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Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from MaskedCritic
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Epic, simply epic, my good man! I do enjoy a good Addams Family fic, and Xander is most certainly the best fit with that group.

I've actually been keeping this fic open for days, refreshing it every so often, in anticipation of your next addition.

Please, keep up the WONDERFUL work!
Review By [MaskedCritic] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from vMures
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So glad you are continuing this!
Review By [vMures] • Date [5 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from burn
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What a great start!! I can't wait for more.

I hope you keep the Scoobies likeable. Buffy and Willow eventually turned into pretty loathsome characters , in my opinion, but I love the people that they are in the first season especially. One other thing, please keep the focus on the Buffyverse. Xander should be unique and scare the shit out of the forces of darkness.

Keep up the great work. Thanks!
Review By [burn] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from Yeffaros
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Great story, and I'm glad you decided to continue it. It was an interesting one-shot and promises to be a great read. Thank you.
Review By [Yeffaros] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from DeaconKrow
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This story is a lot of fun, Hope to read more.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from DarkSunAbove
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Oh please continuing this, and i hope to see a possible Mrs. Adams at some point in the story.
Review By [DarkSunAbove] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from (Past Donor)zima
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This is a fun story, going to be interesting to see what Xandern will do next when facing danger!
Reminds me somewhat of tenhawks story shadow council.
Review By [(Past Donor)zima] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from maben
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loved it and can't wait for more
Review By [maben] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from eldude
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This is deeply strange, but I'm already into it. Please do keep going with this.
Review By [eldude] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from RockyWilliams
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neat story so far, looking forward to more. Hoping as the story progresses it deviates more from the original dialogue.
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Now I'm seeing some potential to this story!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from AshestoAshes
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Entertaining, but watch the names: Rosenberg, Jesse, Madison and not Rosenburg, Jessie, Maddison.
Review By [AshestoAshes] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from ianquest
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An excellent start, and well done for avoiding the stereotypical 'Yet Another Halloween Fic' story, where he or someone in the family dresses as an Addams.

Do be careful about some of your throwaway comments, though. In the third sentence, you mention "The Rosenburgs were always away at some dental convention or another this time of year." To begin with, the family name is 'Rosenberg', according to the credits I recall & the IMDB site. Secondly, it seems to be fairly well established that the Rosenbergs were psychologists (possibly child psychologists, I can't recall off the top of my head), not dentists. Possibly you're thinking of another genius female sidekick, Hermione Granger of the Potterverse, whose parents ARE dentists.

Other than a few minor quibbles, this is well written, and I'm looking forward to more. Keep up the good work! :)
Review By [ianquest] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from Rob
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I like this, much potential!
Review By [Rob] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not the Missus." from nemmodo
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Love the story, can't wait for more.
Review By [nemmodo] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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