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Review of chapter "Night Patrol" from AllenPitt
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I'm glad to see they're both not showing any extra-human abilities just yet. Maybe after they've proven themselves, but definitely not before. Buffy's powers really do 'come from darkness' as Dracula put it. Meanwhile, assault on Fort Evil, coming up!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Night Patrol" from ShalaDakiri
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That hook is probably one of the coolest weapon/tools ever. Right up there with lightabers and Sonic screwdrivers.

Considering Natasha's the only one who's seen Buffy really cut loose, it'll be interesting to see reactions once they get into combat.
Comments from author:
Yeah, and the way Christian draws it makes it look cool too.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from Hecatonchires
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I noticed she still hasn't busted out the TK while fighting. Is the big long history lesson part of the gsne world?
Comments from author:
No she has not. Seeing what this world's opinion is on mystical abilities, both Tasha and Buffy are playing it normal.

The history is from the game world. Selectively altered and somethings intentionally glossed over or left out.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from AllenPitt
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Buffy's powers come from darkness, i.e. essence of a demon. Will that cause her any trouble with Inquisitor types later on? Just wondering... Gee, it's a good thing Illyria didn't come along on this trip. So--all they have to do is clear a few nodes, and done!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from slmncpm
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*smiles and hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from war
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Nice rematch between those two.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from Gideon
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If Buffy and Tasha are both keeping surprises back from their new friends then I wonder what surprises their new friends are keeping in reserve?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting People and Making Friends" from Senko
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Vor?

I have to say this should be interesting and given the secrecy the corps have in this world they probably wont be happy with the girls poking around. Particularly if the nodes aren't just on Venus, I can just imagine the panic if they said they needed to go to Nemesis.

As for that last line I can just picture Buffy breathing it into some poor recruits ear ala horror movies. Wonder how the soldiers will react when they see Buffy's full combat potential.
Comments from author:
No, Mutant Chronicles/Warzone. Vor would be a nasty crossover though.
Review By [Senko] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Tense" from Gideon
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A good summary of a lot of history and it helps to explain why everything is not as high tech as would be expected. Will all of Buffy and Tasha's time be spent on Venus or will they have a chance to travel back to Earth as well?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Tense" from PATM
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Yahooooooo!!!!
Review By [PATM] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Tense" from AllenPitt
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And all Buffy and Natasha have to do clear a few nodes. Easy-peasy! Hm, at some point are the bad guys going to summon up any of B's old enemies? Just wondering...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from AllenPitt
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That went well! Having someone who can 'truth tell' makes things go so much smoother. Plus, beating people up always makes friends. Well, usually. Now all they have to do is beat the equivalent of a mass escape from the Deeper Well. Ouch.
Someday they're going to have to be allowed to take some extra people with them on these jaunts. Willow, maybe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from evilredknight
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Lovin' the story. Got a bit of a boggle though.
Tasha was born in 1948 ATR. Given the 32 year difference established in the other story - that would mean 1980 in Buffyland. Making her born in 1980. Only 1 year older then Buffy. Given her years as a Shock Trooper, and even more years AWOL that does not compute. Am I missing something?
Comments from author:
She's 43 so I probably screwed up.

Buffyverse= 2003 Red Star = 1971

Yeah I screwed up. Fixing it.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from RandomSelection
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I just love it when people underestimate Buffy or Tasha - nicely done! And I am glad Hauptmann Dampf seems to be out of the picture for now. You see, a 'Hans Dampf' is something alike to a 'Jack of all Trades' in German, so the name sounds a little ridiculous to me! But the Valkyre seems to have potential ...

Update soon, please!

RandomSelection
Comments from author:
I know his name is Captain Harold Steam unless my German has completely failed me.
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interrogation" from alynambered
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Really like the start of this adventure!

Yay, Tasha and Pchelka. lol
Review By [alynambered] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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