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Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice work on this, I'm wondering if there will be a sequal?
Comments from author:
It's a work in progress... It's marked complete only because I don't know if there will ever be more after each little ficlet. But if there's more, it'll show up under this title. Thanks for the review!

CT.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from HananeELmokkadem
Review:
Awesome!!!!!!
This is so cool, and I'm so very happy you keep adding to this fanfic!! I hope you'll add something soon, its one of my favorites!
X Hanane
Comments from author:
Thanks! I mark it complete only because I don't know if there will actually be more after each ficlet. Super glad you like it and thanks so much for reviewing!

CT.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
That last paragraph was brilliant. Serves Bruce right, too. Incredibly gorgeous woman, who could snap him in two and has no inkling that she even affects him... priceless! And that just a short while after Dick was flirting with her.

I can well imagine Connor's reaction to her text as well. These are so delightfully evocative. I do hope more will be forthcoming.
Comments from author:
Hah! Thanks!!! Bruce can be such a dolt sometimes, apparently. ^.^ As for Dick, he was actually doing some recon for Bruce... Buffy just took it the wrong way.

Poor Conner, neh? Thanks for reviewing, and I'll try to get some more done. It *is* a rather enjoyable series to write for.

CT.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Hehehehe...love that Batman has a hard time keeping a lid on Bruce around Buffy. Even funnier that he didn't remember his offer to Buffy!
Comments from author:
Hee!!! Me too! Poor poor Bruciekins! Bruceykins? Anyway. Thanks for the review!!!

CT.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from Jaylynn
Review:
Oh that can be fun. Lol I wonder what the reactions from everyone would be if Buffy dated Batman. I can just picture Superboy complaining to Robin "My Biodad is Superman, My mom is the Queen Slayer and now my stepdad is freaking Batman! How am I supposed to have any fun now?"
Comments from author:
I scared my daughter because I laughed so loud and suddenly at this. Thanks so much for the review. *If* Buffy and Bruce turn into Buffy/Bruce, then i will definitely include Conner's take on the situation. Thanks again!

CT.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scintillating Conversation" from Greywizard
Review:
This entire series is fun.

Thanks for sharing it with us. ;-)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading! It *is* a blast to write and I'm glad that's coming across.

CT.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I get the feeling that the Wayne Foundation will set up a fostering fund to IWC to help wayward girls, as is their wont.

This, naturally, to free up resources so Buffy can do things for soon-to-be Connor Kent/Kon-El, as in a backhanded manner for Batman to pay that back child support...
Comments from author:
Bwahahahahahaha! You know, I hadn't considered that angle for child support payment. And I was trying to figure out how to get him to pay it anyway, too. I think I'll have to use that. With appropriate credit, of course. ^.^ So thanks for that and the review! What are your thoughts on how Buffy will react once she finds out exactly who is behind it all? Even if she doesn't find out that Bats is Bruce, it's not hard to connect the dots from the Wayne Foundation in Gotham to Batman of Gotham. In fact... hmmm... bunny bunny, hop on through!

CT.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning" from hellbells
Review:
Okay caught this late, but enjoyed reading the whole of it. I loved the fact that superboy realised that family is what you make of it, and that don't mean blood!
Comments from author:
Hee! Yay! It's always a great lesson to learn!

CT.
Review By [hellbells] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very very nice!
Comments from author:
Thanks! ^.^

CT.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [2 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning" from LadyHealer
Review:
Awsome! More please!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked! I have at least one more in this series planned for the Fic-A-Day, so you will (eventually) get your wish. Thanks for the review!

CT.
Review By [LadyHealer] • Date [1 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Superman Doesn't Matter" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Cool. In the context that YJ superman is already an OOC jerk for a long arc Buffy's response is appropriate. batman's dialog is awesome.

If Superman is hanging by the portal, I'd have him swoop and catch Buffy's dead body when it falls out of the lightshow. It going splat when the Scoobies are gathered underneath is needlessly traumatic and might cause resentment towards the capes. Good for Superboy, helping Dawn down.

In chapters 2&3 Dawn is an aunt/half-sister? Sweet. It'd be awesome if she found out on her birthday or something ;)
Comments from author:
I think I love you. Just from the first line alone. ^.^ Glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for the review!

CT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [26 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Support" from Cyberwere
Review:
Well, now. These were some very entertaining and enjoyable ficlets. Many thanks for writing them. Allow me to add my vote for continuing the second into an actual story.

I just finished watching the 1st season of YJ myself, and have to say that while Supes does get better in his treatment of his son, it's not by much in my opinion. I really do agree that the writers dropped the ball with their characterization of Big Blue in YJ, there were multiple avenues to create friction between the two without radically altering the character of one of the most iconic super-heroes in existence.

At any rate, again, a well written series of stories that hopefully get expanded. Thanks again
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! And if I do continue it, it won't be for a while yet. I've got the new BtVS/ST/DOOM cross as well as my House one I mean to complete before posting anymore chaptered stories. But it is DEFINITELY something I look forward to starting.

I agree! However, I am not THAT knowledgeable about the DC universe in general. So I was discussing the personality change with my mother, and apparently it DOES have some precedent. Supergirl was put into and left at an orphanage or something (according to my mum). There was some justification for it given, and it likely bothers us more than most as my maternal grandmother was left at an orphanage by her extended family (not uncommon in the Depression Era) when her folks died but her remaining family never once came to visit her (rather more uncommon) or anything. So... yeah. You can see where I equate his treatment of Conner with that precedent with Kara. But I agree with you that they could have done many other things to keep Supes from being a total dickwad.

Thanks for the review and I'm really glad you like it! If I come up with more ficlets (like Conner amongst the slayers), I'll put 'em up.

CT.
Review By [Cyberwere] • Date [15 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Support" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
Unlike raven's review before me i was eating and almost choked when i read that line.

i really like the second and third ficlets. the first was a good ficlet on it's own but i'm really starting to like the idea of superboy being Buffy's kid.

i hope you get around to making an actual story off these ficlets

Edit: please do. mmooch's who's the baby's daddy stories are always good
Comments from author:
I'm a really big fan of the whole 'Conception by Conspiracy' idea that someone got floating around, and this is as close as I could get to that in this universe. Although that's a thought, too. I wonder if I can talk mmooch into a 'Who's your baby's daddy?' series using the boring alters of the Heroes?

Anyway, thanks for the review! Glad you like it. ^.^

CT.
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [13 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Support" from bradsan
Review:
Darn the last chapter was short.

wish for more. Some parents are really jerks superhero my ass.

love it.
Comments from author:
Yeah. But it fit for what was asked for, you know? Much more would have made the simplicity of the request all convoluted and would have muddied up things.

As for that, yeah, some are. I don't really believe Clark falls into that, but in YJ he does, and that's what this is based off, so yeah. Asshat.

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

CT.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [12 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Support" from Mcspender
Review:
"A twitch could be seen on even the Stoic One's face... err, Batman, that is. And he made Buffy go from angry to grinning by tossing out a nonchalant, “I'll pay it for him.”"

Ladies and gentlemen: Bruce "The Batman"Wayne, mastering the art of being a magnificent Bastard since 1939 xD.
Comments from author:
So, do you think Batman being a Magnificent Bastard is what makes me like him so much? I mean, according to Rita Skeeter, "Everybody loves a rebel", so do you think that's it? I still don't know if I wanted him to be seen as offering help or being an utter bastard about it all (ala bros before hoes). I'd prefer the former, but the latter does lend itself to fun times as well. Thanks for the review!

CT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [11 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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