It is somewhat hard to follow because of all the characters you are following, but very interesting.
Thanks for a great story!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Operation starts" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on the new chapter, though the kill counter seem to be shortening the length of the chapters.
-Edit: Interesting idea, but'll wait on judgment until I see more of them in action.
Comments from author:
Got it what do you think of Shocker and Rhino as heroes Yeah to bad that it is not an original idea
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Operation starts" from musiclover
Review:
pretty good so far and blade being a white guys dad that is actually some what beliveable but this is really good if a little short in chapters and if the avengers team is the lot that met up with each other in NYC i love the idea
Comments from author:
Yeah the idea of no major players taking advantage of the vacuum left when the Avengers left did not make sense in my mind
Review By [musiclover] • Date [4 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Still enjoying the story, but the last chapter seemed a bit rushed. Take your time and catch any errors that may creep in.
I have one major pet peeve in regards to the newest chapter. Indiana Jones' hat is a FEDORA, not a cowboy-styled hat. Never mess with Indy's hat...he's protective of it.
Comments from author:
I know it wasn't a cowboy hat I just did not know what else to call it
Review By [WildMartin] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Interesting chapter, but some of your grammar slipped; also X-23 has a real name, her name is Laura Kinney. Hoping to read more soon.
-Edit: That would be something to have mentioned earlier.
-Edit 2: I was not aweare you compared him to anyone.
-Edit 3: One thing I recommend, is that you post an A/N(Author's Note) saying that X-23 does not know her real name.
-Edit 4: How is the next chapter coming?
Comments from author:
I know I just figure that since she didn't get the letter that her mom gave to Logan she has no idea about what she should call herself I know I should have Have you figured out who I compared Urich to Two famous reports in the chapter before this one Okay
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Still loving this Story and hating the fact that I didn't keep up with all of these varied story lines that I recognize the beginning pieces of and either couldn't or wouldn't follow at the time of discovery. Also the kill count always makes me smile. More please!
"Kill and destruction count
Buffy 14 vampires, 1 human, 1 demon Xander 33 vampires, 1 human Blink 18 vampires, 300 humans, 1 military base Stupid vampire suicide 1 Ben Reilly 11 vampires Willow 3 vampires Jesse 1 vampire X-23 60 humans"
Poor X-23... Yay for Buffy finally starting to use her brain. Think first. Interesting chapter. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [20 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twists and turns" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job bringing in X-23, I really liked the new chapter.
-Are you trying to completely bash Buffy?
-Edit: I look forward to the explaination. Are you going to make Buffy relateed to Scott Summers(Cyclops of the X-Men)?
-Edit 2: Too bad, you'd have a good wise-@$$ comment from Ben then.
-Edit 3: Ben going to tell Wolverine about X-23?
-Edit 4: Any decision on pairings yet?
-Edit 5: Any idea when you might decide on if there will be pairings?
-Edit 6: What do you mean "force the story in any way"?
-Edit 7: So you don't plan anything?
Comments from author:
No just showing the tension between Buffy and Xander and who they have different ideas on who is a threat. I will reveal why Buffy feels that way in the next chapter
No I'm not the Marvel Summer family is messed up enough as is with Corsair, Cyclops, Rachael, Nate, Cable, Madeline, Stryfe, Hope, Jean, Havok, and Genesis
I know but let's just say I plan on having Ben pissing off another X-man
Yes and make a couple lewd comments about her although I do not plan on having them in bed together
Not yet
I probably will not have pairings so that I don't force the story in anyway
I just let the story go anyway it wants with no set course for the most part
I just write as it comes to me
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]