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Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from clarityfades
Review:
Okay...I kinda love this. :D Mainly because it cracked me up. LOVE God's dog helping Buffy out & her not being sure if the ideas came from herself or the dog. & I LOVED Buffy making Xander wear the tutu & Kennedy the collar. Hilarious! Great chapter, so glad you decided to try your hand at a loop! :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Oh, that's hilarious! I like puppy!god and how he was able to do what Buffy couldn't on her own. And it doesn't hurt that she was able to get a little harmless revenge on some of the others for the previous loops.

Thanks for adding your own loop! It was really impressive for a first posting (at least on TtH). Guess this means you should write some more, huh?
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from Razordreams
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Oh my god, i had to wipe my screen clean of the tea I sprayed all over it. I love the story concept and really like this chapter. *note the sudden burst of laughter while drinking leading to a messy monitor* So, thank you for writing these amusing stories =)
Review By [Razordreams] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
ROFLMAO! That was excellent! I enjoyed this chapter *so* much!
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from spk
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OMG!! This was the best one yet!! Still chuckling over it! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from draconis
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Arf-men! and Howl-elujah!

Let us paws and give snacks to Dog.
Review By [draconis] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from EllandrahSylver
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*snickers* This was great. I love how Buffy was able to predict how so many things wee going ot happen, because she'd done them all multiple times before, and then she realised that she might not have been running as much of a con on everyone as she thought.

Great stuff...
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from cmdruhura
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This is awesome.

However, you shouldn't stay off your meds too long or the men with butterfly nets and white coats with too long sleeves may just restrict your freedom to produce other interesting stories.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from tomfo
Review:
Now that was funny, thanks for a great read. Also, wasn't Damien Thorn the kid with 666 on his head from the movies where he is the antichrist, I don't remember the proper name but there were I think 3 movies made.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Duplicitous Plan" from Harry
Review:
ROFL! Now this was a intresting story! I loved the ending with the Army of God with the symbol being a Collar and Leash. Now, CRY HAVOK AND UNLEASH THE HOUNDS OF WAR!
Review By [Harry] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preemptive Failure" from clarityfades
Review:
LOL...that was funny. I especially like that D'Hoffryn made her plan work for HIM. :D Definitely deserves his leadership position over the vengeance demons. & I love Buffy's idea to send a copy of the loops to Dawn after the apocolypse. PERFECT!
Comments from author:
*grins* Well, he's got to have SOME reason that he's the King of Arashmaharr... It doesn't really strike me as the kind of title that could be inherited.

EllandrahSylver
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preemptive Failure" from Harry
Review:
Not bad. May have lost Xander in this timeline, but getting the Scythe pays off much more. Now, how about B using the movie idea to humilate Kennedy, so we get rid of her.
Comments from author:
Or perhaps, to force her to show her true colors, so that Willow will show her the door?

EllandrahSylver
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preemptive Failure" from AllenPitt
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A 'bloopers' real for Dawn. That would be a very weird thing for her to see. I like the idea of her seeing it, and finally 'getting' what Buffy was talking about. From their perspective everything was fine then Buffy suddenly lost her mind and left the team shortly after they finally beat the First. .. though of course all the rifts date back much farther --at least to the 4th season where the team fell apart. They patched things over, but it was just a patch after that. It was never the same post high school (and even there, I think the big rift happened at end of S2--they treated her pretty badly when she returned in S3).
Anyway-- how come watchers all over the world 'sent their potentials for protection' but NONE of the watchers came with? (I know, budget). But why not get a half dozen or more watchers to come along and actually help out? Training etc. Worth a try in one of these loops.
Comments from author:
That would be interesting. Maybe a loop where Buffy tells Giles, "If you send those girls here, Their Watchers come with them, and they ALL better be ready to do as they're told. Otherwise, find something else to do with them because this is where the Apocalypse is happening. It's a Watcher's job to protect his Potential."

EllandrahSylver
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preemptive Failure" from Gideon
Review:
A Highlights reel is a great idea. I hope it doesn't show Buffy killing Anya :(
Comments from author:
It probably would. Along with all the other times she couldn't help 'letting' somebody die or get hurt. If it was done correctly, it would show Xander popping up behind her not once but TWICE that go-round, and startling her. Which, by the way, he tended to do, and that was dumb.

EllandrahSylver
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preemptive Failure" from divaslayer
Review:
Well, that was interesting. Nice way to have Buffy "killed". Can't wait to read more.

Dani
Comments from author:
Just going for something different. I love Buffy, I really do, but I like writing interesting and thought-provoking stories more...

EllandrahSylver
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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