I dislike giving negative reviews, but this fic was made of fail.
The grammar was gruesome, the spelling subpar, the plot was pitiful, and pacing pathetic.
I would highly suggest learning to conjugate properly, or failing that, find yourself an editor/beta reader.

Also, why the hell would a Lantean use an Al'kesh, a Goa'uld ship, when their own ships are so vastly in advance of the Goa'uld?

Great story, though I am disappointed that you glossed over the reactions towards Xander becoming a vampire I greatly enjoyed this story.

Great story. I like the story plot and look forward to seeing how the sequel develops. It has a ton of potential. Please update soon.

Good story... though i'm somewhat unsure why the SGC didn't investigate some of the happenings in Sunnydale. Anyway, hope to see the sequel soon. keep up the good work.

wow that was great I can't wait for more

This was a fun story. Very weird premise that works very well. Looking forward to the sequel.

A pretty good start to a story I suppose. I wonder where it'll go from here.

Decently written, but the idea of Xander being able to deconstruct things by merely slamming his hands against things is ludicrous. There should be Apprentice Peasants that either use mundane tools, or work faster as skill increases. In the game we just see the Masters, althought there are Apprentices working under him.
Gave up reading at Chapter Two.

Good story.

I would suggest changing Xander's sight scan from ten meters to 100 meters to match typical distances from the road to building structures.

Some ideas:

Xander might want to do a final check for magic items on Earth to deconstruct them in structures.

Xander might want to have Enterprise to scan Earth and the surrounding solar system for any signs of interesting structures and technologies. This includes the South Pole base buried under ice. He could scan and deconstruct them. This likely would negate SG1 finding the base and numerous Gould archeological finds (and the aliens themselves). This could also allow Xander to have an idea of the status and location of alien empires around even though the information would be several thousand years out of date, though there does not appear to have been that much change from what was implied on stagnation.

Before hitting active alien civilizations, the group could (if they get information on the star gates) to go to all the star gates and similar that are currently on uninhabited worlds. There are plenty implied being around. This could eventually pick up things like the knowledge repositories and even Atlantis.

A possible way to deal with many alien civilizations could be to make a special stealth and shielded small space craft that is designed to allow Xander (perhaps in an armored suit for extra protection) to deconstruct enemy capital space ships and structures. This could be with a special air lock that lets Xander to stick his hands through to pound on enemy structure until it is deconstructed. This could take most enemies by surprise.

One strategy could be to try arrange to make sure enemies are in structures to deconstruct them. Something to experiment with could include seeing how fast Xander can make structures and locations. As an example creating a solid reinforced concrete box around an enemy then deconstructing the box with the enemy inside it. this would not work against the Ori energy beings though. Maybe some sort of powered armor version of the Ghost Busters (movies and animated series of the same name) equipment might work.

Thanks for your suggestions and advice TJG :) I must admit the precise measurements of distance is not something I am good at. Thanks for your input, I've changed the 100 meters scanning radius.

Your idea for Xander to do a last check on Earth is also cool, I should have thought of that. ^^ And yup, I need to come up with ways for Xander to sneak into infrastructures in future to do some discreet deconstructiong =)

Very interesting. I LOVE the fact that you made a definite stop in your plans. SO often a story gets started and left for dead, the way you did it is GREAT.

Honestly, I am not sure where I want to see it go, but your writing was good enough that I am quite interested in seeing which way it takes off no matter the direction.

Frickin AWESOME!!! This is one of the coolest idea's I've seen in a while. I'll admit part of that is that I love 'super!Xander' but... this just kicks ass. I can't wait for the next story in the series!

Love it keep it up

I found this a very nice story, even though I don't know anything about Warcarft. I look forward to more when ready. Thank you for writing this.

Good read, glad to see another story out by you. Still waiting for MotFS :D.

One major technical error, his 'seeing' range is only 10 meters? That's only 30 feet, most houses in the Burbs are that more than that far from the sidewalk. Much less something like a city hall from a car. That in one sentance you say that, you immdeatly point out something down the street he sees with that 'seeing'.

Hi Thedruid, thanks for your review and comment. :) I have to admit I make a mistake with the 'seeing' range calculations. I've changed it.

Ok I think the first act where xander comes in to contact with sg-1 is when he saves janet from dying. I never liked janet dying during the stargate series. maybe meet thor when he comes to recue the planet with thors hammer on it that sg-1 broke. and they can meet the nid when they try to steal something form xander lol. plus i would like to see xander have some kind of relationship even if its backround noise maybe if xander turns someone they also are vamps with souls. or maybe daywalkers or something.