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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
I'm happy you updated. I loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Hanane
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for your kind words. With a little luck, it won't be long until the next chapter.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
I love this and hope you update soon. It really is worth finishing.
Hanane
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I just hope I will be able to keep you interested in the fic.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [20 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from ChloeSQ
Review:
sooooooo need a update!!! Hope u post more soon! Please
Comments from author:
Thank you. It shouldn't be long now, that my Beta is back from her vacation. As soon as she has sent me back the corrected chapter 3, I will update immediately.
Review By [ChloeSQ] • Date [8 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from dragonsfae
Review:
this was really interesting so far. you really seemed to get inside their heads to make the characters sound real which is pretty darn awesome! i am really looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much! I had been fretting about the characterisations. I hope I will be able to keep it up.
Review By [dragonsfae] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RivanWarrioress
Review:
Another excellent chapter, although it made me have a rather interesting thought. What would Willow's reaction to Toad be? Hehe.

I think that, should Willow join the x men, her code name should be Nymph...but that's just a suggestion. I think you've written Logan realyl well to, he sounds so in charactr. I'm really curious as to why both he and sabretooth are so drawn to Willow.

Another random question, but is this stopry going to have any further connection to Buffy, or is Willow's presence going to be the extent of it? Doesn't matter, but i'm just a tad curious, that's all.

Well done on a great chapter. :)

R.W.
Comments from author:
Thanks very much, your review magicked a smile on my face.

Yeah, the matter with Toad and Willow meeting will indeed be interesting. Still not quite sure how exactly this is gonna play out, but there is time, they won't meet for some chapters yet.

Her codename is something still up to debate. Nymph would be good, but it's also kinda Logan's term of endearment for Willow, and I'm not so sure if he would be willing to share it.
I've played with the thought of 'Redwood' a little, but I'm very uncertain right now. But there is still time, so no need to hurry.

The matter with Logan and Sabretooth being so drawn to Willow should be explained a little in the next chapter, at least I hope so. Thanks for saying that I wrote Logan right, he gave me the biggest headache of them all.

It's unlikely that the story will have any other character from the Buffy 'verse, but still possible. If I add anyone from that cast though, it will probably be in a very minor role and most likely only for one appearance.
I'm open to suggestions though. :-)

Thanks again for your lovely review!
Review By [RivanWarrioress] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AngieR
Review:
I really enjoyed and love what you have wrote so far. I can't wait to read more; I hope you update again soon. I think you are vdoing an excellent job.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad people are enjoying the story so. I know it's going a bit slow at the moment, but don't worry, I should have the next chapter ready soon.
Review By [AngieR] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SamDragon
Review:
Very good story.Waiting for the next part.
Comments from author:
With a little luck you won't have to wait that much longer. Thank you very much for the review.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from moonstarsfu
Review:
I really like this story so far and I'm very interested in seeing where you go with this.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I must say I'm kinda interested with the story myself. I mean the bare skeleton of the story, regarding where and how it starts and ends, is set, but everything in between this, is kind of a spur of the moment and inspiration thing.
So I'm very open to suggestions from everyone if there is a certain scene/circumstance they would like to read about.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from deathgeonous
Review:
Interesting and fun fic here so far. Well, thanks for writing this, looking forward to more, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for the review, it really helps with the writing if I know that people really enjoy the fic.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
Interesting start.

Keep up the good work and don't let it sit for long periods of inactivity plelase
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I will try my very best to keep up something that resembles a speedy update, but please keep in mind that english isn't my native language and therefor it may take me a little longer than I want to have new chapters ready.
But the next chapter is already in progress, just waiting for my Beta to finish her well deserved vacation and start on it.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
Review:
Frog fear strikes again. At least she hasn't had to sing on a stage in front of a huge audience. Could be worse--it could have been clowns. So, I take it she won't like Toad much when/if he shows up?
I'm not sure sabretooth is the best guy for recruiting to Magneto's cause. Just a feeling.
Comments from author:
Wasn't Xander the one scared of clowns....
Thanks for the review, and you are right, Toad will definitely fill a place high on Willows list of 'least favourite people'.
Yes, Sabretooth really isn't the right kind of guy to recuit for Magneto's cause, but since that wasn't his original purpose in the village, I think Magneto is well aware of that fact. :-)
Hm, but stage fear is a lovely idea for an outing later on in the story. Thanks!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from gabbygal
Review:
I like and didnt find it slow at all, all the thoughts u included contributed to the story. Great job cant eait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for sharing your opinion on this matter. I was really not sure about it at all. I hope you will like the next chapter just as well.
Review By [gabbygal] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChloeSQ
Review:
Please please update this!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Don't worry, the next chapter is in progress. Just have to wait for my Beta to come back from vacation. I miss her....
Review By [ChloeSQ] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
Interesting, very interesting. Seeing where you are going to go with this is going to be good. And so in thanks - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKrt5IVXQ7k
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! The piece was beautiful. In fact, I heard it playing in my head while I edited parts of the second chapter. :-)
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RivanWarrioress
Review:
an intriguing start, i am really looking forward to reading more. Excellent writing, i think you wrote all of the xmen characters really well, and they were very in character. Well done on a great start. I hope to se another update soon.

R.W.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much for the praise. I have been fretting over the characterisation of the X-Men characters, but if you think I nailed it, I'm glad.
Review By [RivanWarrioress] • Date [15 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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