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Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from Rich
Review:
Excellent . As some have pointed out, this story isn't big on violent action, but so what ? Neither was the show it's based on, and that was enormously popular, as was the original "Mission: Impossible" series. Personally, I think this made a nice change of pace - and as someone else already pointed out, it expands Buffy's skills. Compared to the show, she's become (and is becoming) a much better leader and planner, which is very much of the good. Congratulations !
Review By [Rich] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What I did on my summer vacation and a new job" from JimmX
Review:
Fun story. But I'm not sure what the title means, since it was clearly a 'heist movie' story.

Thanks for sharing it with us.
Review By [JimmX] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from Tempi
Review:
A great story in your excellent series. The whole non-violent, cloak and dagger approach was a nice change of pace. I look forward to the next weird crossover.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I liked this. Swap the lightning bolts for WMDs or something and this is what a Mission: Impossible movie should have been.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from burmafrdnow
Review:
kind of have to agree this one ended kind of weak.

Need to finally get Buffy to break Maggie Walshes neck and finish that plot line. Something like that. I like the idea of Buffy ripping her heart out and showing it to her.
Comments from author:
I wanted to try writing a 1960s style caper movie updated for the modern era. So it was non-violent and exposition heavy and I got carried away by the details. I'll try to do better next time.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like this series.

This one was a little bit .... stale? meek? eh anyway, it wasn't that bad and I liked the details. What I missed was the personal interactions.

I'm glad that you used Hanna. I think she is a great character and I was looking forward to read about her when you first introduced her in the previous part. But I think there should have been some more bounding between Hanna and Buffy. That was what I really was missing.

Nevertheless I'm looking forward to the next installment of this series.
Comments from author:
I wanted to try writing a 1960s style caper movie updated for the modern era. So it was non-violent and exposition heavy and I got carried away by the details. I'll try to do better next time.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I did on my summer vacation and a new job" from texaswookie
Review:
Buff is really picking up an interesting and deadly slew of allies there Hanna Bourne A-Team and all of them make for a rather deadly unit. Makes me wonder what would ever happen that would require the collection of so many adverse characters to come together if things ever got really Harry. Also makes me wonder who is next. One of the best things about your series is that it goes with fairly unknown or less written about characters. Although Buffy is probably getting tired of hanging out with all of the guys all the time she Faith and Hanna have got to be feeling out numbered with all of the guys. Maybe you'll be able to find some obscure or half forgotten female character that can teach Buff a few things about the spy game that she's become a part of. Either that or she'll simply become the next Bond girl.

Till next time.
Comments from author:
Oh, her next crossover is definitely female.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I did on my summer vacation and a new job" from texaswookie
Review:
Buff is really picking up an interesting and deadly slew of allies there Hanna Bourne A-Team and all of them make for a rather deadly unit. Makes me wonder what would ever happen that would require the collection of so many adverse characters to come together if things ever got really Harry. Also makes me wonder who is next. One of the best things about your series is that it goes with fairly unknown or less written about characters. Although Buffy is probably getting tired of hanging out with all of the guys all the time she Faith and Hanna have got to be feeling out numbered with all of the guys. Maybe you'll be able to find some obscure or half forgotten female character that can teach Buff a few things about the spy game that she's become a part of. Either that or she'll simply become the next Bond girl.

Till next time.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prometheus Only Stole Fire" from JoeDineen
Review:
Seems too easy, is the other shoe going to drop in a later story?

Good stuf though.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...three to get ready..." from Gideon
Review:
Good to see Buffy is still expanding her eclectic skillset :) This is the type of job where you really need to call on experts from different fields. Quick and dirty is not the way.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...three to get ready..." from xLovingHeartsx
Review:
Awesome story! Every thought about doing a Stargate series with Buffy! I would definitely read it if you do! Possibly a Stargate Universe, I would love to see what you would do if you do one!
Comments from author:
Everybody else does SG and I'm not a fan at all of SGU so it would be a lousy story. :(
Review By [xLovingHeartsx] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...three to get ready..." from serenityselena
Review:
another adventure for Buffy.... and now she has such a diverse group....
can`t wait to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...two for the show..." from slmncpm
Review:
that was fantastic!!!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "...two for the show..." from Gideon
Review:
It is scary how easy that was for Charlie :0
Review By [Gideon] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "...two for the show..." from Mcspender
Review:
Erica Ramm???. Wonder where Harth and Wolf are?. Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
No relation...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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