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Review of chapter "Torrent" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting way to have continuing adventures in the same "problem".
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decoy" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm a little confused as to where Buffy has been for the past few chapters. Fighting elsewhere in the battle I suppose, but I think I missed that bit of exposition.
Comments from author:
Buffy went with the other team when they entered the Citadel

Here's the line

"Two teams, Vogel, Wilson, Stein, St Martine, Dawws, Guererra, Buffy. Me, McReady,Miller, Carroll, Akasi, Tasha. We need intel so that's first priority, second is killing as many of these bastards as you can. Any questions?"
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from DieselDriver
Review:
This was a really cool. I'm looking forward to much more really good reading from you.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from DieselDriver
Review:
See! I told those doubters that she had to have gotten a leg somehow. And now there is a mystery as to how and who made the fancy prosthetic. I love it when a plan comes to fruition. Even if it's not mine as long as it's a plan for the good.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from moglwi
Review:
I enjoyed both your stories with tasha and I hoe you will be returning to these stories
Review By [moglwi] • Date [25 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from lunalurker
Review:
A surprisingly good series to read, considering my total lack of knowledge so far for anyone in the story besides Buffy. Natasha is a great character, and in no way resembles the actual definition of the dreaded Mary Sue, so no need to stress about that.
Thanks for writing and hope to see more from you soon. :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [20 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torrent" from maxthehobbit
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I really like Natasha and Buffy as a team. This as a sequel seemed better than the original ... maybe because you didn't need to explain so much, just plenty of action. Great story.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [15 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torrent" from tomfo
Review:
So nice to see Tasha is as sneaky as ever. Thanks for another great fic, hoping to see more from you soon.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from Gideon
Review:
Cool ending. Buffy found a way to use military resources for once! And now they get to skip all that pesky space travel between planets :) I wonder how they will be remembered in that other universe when they return?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torrent" from Tempi
Review:
A great story in your excellent series. Buffy and Natascha make for a great duo. I look forward to their next adventure.

Making the Slayer loose a valuable weapon is just cruel. I'm sure a future Nimrod auto-cannon won't cause something as insignificant as a time paradox. ;-)
Review By [Tempi] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Torrent" from JimmX
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She's getting a bit super, but then so is Buffy. :-) Still, good stuff, thanks for sharing it with us.
Review By [JimmX] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Torrent" from AllenPitt
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Losing a node will make some entities a little unhappy, I'm guessing. Super volcano? That would have stung in the morning. Maybe next time they can bring along some nice equipment? Willow might prepare some spells? But if she can research, that would be great. I wonder if they got hold of that book Wesley had at W&H (speak any book's name, it fills up the pages with that...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [14 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decoy" from PATM
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Roger that, more fun to read and laugh. Great story.
Review By [PATM] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decoy" from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Fantastic story. So glad that you decided to make this a series. I would give it a reco, but I am out of them at the moment-but story is most definitely recommendation worthy.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [13 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Decoy" from Gideon
Review:
I see Natasha has raised some pretty high expectations in her teammates :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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