Wow... poor Xander. Does he really have syphilis.. ? Seems kinda unexpected a bit. Really hope he'll be alright soon now that he gets medication for it. Congrats!
Comments from author:
This is only partway through the story. Do you really think it's going to be so easy?
Review By [msdarque] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from vidicon
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Don't tell me just got 'real evil arm' syndrome... He'll end up with fewer limbs and bits than Kettlebrun this way.
Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Sorry for waiting so long to reply; nope, not 'real evil arm' syndrome. Just a normal[ish] disease.
Review By [vidicon] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from msdarque
Review:
Yay for Xander getting his stitches out. Though I'm worried now- what's wrong with his arm..? Interesting chapter. Congrats!
Comments from author:
Read on when it comes out to find out.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from Gideon
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Sounds like there might still be something wrong with Xander! At least the doctor now has a reason to follow up :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from hanahanachan
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tehe I can't wait to read what House thinks of Xander's girls when they all start popping in and out to visit him... or whatever els you might be planing, I'm sure it will be interesting. Update Sooon!
Review By [hanahanachan] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from AllenPitt
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Xander is just having no luck here. On the other hand, no dates with demon girls who try to sacrifice him for the last several weeks, so it's all good. With his accumulation of injuries I'm surprised he hasn't had problems like this before. At least he wasn't on the swim team long enough to mutate...
Comments from author:
That was part of my reasoning for this story, to show some of those things the group have been involved with catch up to at least one of them a bit.
Nope, no swim team results to worry about.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Not Rated
It was a short meeting, but I think that's the kind of dose anyone should be introduced to House in.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from dogbertcarroll
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Nice work. Loved the fact that he had the address of a store in mind.
Comments from author:
It's House, and in regards to sex, of course he knows!
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from serenityselena
Review:
interesting chapter :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from Almadynis
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Interesting beginning. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
Comments from author:
This is turning into one of those stories where the idea I started with has warped as I write. I still have a basic outline, but things keep changing on me.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from SariLane
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I'm glad House showed. I hate him wing-waiting. I can't wait to see more of him and I can't wait to see him interacting with the Xan Man.
Comments from author:
Like I wrote, he refused to stay put. Just had to butt into things. And the idea of him booking a surgical suite to take a nap just appealed to me as something he would do.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from Sithspit
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*frowns* If induced by trauma with blood filling the space, and not air, wouldn't that be a hemopneumothoracic injury as opposed to a tension pneumo?
Comments from author:
It was, until the blood got an escape route; after that, it changed to pneumothorax.
Review By [Sithspit] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from msdarque
Review:
I loved the chapter! Very House-like.. I think Dawn was kinda oddly comforted by his brusque manner. And I hope that he was right and that Xander will be alright. Congrats!
Comments from author:
As she implied, he reminded her of Anya, and it did comfort her.
And, yeah, Xander is fine.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Well if anyone can deal with House and his rudeness it is the scoobies. He kinda caught Dawn on a bad day though. I'm sure she will be much snarkier next time they meet! He did manage to make her feel better though but I'm sure it wasn't on purpose :)
Comments from author:
It was. He is a rude, arrogant man, but he does occasionally help people emotionally. Usually by turning their anger to him, but the show has a few times where he acts like I showed.
And Dawn isn't medically trained, but does have a bit of first aid knowledge. And part of that is, massive bleeding from the chest isn't good. So, she's a bit concerned, eh?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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