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Rise of the Ultimate Peasant

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Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from leonamasha
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Really enjoyed your story especially how your integrated the SG and Buffy verses seamlessly. Definitely interested in how things will go in the future. Yep, this is definitely a series to look forward to. Thanks.
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from KingHawke
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brilliance seems to flow from your page at a steady pace. I like it. however, for who to save, making an alliance with the Invisible high tech hippies would be excellent. saving the Joffa would be great, I am not keen on saving the Tolan or the Asgard. too arrogant with too many rules. but, the primitive race that houses the Goa'uld. the ones who wear the necklaces to stop the parasites, they would make powerful hard working allies for the Constructor.
Review By [KingHawke] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from ReflectionsOfReality
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I can sort of see a spoof option later on where Xander is able to completely deconstruct a planet (like Dakara or the Asuran home world) but I do sort of wonder what the largest structure Xander might deconstruct... I can sort of see Xander captured by alien X (Wraith, Goa'uld, Ori, Asuran, Aschen, Asgard etc) only for him to then deconstruct the ship around him and find himself floating in the vacuums of space (good thing that he has need for breath and is immune to radiation and light). I also am wondering how much information he would absorb by deconstructing a Stargate complex...
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from BlackWarth
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It was an interesting story i hope you will write book 2 soon.
Review By [BlackWarth] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from EmmyN
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Wow this was great, looking forward to book 2 :)
Review By [EmmyN] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Birth of the Ultimate Peasant" from Thedruid
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You know, I strangly like your powerhouse stories, though I usually dont like that type of story, and this one is good by itself. But I beg of you, bring us another chapter of your MotFS story! Please! :)
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from sinkun
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love it
Review By [sinkun] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from Iamthewalrus
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This gave me all kinds of warcraft 3 nostalgia, I'm probably gonna have to reinstall that into my computer.
Review By [Iamthewalrus] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from Bobboky
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very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three – Source of Magic" from xon
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You made Xander a bit of a Stu character, but I'll readily confess that well-written Marty-Stu fics are so rare that they're something of a guilty pleasure for me.

I think that there were a few things that you could've done better, but...
Review By [xon] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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