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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wynde
I have to admit I was rather leery going into this. Too many OC's are just badly disguised Mary/Marty Sues. But I'm really liking Black Jack and, okay, the fact that you modeled him after Karl Urban/Black Hat is just total icing on the cake. Can't wait to see what you do with this. Oh, and I really liked the mirror trick.
Comments from author:
That's one of the reasons that I don't create that many OC's. I don't like Mary/Marty Sues any more than the next reader. LOL, like I said, he just jumped me and made me write him down. Thanks, I thought it would be useful for them to be able to talk to each other as well as simply at each other.
Review By [Wynde] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from tosca
Very interesting! Looking forward to seeing what happens.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [tosca] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LordSchmodder
Nice one.
I'd like to see more, soon :)
You had a good idea with the mirror for their interaction.
Comments from author:
I hope so too. We'll have to see what the muse wants.

Thanks, it makes it more interesting than having them talk at each other all the time.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Xeelia
AWE!! Awesome chapter and I can't wait to see the next time they meet up!! :D
Comments from author:
Thank You
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [21 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from NutsContract
Wow, that was just a hop, skip, and jump into a pseudo-relationship (even though the two--or three?-- parties don't realize yet). Looking forward to the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Lol, Black is just being a typical vampire - a possessive sob about what he sees as his. And of course, where Black goes, Jack usually isn't too far behind. They've waited thirty years to find someone who could be a real friend, and what with her being female and all, well it didn't take long for that to occur to them.

As far as Dawn is concerned, if it happens, it happens and the only reason she even thought about it was because everyone else was bringing it up. Plus, 18 and no real boyfriend because of the rest of the Scoobies being all super-protective makes for a rather frustrated ex-Key. ;)
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
I'm aware you don't know from Black Jack the anime character. I like your character a lot, but I also wanted to recommend you check out the guy, I saw some of the series when i was younger and I was highly impressed with him, as well.
Comments from author:
I'm leery.

I really don't like anime, as in almost violently opposed to it. It's not that I don't think that the style is not worth anything, or something like that. It's simply that soft porn should never, NEVER, be shoved at children. My kids tried to tell me about the stories, but all I could see were the so called girls wearing clothes that I would be shocked to see on an adult in those situations. I come from a family of artists. I know perspective. I know just how short those so called skirts are and just how far down those tops go. I know that they don't "show" anything. That doesn't make it any better.

That being said, could you tell me what the series is? I don't like to ignore recommendations from my readers, and two of you have rec'd this one. I'll hold my breath and try to ignore the artwork in order to check out the character.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NutsContract
Wow, I really, really liked this. I usually can't stand OCs, especially in Buffyverse, but you've managed to make one (technically two) extremely likeable. Please (emphasis on the please :) ) update soon. I would love to see where this story is going!
Comments from author:
Thank you very much!

Honestly, so would I, lol. I never know where the muse is headed, but I've been told that this is a serious relationship so we'll all see where it ends up.
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [20 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from YoruHana
I know you have him as in OC, but for some reason when he said his name I flashed back to the character from that one old anime. The one about Dr. Black Jack able to cure almost anything, even if no one else could.
Comments from author:
I actually don't watch anime, so I don't have a clue. Black Jack came to me when I was watching the YouTube videos of Black Hat from the movie Priest. For some reason I can't actually go out to create new characters, you know like sit down and actually try and plot one out. They just spring forth fully formed from my subconscious. I actually didn't have a name when I started putting this down on figurative paper, but in the end decided to call him Black in honor of the character that Karl Urban played in the movie, and added Jack as that was a common name linked with Black.
Review By [YoruHana] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xeelia
Oooooo please don't leave this a one shot!! Great story!!
Comments from author:
Nope, not a one shot, but I'm not sure where this is going.
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
I likeee

The two really got a crappy deal. Dawn is the most likely to understand since she got kind of a crappy deal as well being Buffy's Sister. Buffy's life pretty much dictated her life and that always stinks.

Being the Key she might be instrumental in helping the two of them, just maybe.
Comments from author:
Thank you! There is a reason that Dawn sounds a little off, I promise. The explanation will be coming in the next chapter.

Yeah, they did. They really just popped right up and started telling me about it. I didn't even remember Glory until over a week later. Dawn does understand crappy deals like you said. She can't even try to get a date without half a dozen of the best demon killers in the world coming down on the poor guy and making threats, not to mention just having a simple friend.

Black Jack's deal is permanent. There is no going back for them. They know that and really have become brothers of the heart, but they've never had anyone who could handle what they are, so Dawn is really a big shock to them. Not only can she handle it, (scoobies are the best at rolling with the weird lol) but she's actually standing up for Black rather than saying what a bad deal that Jack got. That right there makes them both like her a lot.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [19 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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