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Review of chapter "Introduction" from AllenPitt
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Nokgorka...I wonder where that is. Equivalent of Finland? Ukraine? There are so many possibilities in Russia, "the prison of nations". Heh. Boy, Natasha will not be happy with that, she still 'believes' in Pravda and all that stuff. Gurkha, neat. Wow, Buffy is going to continually surprise people on both sides for a while.
Any chance Spike came through? He'd really weird people out.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Call Him Al" from AllenPitt
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Someone from the land of Tweed, at last! Now they can have tea or something. So... that light was just guiding them to people they needed to meet, not the source of the Big Bad. Maybe there'll be a new light to guide to next step...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Call Him Al" from deathgeonous
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Hmm, nice fic here, I like. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hungry Shadows" from Gideon
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Sneaky times. If Buffy's weapon can't harm things though it doesn't seem very useful. There must be more to it than that. Very useful that Tasha's hook can though.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hungry Shadows" from AllenPitt
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Rats, a smart Big Bad. Those are bad news. On the other hand, there's a lot more about Buffy it still doesn't know. At least Whistler hasn't shown up yet. Though it might be kind of funny if he did.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lake" from Gideon
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"Instrument of Policy" is a good turn of phrase, very Russian and yet quite appropriate for Buffy and other Slayers before her.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Crossing" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
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Excellent Story. Not familiar with the Red Star verse (although the link to their website really helped to get some basic background on it), and you are really doing a good job of introducing the verse and creating a real feel for it (in a very realistic sense readers not familiar with Red Star verse are learning about how the verse works the same way Buffy is).

I am really looking forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Crossing" from alynambered
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This continues to be an intriguing and enjoyable story.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Crossing" from (Current Donor)Tempi
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So the plot thickens. I like the semi-russian setting. Not a lot of Buffy stories happens in that kind of country.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Crossing" from Gideon
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Loose lips sink ships! Buffy may have to get in the habit of looking into the shadows with her "good" eye. And they should expect to find some more competent robbers or thieves in their path soon. The description of the ice crossing was really good, very scary :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Crossing" from AllenPitt
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hm, but the bad guy still knows next to nothing about what Buffy is capable of. So..South. China, maybe?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Travel" from AllenPitt
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and they've finally attracted notice. Made a lot of progress beforehand though. With luck they'll make even more before anyone official intercepts. Hm, Red Fleet likely has her down as a deserter. That's probably not good.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Travel" from Gideon
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Good to see a bit more of the background. It will be interesting to see how Buffy can make an impact in a world where such large and powerful forces are being thrown around. Now will the mysterious shadow be friend or foe?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Expedition Begins" from AllenPitt
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Funny, Buffy thinking 80 miles wasn't a huge distance for them to have covered. She's doing really well for a California girl. Then again she did like ice skating as a kid.. Maybe she'll get a chance to do that, here. Any chance the Big Bad will be from her world?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Expedition Begins" from dcarson
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Did they ditch their skis? I'd think they will need them again unless the destination ends up right on a road.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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