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Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen." from Cordyfan
Review:
Two more great chapters. Buffy gets to slaughter what's left of the conspirators and even Faith has a chance to keep her hand in. The meeting between Dawn and Buffy was muich less traumatic than I thought it would be (unless you have something in mind for the last chapter). Hope being Ishtar's acolyte isn't too onerous for Cordy - and doesn't get between her and Dawn.

Thanks for writing this.
Comments from author:
Cheers, last chapter is now up.

D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen." from Cordyfan
Review:
Buffy is turning into one over-sexed Slayer. Not that she seems to mind...

Thanks for the latest installment.
Comments from author:
She's losing those last vestiges of American middle-class values! Or at least she is for now!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [15 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Forteen." from Cordyfan
Review:
Better luck on the inheritance next time Ammonia... Poor Lurcio - hope he manages to find a way out of this.

Another fun chapter - I look forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
Cheers, next one coming right up!

D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [14 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Forteen." from ShalaDakiri
Review:
And, things just keep getting... I'm not really sure 'worse' is the right word in this case. Complicated, maybe? Ridiculous?

Either way, it's plenty fun to read.

And it looks like the whole sex issue is becoming more and more 'normalized' in Trix's mind.
Comments from author:
Farce-like?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Forteen." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Poor Lurcio! I hope he has a cunning plan. Shame his name isn't Baldric...
Comments from author:
Oddly my thought too.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen." from Cordyfan
Review:
Another great chapter.

Poor Buffy, having her dress sense maligned... I'm not quite sure how you intend introducing Dawn to Buffy, without getting her throat cut as an imposter, but I'm sure you've something in mind.

Nice tribute to "Carry on Cleo" at the end!

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Have no fear, I'm sure cordy will manage any meeting between Trix and Aurora!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Cordyfan
Review:
Dawn's definitely had better ideas... Planning to kidnap the most lethal gladiator in the Roman Empire? Thank goodness for Cordy as the voice of reason!

It's been a while since I last saw up Pompeii. I'd forgotten about Nausius and his bad poetry.

Keep up the good work and thanks for brightening my evening.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

By the gods! Yep, when I was researching this story I'd forgotten just how far back Up Pompeii was, must be a sign of growing old!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from cmdruhura
Review:
Well, Dawn definitely has something to cry about. Hopefully she won't run out of tears before she can use them to remove Buffy's collar.
Comments from author:
Dawn run out of tears? Never happen!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Well, that was bloody anf unpleasant for poor Dawn to watch. I do wonder how Buffy will be once that collar comes off...

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Poor Dawn, but maybe it'll just make her more determined.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from MarcusRowland
Review:
“SHE WILL, SHE WILL, KILL YOU!”

Tune of "We Will Rock You," I assume. Will Buffy notice?
Comments from author:
Well, she did sing 'Another one bites the dust' after killing the Lust Demon so I suppose she must have some knowledge of 'Queens's Greatest Hits'!

However I expect she had other things on her mind while this was happening so she probably didn't notice.

BTW, there's a longer version of this 'chant' in a couple of chapters time.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Cordyfan
Review:
So the long-awaited meeting (I won't say reunion, because it isn't really) approaches... I also just remembered the part about "tears of the sister", so presumably that's what releases the collar. What, exactly, is the significance of the paste, by the way (I'm guessing you've put it in there for a reason).

Good chapter.
Comments from author:
The paste? No reason other than I thought it was marginally funny when I put it in during the first 'Buffitrix' story. Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [6 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Explaining Dawn to Buffy ought to be interesting.
Comments from author:
OMG yes! Dawn needs a lot of explaining! Luckily Cordy's there.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Cordyfan
Review:
Not really suprised that it was the wrong list (please refresh my failing old memory, but can Buffy even read latin in this life)? Just as well she has no memory of Dawn as her sister, else she might not be too happy about the lesbian relationship with her old school frenemy...

Another good chapter - I look forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
No Buffy can't read either Latin or Greek, however she can still read and write modern English so she might puzzle some words out. Effectively she's illiterate.

Cheers,
d.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oakheart
Review:
A) I am enjoying this series a great deal. I will say that if that collar gets removed from Buffy, we can expect the Fall of the Roman Empire a few centuries early.

Someone commented on Dawn in regards to being Buffy's sister: SOmething that gets overlooked a great deal is that there is _ONE_ Key, in _one_ of the myriad realities or dimensions, etc. The odds that this particular Buffy is from that universe are effectively zero.

SD
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Also this Buffy came from a point in time before Dawn turned up...but that's all problems for future chapters.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from MarcusRowland
Review:
Of course it's the wrong scroll... why was I expecting anything else? Looking forward to more silliness.
Comments from author:
The wrong scroll, is that like 'the wrong trousers'? Well, of course, but this is Up Pompeii!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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