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Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from Senko
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Vor?

I have to say this should be interesting and given the secrecy the corps have in this world they probably wont be happy with the girls poking around. Particularly if the nodes aren't just on Venus, I can just imagine the panic if they said they needed to go to Nemesis.

As for that last line I can just picture Buffy breathing it into some poor recruits ear ala horror movies. Wonder how the soldiers will react when they see Buffy's full combat potential.
Comments from author:
No, Mutant Chronicles/Warzone. Vor would be a nasty crossover though.
Review By [Senko] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Tense" from Gideon
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A good summary of a lot of history and it helps to explain why everything is not as high tech as would be expected. Will all of Buffy and Tasha's time be spent on Venus or will they have a chance to travel back to Earth as well?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Tense" from PATM
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Yahooooooo!!!!
Review By [PATM] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Tense" from AllenPitt
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And all Buffy and Natasha have to do clear a few nodes. Easy-peasy! Hm, at some point are the bad guys going to summon up any of B's old enemies? Just wondering...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from AllenPitt
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That went well! Having someone who can 'truth tell' makes things go so much smoother. Plus, beating people up always makes friends. Well, usually. Now all they have to do is beat the equivalent of a mass escape from the Deeper Well. Ouch.
Someday they're going to have to be allowed to take some extra people with them on these jaunts. Willow, maybe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from evilredknight
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Lovin' the story. Got a bit of a boggle though.
Tasha was born in 1948 ATR. Given the 32 year difference established in the other story - that would mean 1980 in Buffyland. Making her born in 1980. Only 1 year older then Buffy. Given her years as a Shock Trooper, and even more years AWOL that does not compute. Am I missing something?
Comments from author:
She's 43 so I probably screwed up.

Buffyverse= 2003 Red Star = 1971

Yeah I screwed up. Fixing it.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from RandomSelection
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I just love it when people underestimate Buffy or Tasha - nicely done! And I am glad Hauptmann Dampf seems to be out of the picture for now. You see, a 'Hans Dampf' is something alike to a 'Jack of all Trades' in German, so the name sounds a little ridiculous to me! But the Valkyre seems to have potential ...

Update soon, please!

RandomSelection
Comments from author:
I know his name is Captain Harold Steam unless my German has completely failed me.
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from alynambered
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Really like the start of this adventure!

Yay, Tasha and Pchelka. lol
Review By [alynambered] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In Custody" from Thedruid
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That's a nice confuseing start. I'm surprised they're being so open with the locals though.
Comments from author:
Why? They don't know the rules of this universe and who the sides are. They haven't revealed what they can do.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bauhaus" from war
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"We're from your past I think."

I bet that answer doesn't go over well.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from Valandar
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Oh, good lord, MUTANT CHRONICLES?!?!? This oughta get messy REAL quick, only worse game to throw these two into (in terms of the mess it would make) would be VOR... especially if the inhabitants of VOR ever found out Buffy and Tasha could leave. Awesome, let's see what happens next! :D
Comments from author:
I thought about VOR and then said nahhhhh. Do you think the Apostles or our two heroes are in worse trouble?
Review By [Valandar] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrival" from RandomSelection
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Hey, a sequel! And a lot sooner than I expected! Can't say much after just one chapter, but it's bound to be interesting! I had hoped, however, for some interection between Buffy and the Scoobies after her return, and maybe Tasha meeting them ... But maybe you could include a flashback at some point, showing B's return and the reactions?

I'm glad you are writing a sequel!

RandomSelection
Comments from author:
These are centered around Tasha so Buffy/Scooby interaction will be limited. However she's obviously met Willow (see shining new leg) and likes her. Some will be covered in thoughts, conversations, and asides.
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from AllenPitt
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I googled 'dark symmetry'. Wow, they're really in hot water on this one. Hm, I wonder if the mechanical leg can get 'corrupted'? Just a thought.
And hey--maybe Buffy has another 'twin' in this reality.
Comments from author:
If you've only googled it there is soooo much nastiness to surprise you. In some ways it's like Warhammer 40k with the kid gloves off and mugging you in an alley.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from evilredknight
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Great, another story! I figured this one out pretty quick.
I was wondering if you were going game or movie. - Like the choice.
I actually have the game. Maybe I'll dig it out.
Some of the toys(that go bang and boom) and character classes were pretty cool. You got to love a Universal Church that has holy ninjas. 8)
Comments from author:
A very close friend of mine (Matt Forbeck) was one of the lead developers on the game so I had to use it.

The Apostles (especially Ilian and Algeroth) and their minions are seriously bad news. I thought the soul corruption aspect worked really well to assist in Buffy rage.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrival" from vatisay
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Another story with Tasha and Buffy in another new world. The first story was great and i imagine so will this one. Not real sure yet exactly where you have put them, looking forward to finding out.
Review By [vatisay] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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