Very, very short.

I think the biggest problem is that Alexander Lavelle Harris is very, very white.

blade is 1/2 white according to the comics

Intriguing start. I really hope to read more soon. :)
Congrats!

Glad you like it

Hmmm, this sounds like it could be an interesting story.

Who is this lady that was with Blade?

How will Buffy and co. react to the news that Xander will get?

Keep up the interesting work.

Answers in good time

Very interesting start, although it is definitely a little short.

It looks a lot better with the added spaces, although there are still a couple of errors.

One is grammatical, in that you repeatedly use "at a Hellmouth". It really should be "on a Hellmouth", especially given that technically, the Sunnydale Hellmouth is underground.

The spelling mistake is probably software based - "is will to take him in." should be "is willing to take him in."

I really hope you continue this, as despite the shortness, there was at least two great hooks there. Who is this English woman?? And Xander being Blade's child also creates questions about what he is and how he looks. Definitely hope you fill in the back story of how Blade and the mystery woman met, got together, and whether they ended up staying together. I also look forward to seeing how this Xander turns out, especially since he'll know he's adopted.

thanks for the help made the grammar corrects

Please continue the story! : )

thank's for the encouragement

Do you have an email i can sent the thought to, i dont want to do it on here at the risk of coming down like a prat or something in people's eyes.

Private review on an imperial duty gives it

Never mind I don't want to make bones about something and come off sounding like a git

I don't care and yes I know Blade was not married however I have read recent comics including Blade so that's where I got the idea for Xander's mom

Talk about a hook! Now, where and what do I need to go to to bribe the Muses for more?

thanks for the input

Sounds like a really good beginning to me.

Format in some spaces though.

More Please.

thanks