OMG!! This is awesome!!! Is the Doctor finally going to admit he likes Buffy? Why didn't he want to call her Buffy? Why did he insist on calling her Elizabeth? Update soon, yeah? I love this series!!
you have me in stitches with this little arc. Seriously I'm giggling here. I keep picturing the doctor trying to explain to Giles just why they need to get Buffy to "Stop doing that!" The number of "Oh dear lord's" would be staggering once Giles figured out just how it is that the doctor is reacting to Buffy's mental manipulations.
Love it. Waiting for more.
Review By [Arkaedia] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Keshkreature
Review:
Hehehe, poor Doctor.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Oh, that is amazing. How in the world did you figure out how to write like that? One would guess... research... was involved...
Comments from author:
It took a looooooot of sculpting. Because all the sentences are little fragments, which is hard to write well. It feels like you're chiseling at a piece of marble, when you're editing it, because you keep shaving off all the unnecessary, non-caveman words. Other than that, it's just normal writing with a lot less grammatically correct sentences.
Content-wise, the reason I liked this idea was because I could take a very complicated relationship and reduce it to cavewoman logic. Buffy's still completely Buffy, but she isn't thinking of temporal anomalies or timelines or alienness or any of the rest of it. She simplifies things. She wants to be near the Doctor. She wants to make sure the Doctor doesn't leave. She wants to save people. And, you'll see later, she knows the Doctor's always sad and alone, and she really wants him to be happy.
The hardest thing isn't the writing style -- you work that out after a while. The hard thing is to have it be both cavewoman and Buffy at the same time. I hope I got that.
Review By [DrakePendragon] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love this series and am so glad to see the next installation of the Adventures of a Line Hopper. I was however wondering who and what the mysterious trio of hell are?
Comments from author:
Oh, that's the big question, isn't it? Don't worry, you'll find out.
DrakePendragon
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