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Review of chapter "Regroup" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Regroup" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Regroup" from ThePureOne
Review:
After glory's long gone you should continue this story with a new villian and them with there new powers
Comments from author:
Don't know we'll have to wait and see.
Review By [ThePureOne] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Regroup" from djhardim
Review:
Possible attack stategy for Tara - shrink down, enter Glory's ear and hit her with an Energy Blast
Comments from author:
a possibility
Review By [djhardim] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Regroup" from RafMereC
Review:
Great chapter.

Raf
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Regroup" from djhardim
Review:
Good. One thought on your previous reply

"and if you read the story you would note that the scoobies couldn't use real power houses because the raw power would destroy them. hence the reason why there was no Hulk level characters."

What would have happened if two of them had adopted the identities of Billy Batson(Captain Marvel) and Mary Marvel(Mary Batson/Bromfield)? Both were ordinary humans until they uttered the word "Shazam". In canon they survived their transitions to and from without any problems.

Edit: Possible attack stategy for Tara - shrink down, enter Glory's ear and hit her with an Energy Blast
Comments from author:
Thanks, I admit to not knowing that Marvel family very well you also have to consider that they were using a chaos spell which has all sorts of unpredictable reactions. Besides this way the characters still have to work at winning.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Clothes" from RedCalypso
Review:
Tigra? Really? Why not Ms. Marvel or Namorita? Both of them are real powerhouses, that frankly leave Tigra in the dust.
Comments from author:
and if you read the story you would note that the scoobies couldn't use real power houses because the raw powerwould destroy them. hence the reason why there was no Hulk level characters.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [14 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Please finish this...


I really want to see Dawn/Shadowkat step backward off the tower and just stand there as the idiot's trying to cut her go falling down down down...

;)

hmm
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Dragonelf
Review:
I like what you have done so far with the story and I am looking forward to read more soon (provided that your plot bunny is cooperating).

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Imperial Cheese Pie::

# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
# = # = # = # = # = # = #
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [19 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A New Plan" from tactless
Review:
Ya know, I'm not completely convinced that the Marvel characters won't be able to find a way back in time. There are a whole lot of very smart people and people who are able to go trans-dimensional in the Marvel U. Of course the supers getting back just in time to watch the Scoobies win by themselves would be very satisfying as well :)
Comments from author:
shh your going to ruin the surprise save.
Review By [tactless] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from TroyGuffey
Review:
I might have picked a more eclectic mix not totally Marvel super-heroes. Blade with an enchanted blade; The Orange Horde, Naruto Uzimaki; the time-looped Sakura from the end of Shaper V's "Time Braid", Ranma Satome; Doc Savage, a Super!Harry Potter (one of the rune-master/artificers probably); Forge; a "Bleach" Shiginami (could they withstand Ichigo's powers?), Rheba the Fire Dancer (Ann Maxwell "Fire Dancer") Kimball Kinnison in full battle armor....

Would Lina Inverse the Pink have overloaded the Scoobies? Let's see Glory suck on a Dragon Slave!
Comments from author:
okay most of those I don't even know so I can't say if they would fit into this story very well. Blade seems to be the only one that would except for the small skin thing that they have. As for Naruto well his potential would put him into the heavy list. Seriously the 9 tails nearly destroyed an entire village I think that qualifies as overpowered. Same with a super HP. I was trying to go for heroes that weren't heavy on the extra power more that they would push Glory but not beat her. That's the problem with most costume fics is that the power makes all the other problems not a problem. Hence low level fighters on the raw power scale.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [28 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Jaylynn
Review:
So when they try to slash Dawn's belly, they might be surprised to find it goes right through her. I wonder how they plan to deal with that part or if glory's not thinking of that.
Comments from author:
Glory thinking beyond 5 seconds doesn't happen all that often. The idea she might not be able to cut her hasn't even registered to her yet.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Bobboky
Review:
Good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Senko
Review:
Well plan A failed onto plan B, specifically the enjoining spell they used against Adam. Hmmm an empowered Tigra form Buffy might even be able to sustain Thor's Janos granted abilities. The cat goddess of Thunder Buftior vs the insane hell goddess Glorificus, fight. Oh well looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [Senko] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
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