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JazzibearReview:
Looks good so far – I’m not lost yet.
More to come soon, I hope?
Comments from author:
More to come. :D
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Jazzibear] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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maydaymasonReview:
Looks very promising. I'm a bit worried about the number of crossovers, and how you will reconcile all the different back stories at play here. The mention of the replicators as a threat during the Ori war is interesting, in case its not an error. I had to look it up myself.
Comments from author:
I love multiple crossovers, and it's often surprisingly easy to reconcile! Let me know how you think I did. :D
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maydaymason] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
A great set-up.
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eriktheviking] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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TurfSurferReview:
I am intrigued. Proceed.
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TurfSurfer] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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trongodReview:
Solid start, got the people and their interactions started; sorry Faith isn't part of Xander's l(ove)ife here, but what can you do?
Hoping to see more, perhaps how long it's been since they consolidated the new Council - maybe via flashbacks? - in the up coming chapters, especially how the two different organizations react to each other during the training phases... The science types may be really weirded out by the mystical aspects of the newcomers, and the military discipline might freak the free spirits among the Watcher crew...
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trongod] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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kayronReview:
Interesting. Good planning nd details going in. I like this story already.
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kayron] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]