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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from bsams
cant say i really like this story much, since i really cant stand draco. hwever the writing is good which is why i keep reading.
although it is annoying that draco gets away with what you allow him to by getting the trio in trouble.
ginny deserves the stress and dislike from her family for the way she cheated on harry and made herself a death eaters whore, even worse by getting knocked up.
she deserves no sympathy or forgiveness.
Review By [bsams] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from FireWolfe
OK gota say I'm impressed with Draco and annoyed at the Weasleys and Potter. She had the guts to break up with him witch shows she has integrity. Yeah she is having a baby but that happens. It is actually kind of the adults faults. 9 month a year at a coed boarding school. What do they think could happen. I like the story line and look forward to seeing more. This marriage may just make them both into productive adults. Dumbles is an ass for not helping out. Well done story.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Eureka
WOW! Molly does know that doing that is just alienating Ginny, just like they did when Percy walked away? I mean what is she going to do, make everyone walk away from her? I mean...The twins moved out when she screeched at them, Percy walked before that when he thought things were going south. Draco may be a prat, but he does stand up for what he believes in, and he believes that you do NOT walk out on your children (Don't matter if they are born or not.).
Review By [Eureka] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LNR
Of course Narcissa is the only grandparent that is acting her age. I wonder if Harry will be supportive to Ginny, and how he will feel about the Weasleys Dumping her. Family is very important to him, and to just dump her like that...

Still Loving it!

More Please!

Have a Happy Easter, or whatever holiday you celebrate!
Review By [LNR] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Keshkreature
I really like seeing Draco step up and act like a man, instead of a sniveling little boy. It's still a little hard for me to see the Weasleys be so cruel to one of their own, although I completely understand the need of it for this story. I'm looking forward to the next part. Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
Molly and Arthur's behavior is a little out there, this story actually started from the idea of what, if anything, could result in Ginny turning to the Malfoys instead of her family. I used the Weasleys' reaction to Percy (although they were very hurt, they were also very angry), Molly's temper evidenced in Ron's howler, and Arthur's temper with Lucius as my base for their reaction. I figure they were very angry at her irresponsible actions, and her perceived treatment of Harry, and hurt by the fact that she refused to shut Draco out, thereby in their view taking his side instead of standing with them and contesting parentage.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [7 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AzrielSunHawk
i like how your handling this. showing normal human emotions and yet also being as true to the original characters as much as possible. good job!
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [6 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from tosca
Ouch! Poor Ginny. And bravo Draco!
Comments from author:
Yeah, it's a little ironic that he comes across that way, since he would see it only as standing up for his family name in a pureblood pride sort of way
Review By [tosca] • Date [6 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LNR
I have to say I'm really liking this story line, and how Draco and Ginny are interacting :)

More Please.
Review By [LNR] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AllenPitt
Hopefully at least one brother won't abandon her, out of all of them. Though I'll bet it'll be very tough for her at first. In a weird sort of way, the story would get even more interesting later on, when their child is attending Hogwarts alongside all the many cousins there will (probably) be.
HP & friends will likely take this very personally, of course. One thing --what about the whole Vodemort situation?
Comments from author:
This story is mainly meant to explore Draco and Ginny as they deal with becoming parents and maybe a family, it kind of ignores the whole War situation. I'm toying with the idea of a sequel that would deal more with that, as that aspect kinda bugs me too.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EasterCat
Just like stories with wall to wall dialogue, wall to wall inner monologue gets dull in large doses.
You've avoided the basic mistakes that plague so many writers. Now you're stopped at the next level. Your chapter would be improved with the integration of dialogue in situations that call for it.
Give us that cutting dialogue from Draco or Harry's when the breakup happens.
This is something to keep in mind when you write future chapters.
Comments from author:
This chapter is set up a bit differently from the rest of the story so as to form a solid understanding of Ginny and her thoughts and feelings going into the actual tale. I hope it didn't detract from the readability.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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