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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
I like that - wonder if Buffy's advice will help them though, I'm not sure she's the best person for relationships.
Comments from author:
Depends what Shine actually asked.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Poor Mother - didn't see that one coming. A hazard of the times, I suppose.

And poor Buffy, being told that she's going to die yet again. At least in the series, she went into battle with Glory with at least a little hope of survival.

Great chapter.
Comments from author:
Miss guided hope! But that's the definition of what a real hero is; someone who still tries even if they believe they're going to die/fail.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from SariLane
Review:
What is UP with Mother... Good chapter. Get away from the gang bangers... I'm really enjoying this.
Comments from author:
Well its not her fault really, post natal depression on top of the fire going out. Its bound to make anyone a little cranky.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [SariLane] • Date [7 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Fire and slingshots? Dark will be a great addition to the tribe - if they can persuade Mother to accept her...

Good chapter - looking forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Mcspender
Review:
Fire, fine. Dark good, Sling Better!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thanks,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Amberdrake
Review:
I've never read anything like this. This is neat. :)
Comments from author:
Thank-you, glad you think so.
D.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Well, that's one way to negotiate with your enemies...
Comments from author:
Things were simpler then.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from shazamfan
Review:
HA! Dark to the rescue!

Well if having knowledge to make fire anytime she wants doesn't get Dark to be Shine's mate in Mother's eyes then her as yet another warrior able to bring down foes or animals with her sling should do the trick.

-J-
Comments from author:
You're not wrong!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from Mcspender
Review:
Bussines as usual: Shine gets into more she can chew and get's her arse kicked, at least she found Dark.
Well, Lone Hunter and Wolfie, it's like they say: no good deed goes unpunished, good luck with the lions, direwolves and giant bears xD!.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Shine always comes out of things smiling!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine." from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
At least Shine has caught up with Dark. Hope she hasn't inadvertantly started a war with that other tribe...

Good chapter.
Comments from author:
War? Hey!
What is it good for?
Absolutely...well, actually there is all the technological and sociological advances.

I think in this case 'war' is a concept too far!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [5 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
Team playing solves everything!.
I hope Shine gets together with Dark, I mean, falling dow a hole... auuch, poor girl =(.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Bloody people leaving holes all over the place!!!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Good chapter. Interesting relationship between the tribe and the local wolves, with the latter acting more and more like modern domesticated dogs. Hopefully Shine will find a way out of the pit before something big and nasty falls in beside her.
Comments from author:
Its some time in the next few thousand years you start to get wolf-like dogs or dog-like wolves working together with humans. So, I thought, 'how did that happen?'

Cheers,
D
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [3 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
I take it that Lone Hunter is Jesse?
Comments from author:
Nope! I sorta saw him as Riley!!!

Big gut, good at hitting things...never got turned into a vampire!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [3 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Mcspender
Review:
I like Lone-Hunter and One-Eye, they really know how to be friends =)!.
and talk about persistent predators, the ape guys can carry a grudge.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
Not finished with them yet!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from PATM
Review:
A great story of the good old days! Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [PATM] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated
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