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Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
*frowns* If induced by trauma with blood filling the space, and not air, wouldn't that be a hemopneumothoracic injury as opposed to a tension pneumo?
Comments from author:
It was, until the blood got an escape route; after that, it changed to pneumothorax.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from msdarque
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I loved the chapter!
Very House-like.. I think Dawn was kinda oddly comforted by his brusque manner.
And I hope that he was right and that Xander will be alright.
Congrats!
Comments from author:
As she implied, he reminded her of Anya, and it did comfort her.

And, yeah, Xander is fine.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from Gideon
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Well if anyone can deal with House and his rudeness it is the scoobies. He kinda caught Dawn on a bad day though. I'm sure she will be much snarkier next time they meet! He did manage to make her feel better though but I'm sure it wasn't on purpose :)
Comments from author:
It was. He is a rude, arrogant man, but he does occasionally help people emotionally. Usually by turning their anger to him, but the show has a few times where he acts like I showed.

And Dawn isn't medically trained, but does have a bit of first aid knowledge. And part of that is, massive bleeding from the chest isn't good. So, she's a bit concerned, eh?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Waiting Room." from Stormguard
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Oh very nice. Watching Xander deal with House should be.... interesting to say the least :D There's no way House will leave him alone after messing with his nap time!
Comments from author:
If all goes to plan [ie, House doesn't stick his nose in again], they won't meet for another two chapters.
Review By [Stormguard] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the ER." from PATM
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"The Girl" is Dawn or is it the patient with the broken legs. Or is it a vampire claiming ignorance to the sudden loss of blood.
Comments from author:
Sorry, it's Dawn. I should have made that clearer.
Review By [PATM] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the ER." from spacey
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...From where?
Comments from author:
That'll be in the next part. Sort of.
Review By [spacey] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the ER." from msdarque
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Oh no, poor Xander... Hope he'll be alright.
Cannot wait to read more. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In the ER." from Oxnate
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Very interesting start.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the ER." from VillageOrchid
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I liked the banter but wasn't quite sure what was going on there, because Xander's issues seemed routine -- so the bleeding person could have been someone else.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the ER." from AllenPitt
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But it was funny syphilis! Adding it all up, Xander has had more than his share of injuries, to be sure. And I'll bet the docs will be speculating a lot about his eye injury. It sure don't look like an accident.
X-rays --he's got injuries going back at least as far as teenage years. (Hey--are his parents alive? Did they get out of Sunnydale? Not canon i.e. it wasn't mentioned one way or the other on the show).
Comments from author:
Haven't decided on the parents. And, yeah, his x-rays are gonna be an issue.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the ER." from Gideon
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Well that was unexpected! Good thing Dawn dragged him to the hospital after all:)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [31 May 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue." from msdarque
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Interesting chapter.
Hope there's more soon. Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [10 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue." from AllenPitt
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slayer healing will help her a lot, but one would think she wouldn't live very long. Maybe if she had a really dedicated Watcher who checked her out constantly for injuries...
Comments from author:
CIPA sufferers don't live long anyways. It just seemed like one of those tragedies waiting to happen.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue." from Gideon
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Interesting disease. I imagine it would be very challanging for a Slayer, but the healing should be welcome.
Comments from author:
I saw it recently, and it made me think. How would a Slayer who couldn't feel injury do?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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