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Review of chapter "Origins and shocks" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The meta part that I liked that you addressed was the fannon, near cannon of Buffy saying to her friends that it is too dangerous for them so she needs to go it alone.
Comments from author:
Yeah I got the sense in Harvest that Buffy thought it was to dangerous for the others to hunt vampires
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Origins and shocks" from kayron
Review:
Haha! So Buffy doesn't get to be the special one, hating her calling, yet at the same time revelling in being THE Slayer.
Comments from author:
Yeah that's what Willow has going to. Xander accepted his heritage and follows in his fathers' footsteps because of where he is and his sense of honor.
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins and shocks" from djhardim
Review:
How about Jessie being the son of Tony Stark?
Comments from author:
Maybe
Review By [djhardim] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Graveyard brawl" from msdarque
Review:
Wow, exciting and surprising chapter.
I liked it. Wonder how Willow reacts to all of it?
Congrats!
Comments from author:
thanks not sure which one will be Willow's dad
Review By [msdarque] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Graveyard brawl" from JediKnight
Review:
The idea and plot is good, but your chapters are still too short, you need to watch your grammar, and Xander is getting too many, as in "all of", the fights. I'm hoping to read more.

-Edit: Alright, but you still should make your chapters longer and possibly get a beta-reader(someone to fix grammar and spelling mistakes).
Comments from author:
okay its just in these early chapters I need to show Xander skill set so this will not happen for all of the story
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saving Willow" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting story ^_^
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Willow" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Love the gun

BTW ("Expect me." Xander said ) Except, not expect
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saving Willow" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yep, no one expects a teenager with a shot-gun.
Except that I think you meant, except.
Comments from author:
Hey I know
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Willow" from msdarque
Review:
Yay for Willow- and Xander to the rescue! :)
Liked the chapter. Congrats!
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [msdarque] • Date [30 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to Hellmouth part 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting twists.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Hellmouth part 2" from msdarque
Review:
Wow, exciting chapter.
Things move fast, don't they.
I love that Xander is a capable vampire hunter. :)
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Thanks had the show running while writing it so that helped out a lot in terms of what was going on
Review By [msdarque] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to Hellmouth part 2" from texaswookie
Review:
Hope you don't give x all of b's good scenes. Still good though does make me wonder if X is going to be using firearms like dear old dad does though. Maybe they can tag team Luke
Comments from author:
I won't and also I setting up in either the next chapter or the one after that Xander telling everyone about his heritage
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Hellmouth part 1" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job, though the chapter are too short and Blade was not around during WW2.

-I guess one of the powers listed should be slow aging.
Comments from author:
Blade from the comics was born in the 20's after his growth stops it will be
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to Hellmouth part 1" from michaelangelo
Review:
Huh, I don't know how to say this without sounding like a complete b'stard. Okay then, the chapters are way too short, Blade is black in the comics, cartoons and movies and Xander isn't. How did Xander become good friends with Angel since Whistler brought him from New York to Sunnydale to specifically help Buffy literally days before she moved there...

To be honest, I'd drop the Blade angle completely, Comic Blade never had any powers until 1999 anyway except immunity from Vampire bites, and focus instead on Lady Jacqueline Falsworth-Crichton, if you want to add to the 'cool father' angle, Make it Captain America, Wolverine or Nick Fury. Add some back story, when did Xander find out about his real parents, when did his powers start to show, what caused him to become a vampire hunter?
Comments from author:
Blade father is white and I thought that Blade would be able to intimate Angel into moving to Sunnyhell. Seriously Blade shot out Spider-Man's kneecaps when he was vamped so it not much of a stretch to see him intimating Angel. Also Blade in the comics stated that he had a blood-lust for killing vampires instead of drinking blood so its genetic.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Hellmouth part 1" from msdarque
Review:
Intriguing chapter. Definitely liked.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
yeah thanks
Review By [msdarque] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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