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The Legacy of the Xel'naga

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Review of chapter "2" from KingOfCretins
Review:
There are two things to keep in mind, first the fact that Peter was eventually able to control the "Hunger" would seem to indicate that what gave Sylar so much trouble was psychological and or he became warped and developed a taste for killing.

The second thing to keep in mind is that Sylar eventually learned how to copy an ability without killing seemingly by studying how the person uses their ability much like Xander has learned magic mostly by studying how others have done it.

This means that Xander does not need to become a massive serial killer, while it’s almost inevitable that he will kill one or two people unlike Sylar I see Xander being more like Peter in that he will be able to gain control of the "Hunger" especially if there are alternatives to killing. Although it would be interesting to see him take the approach of killing and taking the abilities of bad guys which would put him firmly in a grey area.

Good work so far keep writing.
Review By [KingOfCretins] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from RafMereC
Review:
Nice.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from razielCA
Review:
wish this was a longer chapter but like the story so far.
Review By [razielCA] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Intriguing, I look forward to see where you're going to go with this. In thanks a bit of music I found whilst surfing youtube - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L9Z8lcek7Sk
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from RoyalTwinFangs
Review:
I need more. Can't Xander study some weaponry and learn how to make it? Also can he use the different knowledge to make different thing?

"A good scientist is a person with original ideas. A good engineer is a person who makes a design that works with as few original ideas as possible" - Freeman John Dyson
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from cataclysim
Review:
Great update! No one has every merged these two universes or three in this case so well.
Your take on Intuitive aptitude is a little different than cannon but it flows much better. This would allow Xander to copy abilities without killing, at least i hope so, killing for it would also be good ;) Looking forward to more.
Review By [cataclysim] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "2" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Why though did you repost the first chapter? Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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