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RafMereCReview:
Nice.
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RafMereC] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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razielCAReview:
wish this was a longer chapter but like the story so far.
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razielCA] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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AbscondingCascadeReview:
Intriguing, I look forward to see where you're going to go with this. In thanks a bit of music I found whilst surfing youtube -
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L9Z8lcek7SkReview By [
AbscondingCascade] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
cool
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Bobboky] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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RoyalTwinFangsReview:
I need more. Can't Xander study some weaponry and learn how to make it? Also can he use the different knowledge to make different thing?
"A good scientist is a person with original ideas. A good engineer is a person who makes a design that works with as few original ideas as possible" - Freeman John Dyson
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RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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cataclysimReview:
Great update! No one has every merged these two universes or three in this case so well.
Your take on Intuitive aptitude is a little different than cannon but it flows much better. This would allow Xander to copy abilities without killing, at least i hope so, killing for it would also be good ;) Looking forward to more.
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cataclysim] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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MorgomirReview:
Great chapter. Why though did you repost the first chapter? Keep up the good work.
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Morgomir] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
