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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Hecatonchires
Review:
For some reason slavenapping and grand theft slavegirl made me laugh :)
Comments from author:
You have 'grand theft auto' in the States and I read somewhere that a Roman slave was about the equivalent price of a family car so...

Anyway glad it made you laugh.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Jazzibear
Review:
Excellent as always, and still in the best possible taste, of course.

Lots of intelligent remarks about plot details from other reviewers. I’m no good at that sort of thing, I’m simply happy for the story to go where you will – it’s bound to be good. What I can do is ask silly questions.

Item: who or what is Angle?
Comments from author:
'Item: who or what is Angle?' It's that god-damned impostor who keeps slipping in and being confused for Angel!

Maybe it's Angel's way of trying to get me to put him in my stories more often.

I shall try and find and correct.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Cordyfan
Review:
I get the feeling that very soon, no one will want to take that Buffy-napping job...

Thanks for my evening chuckle.
Comments from author:
I live to serve!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Considering they're both slaves, I suspect Buffy will have an easier time relating to Cordelia, at least initially. Probably be a bad shock for both of them.

I also wonder how hard it'll be for Buffy to adjust to freedom once Dawn figures out how to remove the collar.

Just hope Buffy learns how to cope with becoming something she'd promised herself she wouldn't.
Comments from author:
With luck Buffy will 'reset' once the spell's lifted and she'll go back to being a well adjusted gladiatrix...Ooops!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Cordyfan
Review:
Given how much she suddenly seems to be missing her sister, I hope Dawn isn't too hurt when she finds out Buffy has changed so much. Good to see that Faith is still on fighting form.

Another good chapter.
Comments from author:
Yes there'll be tears at bed time for Dawn when she meets Buffy.

My reading of Dawn has always been that she loved her sister very much, but when Buffy became the slayer she got pushed away and left out of things coz she 'wouldn't understand'.

Anyway thats how I see it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
When Dawn finally meets Buffy, she is going to be shocked at how different this Buffy is from the one that she "remembers".

Really enjoying this latest installment in the stories. Great story and great series.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Oh yes when Dawn sees Buffy again she's in for a big surprise, luckily for her Cordy's around!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from Cordyfan
Review:
I just hope that Buffy loses her blood lust when the spell is broken!

Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Hmm...bloodlust. Well I think she needs a bit of bloodlust just to survive in this time. However I expect she can dial it back a bit.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from draconis
Review:
Good updates. Have enjoyed the humorous bits.

Clearly the spell also helps Buffy when it comes to 'helping' Nausius, even if she does think he's an ok guy. But I did think it was funny/ironic how excited B became after being given a silver coin for her 'help'...and subsequently offered to 'help' him anytime, anyplace...particularly after her recent harsh thoughts re Cordelia and Dawn setting up what she thinks to be a 'brothel' almost next door. Hypocritical, much?

I think I can predict Lecherous' future. Any would be plotter of a major assassination who so easily gets distracted by sex at an orgy just isn't going to make it...unless by sheer dumb luck.
Comments from author:
Well Buffy/Trix sees herself as a household slave not as a whore. Its a fine line but its important to her!

Lecherous, well the name says it all!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [draconis] • Date [28 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from PATM
Review:
That cold knot in my stomach is tighter. Buffy is lost, but what will it mean to our other wayward heroines?
Comments from author:
Oh don't fuss so! I'm sure...well almost positive...well I hope it'll all come out right in the end.

One thing is sure about Buffy, if she goes down she'll go down swinging.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
I do wonder why Faith sent Buffy here. Rome might be dangerous, but there at least she could see to it Buffy was personally safe.

Also not a good development in Buffy's character. I wonder how much of that is the expectations of people 'in authority' and with a certain ring and how much is Buffy...
Comments from author:
Well, there's a hellmouth in Pompeii...it later blew up and buried the town!

Most of Buffy's actions are being caused by the 'spell' and the rest by what's considered normal. As they say; when in Rome, or in this case Pompeii, do as the Romans do.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Cordyfan
Review:
I'm beginning to dislike Ammonia and her nasty little spell. Hopefully she'll end up as a lion's entree...

How far along is Dawn's pregnancy now, by the way?

Another fun chapter - thanks for writing this.
Comments from author:
Don't be so hard on Ammonia, remember its not her spell, that's down to Marcus Licinius Crassus (may he rot in Hades) and he's been killed by Titus Pullo.

Dawn's now 7-8 months gone so no jumping about trying to 'save' Buffy!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Hmm, let's see.

Roman 'sports' likely mean gladatorial bouts, so how likely are Dawn and Cordy's girls to cheer for one of Buffy's events?

Just had a thought: Pairing Nausius's poetry with Cordy's acting skills.
Comments from author:
"Pairing Nausius's poetry with Cordy's acting skills"...Ouch! I wish i'd thought of that while I was writing this fic!

Cheerleading at one of Buffy's 'events'? Very Likely.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three." from Cordyfan
Review:
Great chapter. The plot thickens, with the arrival of Dawn and Cordelia. I wonder how long before Crixus falls foul of Buffy, in his efforts to recover the scroll.
Comments from author:
Indeed, in a way I feel sorry for Crixus!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [22 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Tracked down "Up Pompeii" online. It's made it a lot easier to picture the various character.

I can't wait to see what hijinks everyone gets up to in the story.
Comments from author:
Hi-jinks, low-jinks you'll be ammazed, or at least I hope you will.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [20 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Cordyfan
Review:
So Buffy either didn't have a sister when she died and entered this universe, or she doesn't remember Dawn. Either way, there's going to be Hell to pay when that collar finally comes off!

Good chapter - I look forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
This Buffy died at the end of Season One so no Dawnie. And Hades gets paid when...well that would be telling!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [20 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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