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Review of chapter "Lay of the Land" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting again, but I'm still worried about the possible time limit. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heroes Born" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool. And the other factor is that the spell might only last for 12 or 24 hours. It wasn't meant to be a permanent spell.
Comments from author:
Yeah I was thinking about that and there will be a few consequences because of that.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Clothes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Now that I think about it... the spell would cause chaos in both the short term and long term. I think Janus would like it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A New Plan" from VillageOrchid
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I like the idea that they have to do it strategically. Also it seems that Athena or Artemis might be a better idea for Giles to call on... but the idea of opening a dimensional portal-ish doorway might work; except Giles will have to make a sacrifice... maybe.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lay of the Land" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lay of the Land" from grd
Review:
This is so very good. Nice to hear praise of the Scoobies from Cap. Hope try can avoid the sacrifice that Buffy was forced to do. Hope they learn a bit to avoid the "Civil War" mess in their world.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it. The sacrifice part we'll wait and see where the wind blows my muse. Civil War, I've never actually read any of the stuff for it actually so can't say yay or nay on that. From what I know of it though it sounds like they tanked a lot of things.
Review By [grd] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lay of the Land" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Very excellently done. The covert actions undertaken by each of them detail the characters' mindsets brilliantly as well.

I do like that the geekier vamps cited Blade, but it's clear the guys in question only saw the Blade movies (to chuckle at the irony), or they would have known about Baron Blood.

One question, does Dazzler do Daylight? If her radiance could be used as a form of solar weapon, well..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [17 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heroes Born" from SamDragon
Review:
Nice.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heroes Born" from kirylyn
Review:
YES!! the author wins mega bonus points for including Shadowkat and Lockheed in the group.

Tho I would think Spike could handle Wolverine's body (plus he could still smoke!)
Comments from author:
But would Xander willing have given such a cool and badass costume to Spike?
Review By [kirylyn] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heroes Born" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heroes Born" from grd
Review:
I love it. Looking forward to the eventual confrontation with Glory and her ugly minions.
Review By [grd] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heroes Born" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Review By [RHatch] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Clothes" from RafMereC
Review:
Great premise.
Hope to see more.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Clothes" from Zyanadryn
Review:
good start. hope to see more soon
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Clothes" from jormunguard
Review:
You have an interesting plot line going here, and I would very much like to see where you go with it. The only question I have is in regards to the costume choices. You said they were chosen based on the mystical power level of the Scoobies. Following this I kinda have to question the choices for Willow, Anya and Giles. I mean that Willow was shown in the series as being a mystical powerhouse, literally the only one that successfully hurt Glory, but giving her someone comparatively weak compared to Dr. Strange and Dazzler.
I can see Anya as Dazzler because you stated that she kept some of her power from her demon days. But giving Giles Dr. Strange just doesn't make any sense, Giles was never shown to have any real power when it came to magic. He was very knowledgeable about magic but he was never shown to be really powerful, I mean if I remember correctly the only spell he did unaided by another was when he summoned Anyanka in the Wishverse. Every other time he had the aid of either Willow, Amy, Jenny or Ethan, who were all shown to have mystical power at some level. If I'm wrong in this please tell me where because it's something I've been trying to look into for a story.

EDIT: I can see your point in that no one except Tara really knew how powerfull Willow was at this point.
I didn't mean that Syrin's power was weak just in comparison to Dazzler and Dr. Strange. I mean Dazzler is only limited by how much sound is in the area she's in and we all know how powerful Dr. Strange is.
But anyway it should be interesting to see where you go with this. Especially if you have Anya/Dazzler work with Willow/Syrin that combo would be excedingly devistating.
Comments from author:
Glad you like my story and now I'll try to clarify a few things for you.

Alright Giles is going to be going with no costume as he has to perform the spell and explain things to the heroes as he said to Xander when he was offered a costume. And Xander suggested Dr. Druid, a much lower level sorcerer and former avenger than what Strange is. Xander suggested Strange, but he didn't actually get him the costume for that.

As for Siren being weak well I guess you could consider sonic screams weak, I thought that they were a rather useful power since it would give her an offesive ability since Glory can't move faster than sound. Willow might of had power at this time, but she still had very little control of her magic without Tara guiding her along. She was just on the verge of discovering her true potential and only Tara really understood just how powerful Willow was capable of being. It wasn't until after raisng Buffy that Willow became compentent enough with her magic to do serious things on her own. Then she was like a kid with a shiny new toy.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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