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Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from Gideon
Review:
Lots of very interesting information sharing going on and a couple of important events too. Colin should have listened to Buffy and now he has paid the price. I don't think Buffy will be happy when she finds out that the person who drugged her and then shot and beat her is probably on her side. With friends like that who needs enemies? And I don't think she would have wanted Colin dead either.
Hopefully Buffy's dream comes true and Dick is rescued without significant harm. They will all need to work together to defeat an age old group of assassins.
Comments from author:
No, I don't think she would be happy either. :) Should be interesting how things pull together, huh?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from chaosrachel
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so happy for a update. Love this story to death. cant wait for more.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you are enjoying the story!
Review By [chaosrachel] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from AbigaelRose
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YAY! You updated, I love this story and always crave a new chapter (and this one was amazing!)
-Abby
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from soulNchantress
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Whew-Hoo!! Things are heating up. Some secrets down, more to go.

If I'm understanding this right, this guy that's trying to get the 'Chosen' and Red Robin is the same guy. He is working against the council, but I'm getting the feeling that there is a third party involved. Who is it that keeps destroying the myth, and who is replacing it? Is she being protected or constantly attacked? Sometimes this is confusing. I guess I'll just leave the detective work to the white hats (or black and red, in this case.)

As usual you have delivered another great chapter (the kiss was my favorite). I was so excited to get the update. Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! Intersting instinct. :) You'll find out if you're right or wrong in the next few chapters!
Review By [soulNchantress] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from AllenPitt
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Huh... So after defeating the demons, the slayer line was hijacked & used as the power source for the League of Shadows? Or something like that. Their plan is totally working now. They know Elizabeth will recover (healing powers). The one thing they don't know is, she isn't a girl who just got Chosen & doesn't know what's happening. They're facing someone with years of experience & training. That's going to be a big mistake on their part, underestimating her.
Comments from author:
Scary, no? But so much fun!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from Fantasymania
Review:
Yay! Another chapter! And Buffy told Tim she knows!
Comments from author:
More secrets to come!
Review By [Fantasymania] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from Rockrose
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I so love this. So much happened in this chapter! I'm glad they're on the same page with his Red Robin thing. Great story.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying the story!
Review By [Rockrose] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
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Super glad that scene is in there!!! I loved the entire chapter and really can't wait to see what happens next, now that things are coming to a head. Looking forward to more!!!

CT.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four: Between the Lines" from Hecatonchires
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Good chapter. Lots got done, heaps of scene changes, some good detectivey bits.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: First Blood" from Arkaedia
Review:
*sniffle*

bad place to make us wait at....


More please? Soon, maybe?
Comments from author:
Sorry the next chapter is taking so long, but I promise that I am working on it.
Review By [Arkaedia] • Date [9 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: First Blood" from Morgomir
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Sorry for the late review (exams). Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
That is ok. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: First Blood" from Xayian
Review:
One word for you about this whole series: Awesome. Just Awesome!

I have but one request, and that is if you do throw the prophacy into the mix can you make it a little less contradictory? Because I've always thought that if there's to be one slayer born per generation then when one dies the next wouldn't be called for at least 15 yrs right? I'm just sayin that it makes more sense that the Powers would have a lot of "smaller weapons" at their disposal until the big gun/slayer comes into optimal power don't ya think? I'm just sayin. But dont let my hang ups stop ya Lol but seriously...pretty please with Timmy on top? *checky grin*

Oterwise I'm just lovin the whole dynamics of this all and am thinking if ElizaBuff did join the Gothem night crew would she choose to go the traditional route and call herself The Slayer or choose something different and follow the Gothem tradition of a flying animal. Birds that stay put in the winter time for instance like the bluejay, cardinal or woodpecker....maybe not the woodpecker though i can see our girl having fun with that one. Lol

Anyway, just a thought. And if you get a review that ended oddly I would like to blame my nook. It's so sensitive lol

Happy writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I’m glad you are enjoying the story! As for the prophecy… I haven’t fully decided on its fate, but you give a pretty good incentive! Good thought on names! She would have fun with the woodpecker name!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: First Blood" from justapiranha
Review:
I am so loving this storyline! Is it disturbing that I re-read it a few times? I like the long chapter too. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Not disturbing at all! I'm glad you are enjying the story so much! Thank you!
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: First Blood" from justapiranha
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I am so loving this storyline! Is it disturbing that I re-read it a few times? I like the long chapter too. Thank you.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [4 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: First Blood" from RocksandGlass
Review:
Still a really enjoyable story, I like how you're pulling in more of the Bat family as a family. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
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