I'm not totally sure, but I think Spike broke Nikki's neck instead of draining her. Also, I had to cringe at the arrogance of the comment "tell Xander what it is he's fighting". Just little things I caught this time around...in my umpteenth rereading of this marvelous story!

I'm pretty sure he broke her neck, but I don't think it was ever shown if he then drained her *after* the flashback ended.

And yes, the SGC is sure Xander is fighting Goua'uld.

Really enjoyed this. The ending ties things up nicely, while leaving room for a sequel. That's really hard to do, and great to see.

I left room for about six possible sequels (count all the hooks!) but my muse isn't interested in writing any right now.

Love these type stories and this one is very well written. Also I love Lon long chapters. Thanks so much

Thanks for reading, and thanks for the Rec too!

Whoops--forgot to review when I read this! I'm glad I finally read the story, which I have been skipping over because of the title AND the summary (could imply that it is an X/T fic, which I'm not interested in).
A couple of things:
-Nice dynamic with Xander and Anise.
-Freakin' hilarious dialogue with the SG1 crew.
-This story has one of the few positive portrayals of Andrew that didn't suck.
-I feel bad for Jennifer, even though it's a self-imposed exile.

Thanks for the review. And Jennifer's hard to write, given that her portrayal in her few appearances wasn't exactly 'oh we love her, we want to see more!' There is, however, an awesome Stargate/Buffy crossover 'Potential' (IIRC) with Jennifer as the main character.

Couple of things.
-way to much chattyness "loose lips sink ships" and all that
- the scoobies are kinda reckless but it sorta fits but the stargate crew being that chatty with potentialy dangerous details is kinda silly
-when the stargate crew are checking xanders crap they kept going on about trinium, which is silly cuz they control the supply. Why would he have that?
-Xanders jokes arnt that funny
-when hes getting that exam he makes a few wise cracks and Suddenly evryone is snickering
-you also cant seem to shut up about how hes like jack with a joker and a serious side and for some reason that makes him dangerous
-NSAWC, which is an organization so secret that we couldn’t find anyone who could or would tell us what it stands for
-This dosnt seem to fit the whole military thing, somthing like unable to discover anything beyond the abreviation.
-also you do the thing where the author seems to forget that there are un named stargate personel who would do most of what you had SG1 doing
-also refering to the slayers as hok’tar is kinda weak, as far as they know the gould have nothing to do with them. If they were Hok'tar they would be a hell of a lot mor freaked as that means a gould has been running loose for god only knows how long running around geneticaly modifing people.

chap 28 sounds more like a amature detective than a military breifing

Xander gasped, “Damn! You guys are way too smart!”--he keeps repeating this, it sounds really stupid.

Those are more than a couple of things. :-) Thanks for being honest and letting me know where you think the weaknesses are. After all, it's not as if I'm William Shakespeare (who frankly wrote a few clunkers himself).

That said, the only explanation the SGC *could* have for someone like Vi is a hok'tar (or hok'taur if you prefer), because they have run into that, and they know Gouauld have gotten to Earth (and hung out on Earth) before. And the SGC doesn't control the trinium supply, they just control one access point for it, while other races have access as well.

Thanks for reviewing!

I just spent all night reading this fic even though I have a ton to do today. I loved it. I really hope you decide to do a sequel!

Thanks for reading, and commenting, and rec'ing! Well, there is a not-sequel going on right now, showing missing scenes from the story. And there might be sequels someday, because I left about six sequel hooks in various places in the story, but I'll have to wait until my muse beats me senseless (with a half-brick in a sock) with the concept. (She is definitely not subtle.)

Excellent story! It just proves that you aren't only good at Whateley stories. :)
Thank you for the sorely needed distraction.

Thank you.

"I believe this man is James Bond.”-Priceless

There are several lines in the story I really like. And that one just shows how smart Teal'c really is.

What an amazing story! I've read several of your pieces over the last couple of days and it's obvious that you have a talent for fanfic. I hope you keep writing!

I'm glad you liked it. Feel free to recommend it if you want. If you decide you really like my fanfic, you can go over to crystalhall.org and read my *fic*. I was asked to take over writing Phase, but Aquerna and Fractious are all mine.

I do hope there is a sequel. Odd as it may sound I can see Anise/Freya being a good match for Xander. I do hope you come back to this. Love to see Buffy on Atlantis with them kicking wraith all over the place. Well done.

Well, there is a not-a-sequel going on right now, with missing scenes. And there *might* be something afterward.

>Right now, I have no plan for a true sequel to this, although...

Oh come on, it would be a blast!

heheh

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Just re read it - even better than the first time :-)

Glad you enjoyed it. The 'Missing Scenes' story will run every other week for a while. And you can never predict what my muse Agatha might dream up when I least expect it.

No-sock, eh? :D

It's so hard to get Xander to be serious about stuff like that.

i have to leave in 20 mins to go to a concert i've been waiting months and months for...and i want to stay home on a friday night and finish reading this! :)
something to look forward to tonight i guess.
LOVE this story!

Thanks for reading and commenting. I hope you're not late to the concert. I hope it's someone really, really good in concert, like the Boston Philharmonic. Or Pink.

andrew is one of my faaaaavourite characters :)
it's hard finding fics where he's not the annoying scumbag they have to "put up with"

I know. But I wrote Andrew with maturity. And a girlfriend. He even gets a first person POV in the 'sequel'.

why do i find all the good/interesting stories at 1am?
can't wait to continue this in the later hours of the morning.

Thanks for reading. Sorry to be contributing to your insomnia. :-)