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Review of chapter "A New Plan" from tactless
Review:
Ya know, I'm not completely convinced that the Marvel characters won't be able to find a way back in time. There are a whole lot of very smart people and people who are able to go trans-dimensional in the Marvel U. Of course the supers getting back just in time to watch the Scoobies win by themselves would be very satisfying as well :)
Comments from author:
shh your going to ruin the surprise save.
Review By [tactless] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from TroyGuffey
Review:
I might have picked a more eclectic mix not totally Marvel super-heroes. Blade with an enchanted blade; The Orange Horde, Naruto Uzimaki; the time-looped Sakura from the end of Shaper V's "Time Braid", Ranma Satome; Doc Savage, a Super!Harry Potter (one of the rune-master/artificers probably); Forge; a "Bleach" Shiginami (could they withstand Ichigo's powers?), Rheba the Fire Dancer (Ann Maxwell "Fire Dancer") Kimball Kinnison in full battle armor....

Would Lina Inverse the Pink have overloaded the Scoobies? Let's see Glory suck on a Dragon Slave!
Comments from author:
okay most of those I don't even know so I can't say if they would fit into this story very well. Blade seems to be the only one that would except for the small skin thing that they have. As for Naruto well his potential would put him into the heavy list. Seriously the 9 tails nearly destroyed an entire village I think that qualifies as overpowered. Same with a super HP. I was trying to go for heroes that weren't heavy on the extra power more that they would push Glory but not beat her. That's the problem with most costume fics is that the power makes all the other problems not a problem. Hence low level fighters on the raw power scale.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [28 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Jaylynn
Review:
So when they try to slash Dawn's belly, they might be surprised to find it goes right through her. I wonder how they plan to deal with that part or if glory's not thinking of that.
Comments from author:
Glory thinking beyond 5 seconds doesn't happen all that often. The idea she might not be able to cut her hasn't even registered to her yet.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Bobboky
Review:
Good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from Senko
Review:
Well plan A failed onto plan B, specifically the enjoining spell they used against Adam. Hmmm an empowered Tigra form Buffy might even be able to sustain Thor's Janos granted abilities. The cat goddess of Thunder Buftior vs the insane hell goddess Glorificus, fight. Oh well looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [Senko] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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I am not convinced that Dawn would have surrendered, maybe, but maybe not. It does add to the story though so good enough for me!

Great story, thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [28 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Empowered Scoobies" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
And it obviously hasn't occured to Glory that Dawn can now escape whenever she pleases.

She could even let them tie her up on that scaffold and then phase out just before they have to bleed her.
Comments from author:
You honestly expect Glory to do her own thinking?
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [28 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from grd
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Outstanding battle. Hope the Scoobies retain as much of the team's spirit as abilities. Scoobies Assemble! Using the Hulk as a comparison is a very good guess considering Ben/Banner. Hope the get her/him soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks I think DianeCastle's fic (the League of Extraordinary Women) inspired me. Had a decent fight between Buffy and a somewhat decent analyst of Glory's fighting style.
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from dabraning
Review:
Great fight scene, looking forward to more.
Review By [dabraning] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from SamDragon
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Iron Fist hasn't tried the Iron Fist yet,wonder how well it would work,if at all.
Syrin needs to hit Dazzler with her scream for a while,that would pump her laser's up to a really high level.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from war
Review:
That was a nasty fight. Wonder what the plan is now.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Well it is a fully charged Glory that they're fighting.

Glad you liked it.
Review By [war] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from Riniko
Review:
Don't see why Shadowcat can't just run a steel pole through Glory and then let it turn solid again. Or the Wasp blast her in the ear with one of her stings. I think that they are holding back on damaging Glory in the mistaken belief that they can reason with her.
Comments from author:
Well they are used to just beating their foe into submission until the police cart them away here they won't have that option. It will provide a somewhat moral dilemma for them won't it.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Glory vs. Marvel" from mendal
Review:
Syrin should be charging up dazzler to her max capacity.
Comments from author:
Only person that's been able to do that is Galactus.
Review By [mendal] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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