I really liked your story! What a great beginning. Hint, hint. I'd love to see Gomez, I mean Xander Addams have a lot of fun, for him, adventures on the Hellmouth. If only the rest of the Scoobies could join in his fun. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
I can see this going for a good run; Xander as Gomez Addams on the Hellmouth! Oi, the vamps and demons won't know what hit them... Well, other than the mace... and the knives... and the Iron maidens...
Anywho, I am sending doughnuts, coffee, dark chocolate, and French language lessons to your Muses in the hopes that They are inspired to add to this; perhaps the gradual change in Xander as more and more of Gomez comes out, maybe the real Addams family decides to visit their new cousin? sibling? of the patriarch of the family, whereby Gomez takes the young Xander under his wing for lessons in dancing, fencing,etc...
Review By [trongod] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Cackling on the Floor, becaus simple laughter doesn't give this story its due. I am looking forward to seeing how Halfrek's wish is going to effect Sunnydale, both good for Xander and bad for Xander. Although I am wondering where he is going to find his Morticia.
Review By [tammin] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Lovely little story that I hope will be continued. I can't wait to see more of this as these two shows are two of my favorites. Why, by the time they graduate HS, Xander will most likely have made his first fortune, scared most of the Hellmouth denizens into thinking he's indeed a scion of that illustrious family and that the show, comics and movies are actually based on him and his family. And the reaction of the other Scoobies will be priceless.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Well thought out, humorous, and in keeping with grammatical constructs and rules - very nice job! The premise is similar to, but original from, several fics I've read. This certainly deserves to be more than just a one-shot, and it would be quite nice if it was expanded upon!
Review By [Scholar] • Date [31 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]