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Review of chapter "Preparation" from grd
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I believe Baba Yaga is just sending them so she can get some good entertainment. Too much poir quality shows anymore, so she gets Buffy and Tasha and at the same time kicks evil butt. Love it that both of them, no matter what era can surprise and hold their own. Well done.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparation" from evilredknight
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So why not destroy the dark base with an air strike or artillery barrage? I seem to remember a big honking' sp gun in the game book.
I mean the hard part was identifying the location, and they are basically in a free fire zone.
Cannon cocker's can get so whiny and petulant when they don't get to play too.
Unleash the 'King' !!
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparation" from AllenPitt
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This is like slayer heaven for Buffy. Lots of baddies to kill, and not so much with the hours and hours of researching. See evil, shoot evil. None of this "oh it can only be killed by an enchanted knife under the full moon" nonsense.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Confession" from Gideon
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I'm glad Buffy's secrets have come out sooner rather than later. Hopefully they can all work more closely together as a result.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confession" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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I don't review every chapter of every story, sorry.

But I have to say you're consistently pleasing. Good grammar, minimal typos, interesting characters and stories...all around "good to eat".

I'm curious though; by this much time speaking "Lion" with and around Buffy, wouldn't Natasha have begun to get a better grasp on speaking, and begin to include the missing articles that denote her Varan origin? Are, am, etc? She seems to still consistently omit them.
Comments from author:
I don't expect any reviews actually :)

Well, thank you.

I know a Syrian store owner who has lived in the United States for ten years and raised his kids here, who has a hard time speaking any English. Some people pick up languages well, some don't. Tasha only speaks Varan and limited Lion. Of course, seeing as she tends to live away from most people, it's actually surprising she still remembers Varan.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confession" from war
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Always good to find dependable friends in hostile territory.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confession" from AllenPitt
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That conversation could have gone much worse. Buffy still avoids stuff about the source of her power, but it is harnessed for good and all that.
Assuming Vogel is ok with it all.... it's getting near time to go after the evil base and kick ass... I liked how confused the Dark Symmetry guy was with them. It could sense they were different but not what they were. That's encouraging.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night Fight" from AllenPitt
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They eat right and say their prayers at night. That's how come they're so good in battle. Not sure that will work, but worth a try! Or--they're on a mission from god. Who has a Russian accent.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night Fight" from Gideon
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Maybe Buffy should have pretended to shoot it when she was really cutting off its head?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Night Fight" from alynambered
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Again, nice descriptive fight scenes. Also, good blend of action and explanations.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [7 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night Patrol" from AllenPitt
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I'm glad to see they're both not showing any extra-human abilities just yet. Maybe after they've proven themselves, but definitely not before. Buffy's powers really do 'come from darkness' as Dracula put it. Meanwhile, assault on Fort Evil, coming up!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night Patrol" from ShalaDakiri
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That hook is probably one of the coolest weapon/tools ever. Right up there with lightabers and Sonic screwdrivers.

Considering Natasha's the only one who's seen Buffy really cut loose, it'll be interesting to see reactions once they get into combat.
Comments from author:
Yeah, and the way Christian draws it makes it look cool too.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from Hecatonchires
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I noticed she still hasn't busted out the TK while fighting. Is the big long history lesson part of the gsne world?
Comments from author:
No she has not. Seeing what this world's opinion is on mystical abilities, both Tasha and Buffy are playing it normal.

The history is from the game world. Selectively altered and somethings intentionally glossed over or left out.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from AllenPitt
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Buffy's powers come from darkness, i.e. essence of a demon. Will that cause her any trouble with Inquisitor types later on? Just wondering... Gee, it's a good thing Illyria didn't come along on this trip. So--all they have to do is clear a few nodes, and done!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from slmncpm
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*smiles and hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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