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Review of chapter "Raid" from AllenPitt
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They sure operate on a larger scale than the Master did. He just never had the budget for all the neat things he wanted to do, I suppose.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Breech" from AllenPitt
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Gee, pour resources into building a base and the stupid humans just stomp it. Hopefully there'll be some good intel out of this.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Insertion" from Gideon
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There should be enough destruction to rain down and satisfy even Buffy. Are they planning to destroy the Citadel or just get in and get out again? I'm not familiar with the "Art" or the "dark powers" so it will be interesting to see them in action.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparation" from Gideon
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Brother Vogel sounds like a bit of a badass too :) I can't wait to find out if Buffy will actually use that gun or not.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Insertion" from AllenPitt
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Presumably this is about gathering intel, i.e. they want to take it intact? Buffy & Natasha should come as an unpleasant surprise for the bad guys.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparation" from grd
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I believe Baba Yaga is just sending them so she can get some good entertainment. Too much poir quality shows anymore, so she gets Buffy and Tasha and at the same time kicks evil butt. Love it that both of them, no matter what era can surprise and hold their own. Well done.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparation" from evilredknight
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So why not destroy the dark base with an air strike or artillery barrage? I seem to remember a big honking' sp gun in the game book.
I mean the hard part was identifying the location, and they are basically in a free fire zone.
Cannon cocker's can get so whiny and petulant when they don't get to play too.
Unleash the 'King' !!
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparation" from AllenPitt
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This is like slayer heaven for Buffy. Lots of baddies to kill, and not so much with the hours and hours of researching. See evil, shoot evil. None of this "oh it can only be killed by an enchanted knife under the full moon" nonsense.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confession" from Gideon
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I'm glad Buffy's secrets have come out sooner rather than later. Hopefully they can all work more closely together as a result.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confession" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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I don't review every chapter of every story, sorry.

But I have to say you're consistently pleasing. Good grammar, minimal typos, interesting characters and stories...all around "good to eat".

I'm curious though; by this much time speaking "Lion" with and around Buffy, wouldn't Natasha have begun to get a better grasp on speaking, and begin to include the missing articles that denote her Varan origin? Are, am, etc? She seems to still consistently omit them.
Comments from author:
I don't expect any reviews actually :)

Well, thank you.

I know a Syrian store owner who has lived in the United States for ten years and raised his kids here, who has a hard time speaking any English. Some people pick up languages well, some don't. Tasha only speaks Varan and limited Lion. Of course, seeing as she tends to live away from most people, it's actually surprising she still remembers Varan.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confession" from war
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Always good to find dependable friends in hostile territory.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confession" from AllenPitt
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That conversation could have gone much worse. Buffy still avoids stuff about the source of her power, but it is harnessed for good and all that.
Assuming Vogel is ok with it all.... it's getting near time to go after the evil base and kick ass... I liked how confused the Dark Symmetry guy was with them. It could sense they were different but not what they were. That's encouraging.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night Fight" from AllenPitt
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They eat right and say their prayers at night. That's how come they're so good in battle. Not sure that will work, but worth a try! Or--they're on a mission from god. Who has a Russian accent.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night Fight" from Gideon
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Maybe Buffy should have pretended to shoot it when she was really cutting off its head?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night Fight" from alynambered
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Again, nice descriptive fight scenes. Also, good blend of action and explanations.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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