A bit of patience goes a long way in a fight and with a plan and some patience Tasha has triumphed again! I kinda miss seeing what is happening with the rest of the team or Buffy because of the first person viewpoint but I guess that is unavoidable. Maybe Buffy can describe her fights later?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Nice. Nothing like a one ton quarterstaff :) And luckily she has just found what she was looking for. Can she control it in the water without actually seeing it?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
They just don't make Nepharites like they used to. Hopefully Buffy will have a chance to shine soon, too? Meanwhile, always fun to make an enemy base go boom.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Ah, someone has come along to assist her in her search. Ok --the owner of the voice has presumably seen what she's just done and is not fleeing in terror? Wow. Meanwhile, so far this group has done very well, taking out some high level stuff Must be embarrassing for the base commander.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Mar 12] • Not Rated
There should be enough destruction to rain down and satisfy even Buffy. Are they planning to destroy the Citadel or just get in and get out again? I'm not familiar with the "Art" or the "dark powers" so it will be interesting to see them in action.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I believe Baba Yaga is just sending them so she can get some good entertainment. Too much poir quality shows anymore, so she gets Buffy and Tasha and at the same time kicks evil butt. Love it that both of them, no matter what era can surprise and hold their own. Well done.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
So why not destroy the dark base with an air strike or artillery barrage? I seem to remember a big honking' sp gun in the game book. I mean the hard part was identifying the location, and they are basically in a free fire zone. Cannon cocker's can get so whiny and petulant when they don't get to play too. Unleash the 'King' !!
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
This is like slayer heaven for Buffy. Lots of baddies to kill, and not so much with the hours and hours of researching. See evil, shoot evil. None of this "oh it can only be killed by an enchanted knife under the full moon" nonsense.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
I don't review every chapter of every story, sorry.
But I have to say you're consistently pleasing. Good grammar, minimal typos, interesting characters and stories...all around "good to eat".
I'm curious though; by this much time speaking "Lion" with and around Buffy, wouldn't Natasha have begun to get a better grasp on speaking, and begin to include the missing articles that denote her Varan origin? Are, am, etc? She seems to still consistently omit them.
Comments from author:
I don't expect any reviews actually :)
Well, thank you.
I know a Syrian store owner who has lived in the United States for ten years and raised his kids here, who has a hard time speaking any English. Some people pick up languages well, some don't. Tasha only speaks Varan and limited Lion. Of course, seeing as she tends to live away from most people, it's actually surprising she still remembers Varan.
Review By [Sithspit] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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