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Is there really no way to save The Doctor? Cause that would really suck. I mean there must be some esoteric thing that nobody has ever figured out that will save The Doctor right? Or is this gonna be one of those really angsty, no happy ending things. Cause if so, I'll still read it because I'll want to find out what's gonna happen, but like I said before, it would really suck.

SARAH
Comments from author:
We're not even close to done yet. Don't worry.
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Mayrose
Review:
Don't tell me it was the Doctor's name. How the hell would Angel get something like that? I doubt the Doctor would write/let his name be written on a box like that and leave it around for Angel or someone else to find. And I can't think of anyone else who be, for a lack of better word, important enough for Angel to give it to her and say it belonged to her, especially since Angel himself doesn't seem evil. It might be Elizabeth, but Angel said it wasn't Buffy's name, so why would she feel anything?
I'm intrigued. Can't wait to find out who's name it is, and who is behind all this.
Comments from author:
Oh, you are very, very, very good! Way to read between the lines!
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Eureka
Review:
So who's name IS on the cube?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RAINXIA
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He called her Buffy! I'm guessing that is the clue that the Doc is not all with us. Or with us at all....

I read the reviews on people saying that it was odd he found it impossible for her to meet his next regeneration, i don't think so. Ten was told he was going to die, by the Ood and others. He would expect to not regenerate. Same goes for Eleven, his death was seen, he did not know how to get out of it in the beginning.

I am not sure which Doctor this is but i am presuming Ten, who by the end of his time expected to die. Or maybe i'm wrong. Either way i love your series, so interesting and different to the usual stuff.

Can't wait for more. Xia.
Review By [RAINXIA] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, I wonder what that last line meant.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Mayrose
Review:
Aaand he called her Buffy. Never a good sign. Though I don't understand why the Doctor seems convinced that Buffy wouldn't have met his next incarnation, or does he just not like hearing that she hung out with a different version of him?
Comments from author:
It does seem a little weird, doesn't it?
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [26 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Eureka
Review:
Uhoh! So what/whom ever it was now has Buffy? Cause she is both.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BBRain
Review:
Well...Default assumption is that this is either a result of the Pandorica or River's Wedding; and that either one had something go wrong in relation to Buffy's line-hopper status.

Still, this is an interesting series, and I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [BBRain] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
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So is this one going to have the 10th doctor or the 11th? or maybe if there's a paradox then maybe the 9th? Anyway, loved the short stories in between and in thanks - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z3W3FbZuziA
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mayrose
Review:
Oh, oh, that doesn't sound good. Could be Elizabeth, or the Time Lord baby's consciousness or it could be something a bit more dangerous... Either way, poor Buffy.
Review By [Mayrose] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
chapter one...um short. and a little foreboding. but very much looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm taking a screenwriting class, and they're all about brevity, so I've been working on it. The last story was about 67,000 words, this one's about 43,000 so far. So much shorter. But hopefully, it'll still be good.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
Review:
I love that you've started posting the sequel. I wasn't expecting it in well, ever. Yay, yay, yay.
Comments from author:
By the time that "Don't Be" finished, I was already most of the way finished writing this one. :-) Don't worry, I'm not going to abandon you. I don't think so, anyways.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [25 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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