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Review of chapter "Travel" from Gideon
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Good to see a bit more of the background. It will be interesting to see how Buffy can make an impact in a world where such large and powerful forces are being thrown around. Now will the mysterious shadow be friend or foe?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Expedition Begins" from AllenPitt
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Funny, Buffy thinking 80 miles wasn't a huge distance for them to have covered. She's doing really well for a California girl. Then again she did like ice skating as a kid.. Maybe she'll get a chance to do that, here. Any chance the Big Bad will be from her world?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Expedition Begins" from dcarson
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Did they ditch their skis? I'd think they will need them again unless the destination ends up right on a road.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Journey Proposed" from JoeDineen
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If Baba Yaga is the chess player then its one hel of a game.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Journey Proposed" from war
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Well looks like Buffy found herself a adventure.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Journey Proposed" from SamDragon
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Baba Yaga involved means big magic,old magic.Will be waiting for the next part.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Journey Proposed" from AllenPitt
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Wow, a PTB that actually provides some instructions and assistance. The ones on this world are soft! Now Buffy can make pirate jokes. And (presumably) a collapsible weapon. Convenient for carrying.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Journey Proposed" from Gideon
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Well, now Buffy has her Clark Kent glasses, a hook to call her own and a mission to follow. Beats any Whistler briefing she ever received! Go Buffy, go!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Meeting" from Gideon
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Grandmother Pain is a cool name, I hope Buffy doesn't have to fight her. At least Natasha seems able to look after herself, she will need that if she hangs around with Buffy. I hope Buffy's hair grows back, she must look really strange with no hair.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Meeting" from alynambered
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Continuing to enjoy this story.

Baba Yaga, huh? Wonder if she brought Buffy over specifically to fix/fight a situation??
Review By [alynambered] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Meeting" from Hecatonchires
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I read the first chapter of red star on my phone - that was enough to suck me into your story. I'm enjoying this.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Meeting" from Iceflame
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I wouldn't be surprised if Baba Yaga might not have heard news from Buffy's world >:). Wonder how having a Slayer that's damn near Living Legend status will change things? Her host certainly will understand having Baba Yaga specifically seeking you indicates great and terrible things >:).
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And the fact that Baba Yaga's name is the same on both worlds...?
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Learning" from Gideon
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Good to see Buffy is healing well and is learning more about her new world. She doesn't seem to be wondering too much about what happened back in Sunnydale but I guess she counts what happened to Spike as a win and most of her close friends were above in the school so she should consider them safe. I would be careful about using too much mangling of the English language though. Buffy had grown out of at least a part of that by season 7. Maybe use more non-standard sentence construction and less mangling of actual words. I would expect Buffy to be trying pretty hard to make it as easy as possible for Natasha to talk to her. I can see she is trying to be a good guest though, what with the cleaning and all.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Learning" from PATM
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Fascinating rebirth story. Buffy doesn't reach the bus and is changed to fit her new environment. The description of her injuries is riveting, skulls and eye sockets! This hermit/warrior and post war true believer of get the job done is a great caretaker for Buffy to meet. Burned body steaming in the show. Wow!
Review By [PATM] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Learning" from immortalbliss
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Never heard of this other comic. Looks to be a good read like your other crossovers.
Review By [immortalbliss] • Date [30 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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