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Review of chapter "3 Doctors." from AllenPitt
Review:
Maybe it's time for Xander to stop doing field work and move into management or something. But hey. At least the syphilis is taken care of. That's a real turnoff when mention of it comes up while dating.
Comments from author:
I don't think Xander can make himself leave the field, and by this point, Giles knows it!

And, the story listing of this series is chronological, which I admit loses some of the suspence, but I hope it will still be an amusing story.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [12 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diagnosis." from CrystalBlaze
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The "mystic syphilis" from that &*%%ing Indian guy, I
take it?

Okay, the active spell would have been killed with Hus, but I can see the Hellmouth (or annoyed Powers) leaving it present in latent form.
Comments from author:
Thank you for remembering! Yep, that's the occasion. I hinted at it in chapter two, but apparently not well enough.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diagnosis." from AllenPitt
Review:
If it's based on the S4 episode... then he's potentially got quite a few other diseases in there also....
Comments from author:
I can't look it up at the moment, but I thought most of the symptoms were extreme ones from syphillis, that thats all he had in the end. And, in any case, it is a disease that you can get, then it will go inactive for 4-20 years, before striking again. So, for a House crossover, what better?

Thanks for reading.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diagnosis." from msdarque
Review:
Wow... poor Xander.
Does he really have syphilis.. ? Seems kinda unexpected a bit.
Really hope he'll be alright soon now that he gets medication for it.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
This is only partway through the story. Do you really think it's going to be so easy?
Review By [msdarque] • Date [11 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Don't tell me just got 'real evil arm' syndrome... He'll end up with fewer limbs and bits than Kettlebrun this way.

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Sorry for waiting so long to reply; nope, not 'real evil arm' syndrome. Just a normal[ish] disease.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from msdarque
Review:
Yay for Xander getting his stitches out.
Though I'm worried now- what's wrong with his arm..?
Interesting chapter. Congrats!
Comments from author:
Read on when it comes out to find out.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from Gideon
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Sounds like there might still be something wrong with Xander! At least the doctor now has a reason to follow up :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from hanahanachan
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tehe I can't wait to read what House thinks of Xander's girls when they all start popping in and out to visit him... or whatever els you might be planing, I'm sure it will be interesting. Update Sooon!
Review By [hanahanachan] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Removing the Stitches." from AllenPitt
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Xander is just having no luck here. On the other hand, no dates with demon girls who try to sacrifice him for the last several weeks, so it's all good.
With his accumulation of injuries I'm surprised he hasn't had problems like this before. At least he wasn't on the swim team long enough to mutate...
Comments from author:
That was part of my reasoning for this story, to show some of those things the group have been involved with catch up to at least one of them a bit.

Nope, no swim team results to worry about.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from gaulty
Review:
good chapter, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from Cdog
Review:
It was a short meeting, but I think that's the kind of dose anyone should be introduced to House in.

Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Nice work. Loved the fact that he had the address of a store in mind.
Comments from author:
It's House, and in regards to sex, of course he knows!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from serenityselena
Review:
interesting chapter :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [14 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from Almadynis
Review:
Interesting beginning. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
Comments from author:
This is turning into one of those stories where the idea I started with has warped as I write. I still have a basic outline, but things keep changing on me.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from SariLane
Review:
I'm glad House showed. I hate him wing-waiting. I can't wait to see more of him and I can't wait to see him interacting with the Xan Man.
Comments from author:
Like I wrote, he refused to stay put. Just had to butt into things. And the idea of him booking a surgical suite to take a nap just appealed to me as something he would do.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated
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